Date: February 24 2008 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm not saying anything about the person or your preferences. Nothing wrong though either way.
I've now read this chapter
My opinion of the story though is mixed, because the same idea I like I also dislike at the same time... I have this thing for the wacky and strange, but then my reality check comes in and other things which change my opinion
Date: February 24 2008 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 2
The site does need more stories, but you shouldn't fulfill the requirements by posting each chapter as a different story.
I have read part one, and it seems to be just like Chozo's story, except you changed the protagonists. I dunno how I can say my opinion of the story nicely. I mean, my opinion of it is a mixed bag. I like some parts, don't like others and others are neutral, so I dunno...
Author's Response: Okay, Stylesrj, fair enough. I can guess what you refer to - the shemale. I can tell you, tho; in my fantasies I would rather be inserted in a shemale's masculine appendage than that of a normal male's - especially as she/he is beautiful; but ONLY if that creature IS beautiful. I'm not queer at all, but seeing gorgeous shemales excites me tremendously. Anyway, many thanks for your response. I've taken note of your advice about chapters, but I did put "Chapter one and two" for the two parts. I thought that was mandatory.
Date: February 23 2008 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 2
What I mean by is that you take this story and put it as Chapter 2 of the previous story. I know this site needs more stories, but quality is better than quantity
Author's Response:
Dear Stylesrj, Am still mystified; also by your remark - 'quality is better than quantity.' Does that mean you are unhappy with it? I would like your comments whichever way you see it.
Banfield.
p.s. How about you, chozo....anything to say?
Date: February 23 2008 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 2
Awfully sorry but I can't understand what you mean, unless you mean I should simply join the 2 chapters and post it as a complete story, i.e. a single chapter. Anyway, thanks for your advice.
Date: February 22 2008 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
Just an idea: You could put both stories into one and use the chapter system. I mean, it is there for a reason :)