[Report This]Date: July 23 2024 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great ideas and execution (pun intended)! Sounds more like he was 3cm instead of 3in. 3in is probably a little too big to swallow whole.
Date: July 06 2012 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this, I would love to be your next tiny victim.
[Report This]Date: February 28 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
The Donald Trump and Brad pitt Analogy got quite a laugh out of me, Another Great story Girlfood
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it Mrchunks. Thanks for the review and the rating!
Date: September 29 2009 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ooooh i love this story you really are very good at depicting how a woman feels about this erotic subject,i imagine being her when i read this.She acts similar to the way i feel all the time,i look forward to reading your next story Girlfood x.
Amanda.
Author's Response: Thank you so much Amanda! I look forward to your next work as well.
[Report This]Date: December 04 2008 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
What a great story this really pushed all of my buttons,i look forward to reading more of your work.
Author's Response: thank you kindly.
[Report This]Date: March 12 2008 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
I have to say that this is one of the best stories I have read in this genre (and it is my fav. genre!)
I like the orientation in the predator, and the hunger you express for her. It's also a very good length.
The only hitch, I suppose, is that George goes down because of an involuntary reflex, rather than the act of desire on her part. Sure, she was likely to do it anyway, but I much prefer the vore where the swallower is in full control and is fully knowledgeable about what she is doing.
Author's Response: i appreciate you constructive criticism with the reflex. She was indeed planning to swallow the man, the reflex just sped things up. thank you for the review and the rating:)
Date: March 10 2008 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
A very good yarn, GF, especially with the angle of Lindsay narrating. I also admired the subtleness of her sexual excitement as her friend/victim slowly expires in her belly/stomach. I really enjoyed it! Thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks. I thought it would be hard to put myself in the "predator" frame of mind so I went with her slowly discovering and even fighting her impulses until the last moment. It was easier to write than I expected. Thanks for the review bud.
[Report This]Date: March 09 2008 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good story, Girlfood. There's something really appealing in the idea of the predator being a trusted friend of the unsuspecting prey until the moment of thruth.
Author's Response: I agree completely. As long as it's not a family member I am into the unsuspecting person being eaten by a trusted friend.