[Report This]Date: May 14 2023 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
promoting slavery?
[Report This]Date: October 17 2021 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is my favorite story of all time so it was a pleasant surprise when I came back for a re-read to see that this got an update. I hope you decide to do more with this setting/pair, I love it.
Date: June 24 2021 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 4
Quite an unexpected addition to the story, both in terms of content and the fact it actually happened.
When the adventure began, I immediately became invested in the story and hoped for a nice slow burner with dynamic relashionships and rich worldbuilding -- the setup was perfect. Then it abruptly came to an end, one that felt rushed and brought nothing new to the characters and an overall sense of misery. As I belive the storyline should not be influenced by anyone but the Author themselves, I grudgingly accepted the sad reality and moved on (especially having in mind your declaration concerning the length of the story).
The new chapter (epilogue part 2?) is in a way frustrating: the story is oficially over, yet some of Sona's actions indicate her attitude towards Florina is changing ever so slightly. These two have great chemistry and it just seems so wasteful to leave things the way they currently are. A new story featuring them could be an idea worth exploring.
Best regards,
C
Author's Response:
It was unexpected to have written them haha. As for the rest, yeah I can understand being disappointed there. Wasn't something I was intending to do long form. Set out with an idea in mind and then executed it. Kinda knew it wouldn't be most folk's cup of tea just due to the premise itself. Still, I'm pleased it was enough that you would want more of as that at least tells me there is something good about it!
Date: June 21 2021 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Giant women are really just applied power wankery when you boil it all down. Its always fun to read a story where you can see a way things could have gone into a normal good story about two people making each other grow, and the tasty despair of how the power difference makes that absolutely impossible. Its like big steppies on the concept of narrative itself
Author's Response:
Agreed, power difference is the bestest. And yes, it was indeed intended for an equal happy relationship to be impossible from the outset just based on the differences between the two. Always delightful to write.
[Report This]Date: November 23 2020 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 2
Gotta agree with sandman what a ungrateful person Sona is, not learning a little humility while being saved by Flo not even caring for the humans she killed or will kill. But this might also be the only way Sona knows how to be greatful by making Flo her property she can make sure Flo cant get hurt or die trying to keep her safe but wonder how long that will last or if Sona will learn more from Flo by being together now.
Great writing was hooked, wouldnt mind another chapter if possible.
Author's Response:
Surprised people still read some of my older stuff, but happy to hear you liked it! Yeah, the point here was more or less that the folks like Sona are immature brats. Which makes the size, in my opinion, a bit more just terribly unfair when some brat can just do what she wants.
Date: March 20 2020 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hmm, a bitter tasting ending. I guess we can't always expect characters experiencing self reflection to end up growing at the end of it. Little human saved your life and made you evaluate your opinion of them for a time? But she said mean words to you? Better report her and have her rights stripped and turned into your prisoner/plaything. Quite the ego on the big lass. I'm interested in seeing if a sequel chapter down the road comes out showing what's become of Florina down the road, if Sona has developed a mean streak or delivers a more then meets the eye surprise.
Date: March 20 2020 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic so far, also loving the 40k references in the beginning
Author's Response:
They are quite transparent yes haha, is actually a setting we used as an RP setting and that setting was based pretty heavily on 40k. Happy you enjoyed.
[Report This]Date: March 19 2020 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Lovely start! I enjoy the world, as well as seeing Flo's spunky attitude as well as the dynamic she and Sona are building. Thanks again for a wonderful story!
Author's Response:
You are very welcome, thanks for leaving a review!