Reviews For My New Life
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Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 26 2023 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 7: A Day filled with Discoveries

Great story, zephilia. I only wish that you had completed it. 

Reviewer: nevermore Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28 2020 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 7: A Day filled with Discoveries

Why do authors always stop at the important part then take forever to write any more,why start until its finished. 

Reviewer: Corzime Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27 2020 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 7: A Day filled with Discoveries

This is an amazing story and I can't wait to read the next chapter!!

Reviewer: Max333 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2020 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Incident

Great story ! Keep it up :D

Love the cruelty haha 

Reviewer: Tays0123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 23 2020 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Incident

Great story, I loved chapter 4. Please tell me you are continuing the story?!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the comment and rating. I am going to continue the story, just got caught up in life. I am gald you are enjoying the story.

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2020 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Incident

I’m thinking the mother’s girl friend is going to encourage the family to treat him like a toy. Please tell me the mothers gf will buttcrush him and fart on him! That would be perfect lol
I also hope this doesn’t end anytime soon!

Author's Response:

There will be a mixture of everything. I plan for this to be a long, long story. I hope I can keep you entertained.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. There will be a mixture of everything. I plan for this to be a long, long story. I hope I can keep you entertained.

Reviewer: LaChocola Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2020 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 3: The Date

Got a handful of typos and grammar mistake in this one. Seems Joe suddenly turned into Mike, lol. But pretty good other than that, and excited to see where it goes. Just maybe have some spellchecking and proofreading before posting. As hot as its starting to get, seeing names suddenly change and grammar mistakes can break the immersion and make it less cohesive imo.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review and catch. I have fixed these errors and hope I can meet your expectations.

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2020 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Incident

More more!!! Dear god please more! Can’t wait for booty content and everything. Keep it long and detailed!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. This story will have it all and i will try to lengthen the next chapters.

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