Reviewer: WTH I Love This Signed [Report This]
Date: January 07 2020 11:57 AM Title: Better for everyone

This story is already amazing! I absolutely cannot wait to read more!!! The “infuriatingly playful and teasing little sister suddenly becomes the owner with the approval of the mother” dynamic is a classic, and one that you’ve already developed SOOO well! 

 

I can tell this story is going to have some amazing footplay. I hope there will be some toeplay and inshoe/sock and legwear stuff as part of that. (Some inspiration for great foot action might be "Southern Ties" by Asterisk, "The insole girl" by exiguus, chapter 1 of "Change Happens" by newschool2626, the "Time Out" series by Jacksmith, pretty much anything else written by Jacksmith, vgiv, SoleEmbrace, Sheograth, AnonWriter, 3l33thax0r, DanceDance1982, V11, Littlelee, nona1234, GentleGiantessandTiny, and GuessWho. You probably know a lot of these, though!) 

 

I'd love to see more world-building for this story. There is SO much potential!!! For example, how did his family get to be a part of the NGR program. What is the origin of NGR? Does everyone in this society do this, or just those who believe in the NGR ideology? How does NGR justify its ideals when men clearly aren't "naturally" 3 inches tall? Will there be interactions with other women in his life, like his Mom and other female family members? I'd love to see his sister showing him off and sharing him with friends! Also, if he has female friends(and/or maybe a love interest or even girlfriend), how do they react to his new life, and how will they interact with his sister? Why is his sister his caretaker? What happens when he eventually has to get married someday? How do romantic relationships work in NGR, especially when your caretaker is a family member? 

Going off that last question and the "How does NGR justify itself" question, what is it like for girls in this society? Usually all women are portrayed in these types of stories as totally drinking the cool-aid, and the only internal conflict is in the male characters, but I'd like to see the internal conflict of girls(like his sister) who spend their middle school and high school years becoming then being attracted to, and even dating, boys their own size(who are probably a little bigger and stronger than them, which most girls like) only to have them shrink once they're all adults? 

 

Sorry, I know that's a lot, but I just think there are so many awesome possibilites with what you're making here!!! Keep up the great work!!! ;)

 

Reviewer: bobbylaws1 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06 2020 3:26 PM Title: Talking the Talk

I'm really enjoying this story so far! I can't wait to see him with his sister towering over him. I'm hoping there's good footplay interaction where she toys with him and makes him climb her soles and toes. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response:

Thank you!