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Reviewer: jx59syun Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2020 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 2 A First Immaculate Taste

Love the title, very intruiging. Also, quite enchanted by our introduction. Dani's command over eldritch forces, and my attention, is impressive. As is your knack for imagery, I loved the image of the last paragraph of her rising with blood dripping slowly. Great start!

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