Date: November 27 2009 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 21
And another epic chapter!
You just keep getting better and better with every chapter, Cayce!
--A fan, who eagerly awaits more!
[Report This]Date: November 23 2009 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 21
As Archie Bunker might say: "Cripes! Is the fit gonna hit de shan, now!!"
Date: November 22 2009 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thanks you for the update, been waiting too long.
This story is truly a masterpiece, I just have one word to say: Damn.
Author's Response: Thanks TM! I'll try not to take so long for the next update. Of course, I said that last time, didn't I? ;-)
[Report This]Date: August 26 2009 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
well to start off im a huge fan! love beautiful toes and feet. but i prefer (taco bell)purple toe nails though. lol.
anyways im here to review... first off love all of the realism of the antagonist(Carolyn).she is everything that you hate, love, and fear. maybe more so on the ladder now.
much enjoy the day-to-day goings-on for the characters especially dave, because i love feet an wouldn't mind to be carolyn's "special little guy" lol.
question.
is it true that when you finish this story you'll combind the two of your stories? let me just say [EXPLETIVE DELETED] thats awesome!!
anyways congratulations on an epic masterpiece.. keep it coming,
aaron
Author's Response:
Yep, my next opus will feature characters from this story and Homunculus. At the rate I'm going, I should be getting started on it sometime in 2044...
Glad you're enjoying Summer Job, Aaron. I'm having fun writing it, although fatigue is starting to set in. I'm ready to get this thing wrapped up, and now I'm starting to regret having left so many loose ends.
Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment.
[Report This]Date: August 05 2009 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 20
"...as if he might be spotted over the phone..." Lol!
With today's a.v. tech, that's all too-possible. Assuming, of course, that Carolyn's parents could even _afford_ a cellular videophone.
I know I can't! :-)
Author's Response: If Carolyn's parents are anything like mine, they probably still have trouble figuring out how to work their answering machine.
Date: August 01 2009 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
And the plot thickens!
It is awesome how you are so effectively portraying Charoline building to an eventual psychotic episode. I just can't wait for the carnage to finally start!
Great stuff, Cayce! Spellbound and barely able to wait for more!
Author's Response: When the psychotic episode happens (and believe me, it WILL happen), I want it to seem inevitable and tragic, and not just a plot twist that I pulled out of my ass. It really does help to know where you're going with a story, so you can get there gradually. (And it doesn't get any more gradual than THIS story ;-)
[Report This]Date: July 30 2009 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thanks so much for the update, I've been waiting for a VERY long time. Great chapter, I love the way how everyone is now shit scared of Carolyn now. She is portrayed throughout your story very thoroughly, that she seems real. You are really an amazing author. I really wonder what happens next, what Carolyn is going to say to her parents, if shes going to eat the turkey. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks, TM. I appreciate that! Carolyn's getting harder and harder to write, but I'm looking forward to doing the scenes with her parents. They always make her a little more human and a little more accessible.
[Report This]Date: July 29 2009 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 20
Very nicely done, good sir. This story seems to me to be a breath of fresh air from what I have seen in the most recent weeks at this site, and I very much hope that you continue this with more rapidity than before. I am very exited to hear what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks, Zal. I kind of hope I can do the rapidity thing as well =) I've got other stories I want to write, but I'm bound and determined to get this one finished up first.
[Report This]Date: June 03 2009 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 19
Man keep on writing! your storys are some of the only storys left with class on this site, I'm more of an amateur humorous writer on this. Also I'm surprised Humonculous hasn't gotten an award, I also see some resemblance in some of the charectars in this to some of the charectars in Humonculous(Thats pretty much the only fault) but your storys are so good it makes me think that you should try to get them published, they could make it in the "Alternitive Reading" Section. I hope you make the next chapter soon :D
Author's Response: Yeah, I realized I was sort of falling into a rut with the characters, which is why I had Linda go on a binge and shrink some others. I feel like I may have gone too far, since now it's kind of hard to keep track and give time to all those separate characters. But I have a feeling Carolyn may soon be solving my problem for me ;-)
Date: March 29 2009 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
I don't know if I don't have a life, but I've read this chapter like 5-6 times. Please update soon, can't wait any longer! You're an awesome author, you should really publish one of these. I'd buy a copy ;-)
Author's Response: Don't know about ever publishing this. The whole reason I write these stories is to get it out of my system so it won't come creeping into my mainstream stuff. Besides, I'm still in the closet as far as GTS goes ;-)
[Report This]Date: January 13 2009 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 19
Holy [explative deleted] [explative deleted]!
Cayce, you are a master!
More please, and soon! I can't take the suspense!
Author's Response: Working on it as fast as I [EXPLETIVE DELETED] can ;-)
Date: January 07 2009 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 19
Keep it coming. Start updating regularly again! Yes, I still read this. I'm still going to give you that big review when this is over-I haven't forgot that promise. But you have to finish it first.
Author's Response: Still chugging along, and I *will* finish it. Promise! And I'm totally looking forward to the big review.
[Report This]Date: January 07 2009 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow.
Author's Response: Glad you thought so.
[Report This]Date: January 07 2009 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 19
:-O
Author's Response: :-D
Date: January 07 2009 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 19
WOW! Best chapter yet Cayce!
Author's Response: Thanks, K^2. There's been a lot of buildup to this chapter, so I'm glad it didn't disappoint.
Date: January 04 2009 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 18
Great story man. I loved Homunculus, and I LOVE this story. I love the twists just like how Linda just told about the hole i nthe wall. I only got one problem. Can you please write more often, I can't take the wait. :(
Author's Response: Thanks TM! No promises about writing more often, but I'm really hoping to get this story wrapped up before the next presidential election...
[Report This]Date: December 18 2008 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Completely excellent story, dude! You tell such incredible tales, your situations so vibrant, your characters so wonderfully (or in the case of Caroline, dreadfully) alive!
Here's to hanging in suspense and anxiously awaiting the next chapter! Ow! What an Excellent story!
Oh, and if I could make a special request, could somebody get stepped on (accidentally or otherwise) in the garden? Soft soil, cruelly heavy bare foot, intense pinning...? Urnf. The thought of it just does things to a guy! :D
Either way, excellent stuff, Cayce! Greatly looking forward to more!
Author's Response: You know, I don't usually do requests because I've pretty much got the story plotted out. But your suggestion was a good one, and really close to what I had in mind, so there you go. Enjoy Chapter 19 ;-)
Date: December 17 2008 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
Another home run Cayce! This keeps getting better and better. What i love most about your stories is how emotionally invested in the characters the reader gets. I felt genuine fear for Dave and Denny as they treked towards the pills and had a severe "YOU BITCH!" moment when Linda ratted them all out. Please keep it coming my friend!
Author's Response: Thanks, K^2! I've gotten a bit emotionally invested in the characters as well, which has sort of backfired because now I feel guilty for putting them through the ringer.
Date: October 23 2008 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story, you're rollin' Cayce. hot shit!
Author's Response: Thanks, Deviant!
[Report This]Date: October 18 2008 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 17
The mini-Great Escape begins!
Awesome! Thank you for finally updating.
Author's Response: Here's hoping the mini-Great Escape continues before I die of old age ;-)
Thanks for reading, Cary!