Date: May 25 2020 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 4 Out with the Old In with the New
I would have started with way less than a year just to see him proposing eg day=>year (or her punishing him for not doing so), but that's just my personal preference, not criticism.
Eric should really have had the presence of mind to say that something along the lines of, yes, he's going to be her footslave just please starting 5 minutes from now; not sure it would have worked, but his mother would have been certainly happy to find out how badly he wants her (maybe even proud he thought of that? nah...).
The way she phrased their future it looks like she won't bother telling him when she adds a year - I wonder if she'll keep track of them or not, 20+ years is a long time to remember a deadline that keeps changing...
(how on earth does he know the meaning of "clit"? :D )
I'm not sure which I want more between 1. her laying down the rules, or 2. explaining them one at a time as he breaks them...
Oh, no, the poor widow!
Sorry for all the rambling :D
Author's Response:
Eric doesn't know the meaning of "Clit" but that was the part of her body she was pressing into his face when she told him to kiss it so he assumed.
She definately wont keep track of his punishment. For her the number is arbitrary and she will keep him there untill she doesn't want him there anymore. She only went with the extremely large sentence because she liked to see the emotional distress it was causing him and when he was willing to say "5 years" to impress her she felt she would have to push him much further to instill the desired amont of dread in him.
Also, they aren't really aging at all and I thought it would be interseting to see society change around Erin over very long periods of time so that when she eventually does let Eric off the hook, the world he knew wouldn't really exist any more. By the end of this story hundreds, maybe thousands of years will have gone by.
As far as the rules are concerned, there aren't any. So whenever he displays behavier that she would like to alter, she would just make up a rule on the sopt and use it as an excuse to further dominate him both emotionally and physically.
Also sorry about any punctuation, spelling or capitalisation errors. I can't seem to get any kind of spell check to work on this site and proof reading was taking forever and I thought it was better to just get the story up for people to read and go back and fix it later. eventually I'll go through and correct errors.
I just hope that people who enjoy these aspects of this fetish enjoy the story and hopefully I will have another chapter up soon.
Date: May 25 2020 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 1 Erin
I nearly forgot - having no idea about the science was also great! And btw I'm kinda surprised she settled for a boy, she must REALLY dislike having sex with her husband :D
Date: May 25 2020 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 3 A Mother's Love
Good to see the comet was good for her marriage, but I can't help wondering about her mother's marriage tbh; although with how oblivious she can be I wonder if she knows he loves their current arrangement or she's just annoyed about the, ehm, "power" he now has over her...
The moment she realizes that she never told Eric about his father is imho the best part so far! (unless she finds out WHEN he shrunk)
[Report This]Date: May 25 2020 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 1 Erin
Don't tell me you lost your account? Look up "password manager" dammit ;p
For real now, it's great to have you back!
Capitalization is a bit weird here (I understand "Mother", but "Father" or "Valued"?); her first move and kissing the bride are priceless.