[Report This]Date: June 22 2020 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 16: Drunk
And we are nearly upon it, the moment of truth; where we see if, in the aftermath of this little orgy, Blair truly cares for her or not.
[Report This]Date: June 11 2020 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
Great stuff. Blair's arc is very refreshing as she becomes more sympathetic over time, as opposed to the usual opposite.
[Report This]Date: June 04 2020 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
Very good story.
[Report This]Date: May 30 2020 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 12: Homework
Blair is struggling with her feelings. Obviously she likes dominating her, likes the fear response. But she's also obviously enamored with her, is starting to feel guilty about hurting her.
I feel like an epiphany moment is coming. She's going to do something that truly causes Pixie lasting harm, and we'll get to see how she really feels.
Date: May 30 2020 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 12: Homework
This is gonna end bad isn’t it? Is pixie gonna die by Blair’s hands or is she gonna wish she was dead?
[Report This]Date: May 21 2020 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 10: Cake
One of my favorite stories on this site atm keep up the good work!
Btw does Blair know that Daisy is living in an orphanage?
Date: May 20 2020 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
Loving this story. It's clear that Blair does actually care about Daisy, despite everything.
I hope it remains just the two of them though. Three's a crowd after all.
[Report This]Date: May 16 2020 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 9: Hunger
I wonder what would have happened if it was Pixie to shrink the bully, but destiny is always cruel to the weak
[Report This]Date: April 26 2020 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
One of the better stories currently in development and despite (or maybe due to?) a simple seting, an endearing one.
Setting aside the homemade shrink ray gun built by a self-taught orphan girl in spare time within a few days (I know the story is not about "how", but rather the event's implications. This kind of deus ex machina is, however, as cliche as they come...) nonsense, the story is actually pretty amazing. The writing is rich yet concise, the characters have true chemistry and the emotions, the tension! You got me hooked.
9/10, as overused plot designs have to carry some negative weight.
Best regards,
C
[Report This]Date: April 25 2020 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 8: Search
The plot thickens.
[Report This]Date: April 23 2020 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 7: Broken
Blair is wonderful
[Report This]Date: April 10 2020 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
This is a pretty unique story so far. I don't often see a dynamic like this where both parties involved have some level of interest in each other, even if it's subconscious to start with. I think the way you're showing it off its pretty accurate given how both Blair and Pixie are acting.
I hope you'll do more sweat play. It's pretty rare to see people try to write it, but for me, that was the best part when it came to later chapters.
I also think that how you started this story off was pretty well thought out. Building up both girls before any shrinking was introduced was a good idea, and it highlights their emotions afterward.
Hopefully, you'll update it again soon. Not a lot of stories on here have been keeping my interest like yours lately.
[Report This]Date: April 06 2020 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 5: New situation
Tremendous, Blair just helped her realize her desires.
[Report This]Date: March 09 2020 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 4: The Shrink Gun
Loving this story, thank you. Can't wait for Daisy to be the size of a bug at Blair's feet, giving her even more power over her. The verbal domination is great, and would love this to develop into Blair turning herself into Daisy's religion, becoming her deity.
[Report This]Date: March 08 2020 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 4: The Shrink Gun
Love Blairs confidence and how she got the gun from Daisy.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: March 02 2020 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
I hope you continue, really good so far :)
[Report This]Date: February 16 2020 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
Cant wait for more.
Date: February 15 2020 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 1: Another bad day
What a great start! I can't wait for more