[Report This]Date: June 16 2020 12:56 AM Title: Final Test
Woah! I thought the fianl test is going to be Piss, that was a surprise, and I was like "Hell yeah!". But then it was Vore and I was like " vore is good too". Then, there's biting involved and I was like back to "Hell yeah".
That biting part was really great and you explained it really well. It was rare to find mouth play with biting involved.
But, seriously I love Lana and her coldness that she doesn't really care about the assistant inside her stomach anymore
Whew! That was an excellent story. Hope to read some more. Thanks for the story
Author's Response:
It's rare to see mouthplay with chewing because it's something that will certainly kill the subject. Chewing without being turned into a paste requires an invincible tiny, so the story has to be built in such a way to enable it without straining credibility.
Lana cared very much for her assistant! She just cares more about the results she got from him. In a way, he'll live forever in the form of her data.
If you're looking for more from me, check my profile for other stories and you'll be in for a pleasant surprise :)
[Report This]Date: June 16 2020 12:30 AM Title: Second Test
I really love the part where the guy has to climb Lana's gigantic foot while she's doing an extreme foot play. Now that's really hot and great writing btw. I also love that it took half the chapter just to climb her foot.
But seriously, foot odor, please? No? Ok, ok, fine. Please don't get mad. That's the last one. I promise.
Onto the next chapter
Author's Response:
Oh it's not play, it's very serious tests! She just doesn't have anything to test with other than herself.
[Report This]Date: June 15 2020 9:42 PM Title: The Voyage Home
I never knew someone could write something about simply walking home and turrned it to something hot and sexy.
I really love that she was totally aware that guy is falling through her stockings but she just doesn't care. I feel like she won't be treating him as a human anymore. She didn't even asked him if he was ok after the trip. Cold and I love it.
Hnnng! Why can't you also like foot odor or just add it as an element to the story? I'm not forcing you though I'm just begging because it really adds more "oomph" on the humiliation and sexiness. But I hope someday you can see its appeal.
Anyways, I really enjoyed reading this chapter. I'm going to start reading the next chapter now. Thanks
Author's Response:
Walking can absolutely be hot from a size story perspective! See also pacing back and forth, coming almost close enough to step on someone but just missing.
What would she do, dig into her stockings on the street? Best to just let him keep sliding down and not make a scene.
Date: June 10 2020 5:02 PM Title: Shortfalls
This is fantastic. Lana strikes the right balance between concern toward and detachment from her subject. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks! At the end of the day, the science is too important for Lana to let feelings get in the way.
[Report This]Date: June 10 2020 3:01 PM Title: First Test
Lana is backkkk! How nice!
I thought the little guy wouldn't make it past this chapter, but it seems he actually did. On the other hand, how could I ever doubt Lana's science.
But I must say, Lana does look a bit sloppy. Where is her control group?
Thanks for writing and until next time!
Author's Response:
The supersoldier serum is quite potent! It may shrink people, but it makes then unable to be crushed. Might be a worthwhile trade.
I think a control group in this case would lead to murder charges, what with dropping 40 tons on a non-serumed person.
You're welcome, and thanks for reviewing!
Date: January 03 2020 4:48 AM Title: The Voyage Home
That was cool. I really enjoyed his desent down Lana's leg. How massive she is to him. The natural power that she has. Her booming footsteps. Now she holds him between her thumb and and forefinger. Weighing him. He is just a subject to her. She's so cold and analytical as she begins her tests. Will he plead and beg to her? Will she even acknowledge him?
Loved it,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Funny thing about him begging - he already agreed to the tests, so any resistance now is just him getting cold feet, not only breach of an admittedly unenforceable verbal contract. Humoring him would just be a distraction from her very important work.
[Report This]Date: January 02 2020 8:36 AM Title: The Voyage Home
That tiny is a bit smaller and heavier than I remember. Do you maybe mean 23.8mm?
Seems like Lana is taking these tests quite seriously. Does she also have an official scientific logbook next to her tape recorder? It would be a pity if all this important research data from the tests would get lost, then she would need an entire new volunteer.
Could you technically create an invincible Fulda by letting her get the serum and then use magicbto grow her back?
Thank you for writing and until next time!
Author's Response:
Thanks for pointing that out! I was thinking cm, but wrote mm for some reason.
Of course she's taking them seriously, it's her livelihood at stake! Though her tiny test subject will never see it.
Fulda hardly needs the serum, she's quite invincible as she is, don't you think?
And thank you for reviewing!
Date: December 30 2019 12:26 AM Title: Shortfalls
Cool beginning. Is there some cruelty in Lana? Will she dominate or punish him for disobedience? What will she keep him in?
Author's Response:
Is cold indifference discernible from abject cruelty, and is it any better? These tests will, at the very least, be uncomfortable.
[Report This]Date: December 28 2019 2:07 AM Title: Shortfalls
Now I'm going to imagine that she didn't only crumble the DARPA letter at the beginning, but also their entire hq.
It seems Lana has the right idea and this tiny is actually a good tiny and works together with her. Combine that with supposedly indestructible and I think Gina would love to get her hands on that.
I'm looking forward to the tests and I would like to thank you for writing!
Author's Response:
Lana's gonna show them, she'll show them all!
This is why they have to keep the serum a secret. If it got used on someone with less to gain, they'd be a lot less willing to go along with it.
And thank you for reviewing! Testing will commence soon-ish.