Date: March 18 2020 10:51 AM Title: Staying In
Looks like a successful first date to me. But then again, what do I know about dating?
I always like how the giantesses in your story almost never admit the other party is shrinking and just act like it's normal and give impossible tasks.
Thank you for writing and until next time!
Author's Response:
Of course it's normal, they're the ones who arranged the whole thing! If the guy wasn't shrinking, then they'd be worried.
And thank you for reviewing!
Date: March 17 2020 5:29 PM Title: Staying In
Hm, I really love this. It's light on numerical measurements but the sheer FEELING of scale and that quick loss in power of the protagonist is so heavy I can almost taste it. It's such a strong atmosphere. The shoelace bit was nice, and the ending is just absolutely n i c e. I liked how Cassidy in the end really did mean everything she said, flipping the tone from cruel sadism to lovesick obsession was a nice subversion that I can always appreciate. You should do more nano content, you have a talent for it!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Every now and then I do like to change it up so shrinking isn't just an act of total cruelty, but because she's that obsessed with him. And I enjoy writing nano stuff, almost as much as I do micro, so you'll definitely see more from me in the future.