Date: June 07 2020 7:47 AM Title: Fight Night
I love this. The slow shrink to nothingness is amazing and humiliating. I love how she does it so nonchalantly. Would love to read more with this character.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Putting her in another fight would be repetitive, I think, but maybe I can think of something else ;)
[Report This]Date: June 06 2020 3:03 PM Title: Fight Night
What! That doesn't seem like they are in the same weight class at all. If I were the guy, I would demand we'd both be weighed again so here victory will be deemed invalid.
I think he should definitely do that. Let's see who is unbeaten champion then!
Thanks for writing and until next time!
Author's Response:
Sorry, pre-fight weigh-ins are official, and a rematch is impossible. Zero grams puts him significantly below any recognized weight class!
You're welcome, and thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: June 05 2020 11:03 PM Title: Fight Night
I wish every story could feature a confident woman slowly shrinking some unsuspecting victim to nothingness. Excellent writing!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I've used the idea of shrinking into nothing before, but this is the first time I've dedicated a whole short story to it.