Reviewer: Stylesrj Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2008 12:31 AM Title: The Journey

I dunno how I'll say this, but here goes:

Needs more grammar. It's no good making a story like it was constructed in a hurry. There is no rush to post a story, so there is no need to skip on the grammar and use chatspeak

Reviewing stories is the same thing, but sometimes you might want to review quickly. Anyway, so there is no rush for writing stuff here. No one has a gun to you saying "Write this story now!"

Take your time, work out the errors or at least improve on the grammar and then post it.

Until then, I won't be giving this rating