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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27 2020 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

I truly enjoy your stories so much. You make them so realistic. A logical senario. It's so great to hear her thoughts as she looks for him. I loved the little home that she made for him.He is frightened and tiny. So proud of his escape, at least until she finds him. When you're tiny you lose your rights. You are basically worthless. Just another insect that gets stepped on. I really enjoyed this.
I still think that you should consider continuing the cigarette story. That woman needs another smoke as she terrorizes his world inside her ashtray.
Later,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Hello, Diesel. Thank you for still following my stories and for the kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed this story as well.

As for the one you mention, that was a one-shot; the problem with one-shots is you don't really feel an incentive to do anything more with them. But who knows, maybe I'll use the character in another story when I feel a need to. No promises, though.

Reviewer: Firestone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2020 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

wonderfully dark~ big people decide the fates of tinies for them, 'cause they're too little to choose for themselves! I can't wait to read more from you!



Author's Response:

Thank you, that is so nice to hear. : ) More coming soon, check out my other writings in the meantime. ; )

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