[Report This]Date: March 19 2020 10:35 AM Title: Special Delivery
This was a really cool story!
I liked how even if the tiny people were discovered, they could still be at risk due to the nature of the work.
And the action was intense and highlighted just how dangerous being at that small of a size could be.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Nano action has some very unique challenges, since everything's on a vastly different scale. I'm glad everything landed in the story, including how they had to choose between getting killed by accident or whatever would happen if they got caught (I like to imagine they'd get put on some flypaper before questioning).
[Report This]Date: March 16 2020 7:45 AM Title: Special Delivery
Spectacular. I love nano unawares stuff like this. The one getting stuck to the saliva covered pen life was glorious. Would like to see more of one getting sucked into her nose, trapped under her nails, or stuck in the treads of her shoe.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I really like nano stuff too, and it's a great challenge of perspective. I predict more nano stuff in the future, and it's bound to hit some of those other endings.
[Report This]Date: March 16 2020 4:48 AM Title: Special Delivery
Finally another story from you! Thank you for that!
The only real sad thing in this story is that the boss didn't get shrunk and ended up under this girl.
These tinies must have been reeaaally small for the girl not to see them. Or maybe they were simply not important enough to warrant her attention.
Seems like these guys really got crushed by the competition. Ha.
Thank you for writing and until next time?!
Author's Response:
That's how it is with bosses, the employees take the risk while they sit back in the office.
I don't want to give exact numbers, but they were REALLY small, like a millimeter might be generous.
You're welcome, and thank you for reviewing!