[Report This]Date: March 08 2008 11:25 AM Title: Emotions Overflow
Hmm! Sayuko apparently dyes her red, just as Ray dyes his green. But, there, the similarity ends!
The former is plainly a gentle soul. While it's equally plain that Ray is some kind of Goth sadist, who delights in the power of being Bruce's second-in-command. With his penchant for deviousness, however, I have to wonder how much longer he can be satisfied not being numero uno!
Sorry, if you find these last two reviews long-winded. But, I tend to get that way when I'm ultra-serious about stories I really like.
[Report This]Date: March 08 2008 11:14 AM Title: Sunset
Wow! Two more chapters, in relatively short order. No pun intended.
As for the mysterious something Bruce was talking about? I will take a wild guess that it's a re-enlargement device that he plans to steal. Not only to un-shrink himself. But, to literally become a giant among normal-sized people!
Because, personally; he strikes me as being a Malcolm X wanna-be.
[Report This]Date: March 04 2008 12:00 AM Title: Tests of Pain
You have to try harder in order to be "violent" :D
Keep at it, you're not going too far in violence, in fact, it's not violent enough. The only thing more violent, shocking and scary to me is that bunny rabbit at the end of Doom. You know, where his head is on a pike in front of that mountain... that was scary.
Anyway, so what might be described here is shocking or violent, but I still think nothing beats that rabbit. Keep at it with the violence and don't think you're going too far
[Report This]Date: March 03 2008 1:38 PM Title: Tests of Pain
Well, maybe not. If nothing else, you reminded us that the enemy of one's enemy is NOT ALWAYS a friend.
And, that one person's "harmless mischief" is another person's needlessly cruel and inhuman torture.
[Report This]Date: March 03 2008 12:56 AM Title: Lucky Day
You could try and appease everyone here by dabbling into other categories, but you should try and stick with what you like and enjoy and keep it throughout the story.
So if you're a foot person, keep a main focus or a complete focus on feet. You can alienate everyone by trying to keep a mix of themes (and seriously, when I see a Foot and Insertion story, the author always seems to focus too much on the feet part)
Oh and as for the story, good job with it, but you could lay off the copyright stuff. It's not like Nintendo or Sony has the time to send in men in black baclavas to arrest you for not copyrighting their brand name.
[Report This]Date: March 01 2008 5:59 PM Title: Refugees
I don't know why. But, this Melissa clearly has some issues.
Bring on chapter 4! :-)
Author's Response: lol yeah. I'm going to give her more of a background story in a later chapter, but for now, she'd just crazy. XD
[Report This]Date: March 01 2008 1:16 PM Title: Refugees
Dude, Your story ROCKS! It's just plain awesome! The story is awesome and is balanced with awesome gts play. Foot, butt, hand cruel everytihing! THIS IS GREAT :D
Author's Response:
Thanks. :)
I'm more of a foot guy, but I'm trying to add in a mix of things into this story to please the readers. XD
[Report This]Date: February 28 2008 2:58 PM Title: Hell Hath No Fury
Hmmm! Factions among the prisoners, huh? I am definitely gonna tune in for chapter 3.
[Report This]Date: February 27 2008 9:38 AM Title: Lucky Day
Heh! Looks like Melissa is the one who will be doing the "picking up."