Giving people as Christmas gifts, god I love your universe.

Also nice to see Mrs. Park getting in on it and can always use more Rach down the road.

Alex seems like a stand up gal but I sense something more behind her and Ethan's interest in Grace etc.

I love this story so much. It's very well written with a great mix of Male and Female content from all sizes. I can tell you have a big penchant for feet both bare and with shoes on, hence your attention to detail in those scenes. Honestly, I don't have much hope for Ava and I'm kind of looking forward to when she's face to face with all the things she used to subject Scott to, all while hoping she somehow gets rescued eventually, if that makes sense.

Anyway, thank you for sharing this with us!

I have really been enjoying reading this story. Overall, i really like the Ava character the best. I like how she is such a flawed character. She has done some horrible things to scott and other people. However, she was liked to by her parents or led to believe something that wasn't true. She has had rumors made up about her. She was more just following what is considered a societal norm then truly doing anything bad to Scott which is interesting. 

So to see her go down this path and explore how the other half lives is really interesting. I find it the most interesting chapters are the ones with her and seeing how this will unfold. 

I do like the scott chapters as well. But I feel his character isn't in some ways as fleshed out as Ava even though he has had more time. He is a victim as he was diseased and shrunk. However, I feel like i don't know him as a person as well as Ava. There isn't as much to relate to with Scott.

Overall, I have been reading your story for a few weeks now and definately look forward to my lunch break on friday. As the new chapter always seems to be posted when i head to lunch. Keep up the great work. Looking forward to your future installments. 

Not sure if the jumping for a fry scene was based on one of my renders or just coincidence but you really brought it to life. Love it.

Great stuff, curious to see where it goes.

Ah, this explains the line in the summary about getting ahead in life. Here's hoping Scott's catching his lasting lucky break.

This is the best chapter I've read in years. Love the description of the girls and the different perspectives Ava has from being shrunk. 

I was bummed Ava shrank but learning to love Grace and her clique.

Honestly she deserves EVERY second of this torment and more. It sounds like her current tormentors are saints compared to how she was! At least they didn't just kill her even though she did as they asked.