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Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2024 10:44 AM Title: Lunch Break

That was a nice, fun short story. Quite enjoyed the banter and the casualness of the protagonist.

Reviewer: zaneofbane Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2024 8:34 PM Title: Lunch Break

2 in less than a month? You spoil us XD

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Date: December 08 2024 7:14 PM Title: Vegetarian Baking

Glad to see you back in action! I love the idea that vore is vegetarian (it's at least low-carbon, right?). The thing that I enjoy about your writing is the effort that you go to in descriptions. You put the work in setting the scene and that pays off.

Reviewer: Fizzisop Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2024 9:16 AM Title: Vegetarian Baking

Love to see a new story from you, amazing as always! Love the casual descriptions of such a terrifying scenario, the use of the word 'crispy' was fantastic. I've always thought that more detailed and complicated cooking scenarios with tinies was very underrated since vore almost always focuses on just the eating/swallowing part. 

Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2024 8:56 AM Title: Vegetarian Baking

Very good chapter. Made my day to see this new chapter. Your writing is as good as ever, very descriptive details and the POV of the shrinky pulls readers right in. Nice little tale of the naughty baker. You probably don't want to invest the time, but you could actually do little spin-offs of this story for the people Eva shrinks down. (ie - Eva's Baking Recruits)

Reviewer: legab Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2024 4:42 AM Title: The Photo Shoot

Welcome back!


Chances we see only shrinks continue?



Author's Response:

Chances are that'll be the next thing I put up!

Reviewer: Gunter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2024 8:05 PM Title: Vegetarian Baking

Hey good to see you back! Was certainly a nice surprise seeing this update, almost on time for Christmas too.

New chapter was great, it's makes it funny when there's some cognitive dissonance that makes them think there's nothing wrong with what they're doing.

Reviewer: zaneofbane Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2024 7:53 PM Title: Vegetarian Baking

I'm glad you're back.

I'd be interested in commissioning a story from you. If you're interested, you can message me on Eka's portal under the same username.

Reviewer: zaneofbane Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 27 2024 8:54 AM Title: Going Out to Eat

If you're having writer's block, I suggest an "Appreciation Piece" for another artist who's work you enjoy. I've done a few myself. It breaks me out of a rut by making me try something new.

Reviewer: Justhereforamoment1 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2023 6:55 PM Title: What They're For

I'd love if there was an all girls version of this! Maybe Todd's sister?

Reviewer: MrD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2023 10:14 PM Title: What They're For

Love seeing the other friend step in and do what needs to be done!

Reviewer: Yougts Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2023 6:26 PM Title: The Photo Shoot

So glad you're writing again! Great story! 

Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2023 8:45 AM Title: What They're For

Wow, that was a fantastic chapter. Love the callous cruelty and wanton desire of Tina and the gradual breakdown of Evi’s resistance. One very minor nitpick - didn’t care for the broken limb when swallowing, but that’s just me. It’s the difference between a 10 and 10+ rating. One of your best stories and well paced.

Reviewer: hava Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02 2023 5:40 AM Title: What They're For

fantastic story!

Reviewer: MrD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2023 3:11 AM Title: Afterparty

Always enjoyable!

Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2023 9:26 PM Title: House Party

Another great chapter. Loved the unaware prey angle. Why would anyone who writes as well as you retire? 😉

Reviewer: kbDArt Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 19 2022 9:40 PM Title: Just a Random Shrinky

Very hot; I think it would have been better if Anna had swallowed Elliot instead of his mom, who asked again about the tiny, only to be told by her "oh, just some random shrinky". (saving this great line for the end of the story instead of 3/4 of the way through.

Reviewer: MrD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2022 12:03 AM Title: Sarah Unleashed

Gotta love a magic/intelligent item story that pushes someone to greater and greater acts of depravity!

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Date: August 19 2022 4:40 PM Title: Friday the Fourteenth

Haha! There will need to be a sequel set in space! Loved it!

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 19 2022 10:01 AM Title: Friday the Fourteenth

This was a great chapter, nice twist on the classic slasher tropes and including a size element. 

It was fun seeing the 'final girls' really enjoy having him at such a tiny size.

And I loved the final cliff hanger. (setting it up for a potential sequel? or just a reference to how Jason Vorhees always came back again and again) 

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