[Report This]Date: April 06 2020 10:01 PM Title: Introduction
Best I've seen in a while
[Report This]Date: April 01 2020 2:56 PM Title: Ian, Three Inches
Hello! I just wanted to say that I really like this story a lot: it's written pretty well (which sounds like a trivial thing to say, but sadly more than half of the stories I've found on this site aren't written well), and most importantly, it reads like a real story about real characters—you know, it's more like a normal short story you could have found anywhere else and that just happens to have some macro/micro elements in it, something that you would have never guessed was a fetish story if not for all the NSFW scenes that are present in every chapter and that are basically what the whole plot is built upon.
This is just a general comment on this story, but there are of course lots of other little details that make me love it so much: the fact it's mainly episodic, so there's always something new to explore; the fact you found a pretty good in-universe reason to go directly to the point with every new chapter so you can write less but without making the whole thing look cheap; and finally the fact you're exploring lots of different sizes, which is always a good thing especially as the tinies get smaller and smaller.
I'm commenting here because I found this third chapter to be super funny and entertaining, with the girl literally having to jump on her bed to get that tiny guy out and finally throw him out of her room because of his behavior. In fact, I liked it so much that I decided to draw a quick sketch representing a scene from this chapter! You can find it on my website (link to the picture)—this is Kelly keeping Ian in her fist right before disposing of him: I based her character design on what I found in the story ("She had big brown eyes and a toothy smile, and straight shoulder length hair that she'd dyed blonde"), but there's always a (pretty big) chance she still looks much different from the image of her you have in mind, in which case feel free to tell me what I got wrong so I'll get it right next time should I decide to draw her again!
Either way, like I said, this story is awesome: so keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Wow, this is an awesome review, thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! I've never seen anyone make art based on one of my stories before and I'm beyond flattered. I checked out your sketch (It's amazing, by the way, and I'm really enjoying the rest of your art), and I think you captured Kelly's appearance perfectly. I'd love to see any more art you create based on my stories, thank you!
[Report This]Date: March 28 2020 5:39 PM Title: Introduction
Well this is certainly a funny idea. I really liked it. The writing was short and sweet and to the point. Keep up the goog work!
Author's Response: I'm really glad you like it! Thank you, I really try to get right to the action and I'm glad that works for some people.
[Report This]Date: March 28 2020 4:25 PM Title: Mike, Six Inches
Great sstuff
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: March 28 2020 7:01 AM Title: Introduction
interesting story.
please more.
Author's Response: There's still a few chapters left, thank you for reading!
[Report This]Date: March 27 2020 3:38 PM Title: Introduction
Very promissing! Look forward to your next chapter!
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it, thanks for reading!