[Report This]Date: September 12 2020 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 1: Meet the crew
Requesting some gentle Chloe arc. I wanna know more about her. And hopefully she isnt a killer like Laura and Rachel (gentle? Really?)
I prefer gentle character building over mindless violence.
So chloe please. With one of the exchange boys. Sweet bonding.
Keep it up. And I do hope the guys can help Laura and Rachel to stop killing people.
Author's Response:
Well, i described Rachel as gentle because that's the impression the tiny guys have of her.
Moreover, i like to consider the normal Rachel and the... thing constantly hungry for blood and mayhem as two different entities sharing the same body.
I'll elaborate on it later, don't worry if it sounds confusing right now.
I'm happy you're liking it! Thank you for the feedback!
Date: September 11 2020 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 10: Regret and Recall
Push on the button " Next". By the way are you french ?
Author's Response:
No, i'm Italian. Did my terrible grammar sell me out? ;)
[Report This]Date: September 11 2020 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 10: Regret and Recall
I swear, every story on here I read to fap off to, I just get too engrossed in it to get aroused. That's not a bad thing. I have wondered what the consequences for females in a universe where all the males shrank would be, but never thought about it to hard. I also like how you portray the fact that, despite an estimated forty thousand years of sapience, humans are pretty much still slaves to the estimated 600 million years of basic sexual desires, thanks to evolution. Sure, we may not like it, but, it is nigh-impossible to fight it.
Author's Response:
I'm not sure if smut that doesn't get you aroused can actually be considered a good thing but thanks anyway lol
Thanks for the thought! I'm no psychologist, but i like to imagine some "what ifs" sometimes
Date: September 11 2020 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 10: Regret and Recall
This was a really good chapter. Cant wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I just posted the conclusion of this "narrative arc", let me know what you think of it!
Date: September 11 2020 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 1: Meet the crew
Do not disappear again ç_ç
Author's Response:
I'll do my best <3
Date: March 09 2020 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 7: Girly stuff
Took a while to get to the juicy part, but it was absolutely worth it. This story is quickly becoming one of my favorites!
[Report This]Date: March 05 2020 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 7: Girly stuff
Well...that was...unpleasant...I do hope she gets help and will she feel more depressed and shameful? ....and why does the sister want them??? Is she gonna experiment with her foot like she did with will? To see if they are scared? Danm....this story went from fun to depressing....I hope it gets better and the rest of the girls stay strong.....
And I really hope Rachel gets help. Maybe shell fall In love with one of the guys and she goes to therapy? But then she might go to prison? I just hope the 4 amigos can help these girls.....
Not my favorite chapter so far but it was well written.
[Report This]Date: March 05 2020 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 6: Chill and Chips
This story is awesome man! These girls genuinely like these 4 amigos. And the interactions are amazing!
Maybe some gentle boob action soon?
And I'm guessing that that box has some tinys in it that it's not going to end well for them....I wonder if the friendship/romance with the guys will help these girls to become better? Heres hoping.
Looking forward to more.
P.s. sorry I'm commenting so much it's just been a while I've found a story I really enjoy.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
I'm enjoying writing this story as well, i'm still trying to keep the interactions interesting and realistic.
At the moment i'm pretty happy with the result, however i'm having some issues for when the tinies will discover the questionable pastimes of the other girls.
Ps. Don't worry, i'm happy to receive feedback, keep them coming!
Date: March 04 2020 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 6: Chill and Chips
This story is really great, I love the backstory elements and the slow introduction of the fetish content.
Great so far and im looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you, i was actually worried that it was taking a bit too long to get to the juicy part, but now i'm happy i didn't rush it.
Date: March 04 2020 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 1: Meet the crew
Oh wow this chapter was so funny xD At the end of the day Will is left with a "what the fuck did just happen", but I think also Laura realized she behaved akwardly odd. To a tiny who didn't grow up in the slums is unimaginable what big girls can do with their feet.
[Report This]Date: March 03 2020 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 5: Grand Blue
Loving this story, really enjoyed the "test" Laura put Will through as well. I look forward to seeing where this story goes.
[Report This]Date: March 02 2020 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meet the crew
Oh I'm liking this more and more. I hope that are all good Giantessess.
And at least a couple of our lads survive.
The girls dont seem to bad...at least they are guilty about there parts...will they do the right thing? I hope so.
Excellent read so far mate keep it up!
Date: March 02 2020 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 1: Meet the crew
Oh oh oh this story is amazing so far. If at any point you decide to abandon it let me know and I might go ish it for you, I have trouble finishing stories as well so I get it. This is amazing though and I can't wait to see how laura and our protagonist turn out
Author's Response:
Thank you! I don't think i'll actually abandon it, the worst that could happen would be to put it on hold like my other stories.
Thank you for the offer though!
Date: March 02 2020 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 1: Meet the crew
Boys, boys. They're deep in the sheep-clothed wolf's lair.
Date: March 01 2020 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 3: Meet Alexis and Laura
I came across this story yesterday and have loved it, keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing more!
[Report This]Date: February 29 2020 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 1: Meet the crew
I love this idea. I do hope there are some kind and gentle romance and our MC gets the girl and keeps his life. I'm pretty sure the other 3 wont get to share the same fate.
Will there be death in this story?
Excellent world building so far Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Well i don't want to spoil anything but i plan on cramming some romance in here, but unfortunately not right away.
Yes, there will be