Date: May 15 2020 5:20 PM Title: A Pilot, of sorts
Great story, the characters felt genuine and the way you wrote the last chapter was astounding. Also nice to see some representation, helps to keep things fresh. I realise this project is probably dead, I'm just here to pay my respects.
Date: May 05 2020 8:52 PM Title: Sorry!
Great chapter. Hebe's relationship with those two has certainly changed but they seem to be into it. Lots of potential there. I loved the mouthplay scene.
Date: May 04 2020 11:10 AM Title: Sorry!
Screw Q
Elaine/Sarah/Hebe seems like a great relationship to go forward and explore.
Great chapter here, looking forward to more ( also Hebe is lucky to have been included and sandwiched between their bodies, and get up close and personal with Sarah's big feet )
Author's Response:
thanks for the review! i do intend to elaborate at least a little more on Q and Hebe's relationship, but I have a lot of relationship dynamics i want to explore so it won't be for the entire story.
[Report This]Date: April 21 2020 5:23 PM Title: A Pilot, of sorts
Nice story you have here, like the interactions between characters. I only don’t understand why hebe is called ‘they’ as it was confusing at first.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Hebe is nonbinary, and their pronouns are they/them. I haven't seen any nonbinary representation in pretty much any G/t media, so I opted to give it a shot. I understand it can be confusing at first, but I'm doing my best to make it easy to distinguish, and I think it will get easier as you get used to it.
There will also be chapters that explore Hebe's identity more in-depth in the future that might clear things up, though I don't know exactly where or when I want it to happen yet.
Date: April 20 2020 10:54 PM Title: Rose's plaything
Foot stuff isn't really my favorite but I'm glad to see that one of Hebe's classmates has mischief on her mind. Lots of fun scenarios can come from that.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I get it, it's not for everyone, I just had a particular itch for this chapter. Won't lie, it's likely to occur at least a few more times simply based on my preferences, but i have many non foot-focused encounters in the works.
Date: April 19 2020 1:38 AM Title: A Pilot, of sorts
Good start so far. This is one of my favorite sub-genres, a naturally tiny person trying to live their life. The non-binary protagonist is a unique touch. I'm interested to see where this goes.