There is probably more to it. But betrayel from your loved ones always hurt.
In your hour of need, you will see who your true friends are.

Good chapter again.

Really loving this story so far.  My favorite are realistic stories - that are clearly well written with a developed storyline - and this is a perfect example.  The world you created is so great, I hope this story lasts a very long time.  I'm interested to see him interacting with each of the characters introduced so far, looking forward to what's next!

I hope the positive feedback from everyone will make you consider writing more in the future.  Either in this 'world' or just other stories.

Nice but.. I keep dreaming about the third season of the shrinking show

Benton!

It’s been so long! My goodness am I glad to see you after all these years! I don’t know if you remember me, but I guess I would say that I was there when you wrote the second shrinking show story.

Do you remember the Carla and Andy dynamic? That was my favorite. It’s funny because 4 years ago, you replied to my review stating that you almost finished a spin off story with Carla and Andy. Well, that never happened, so I guess I was a bit disappointed. However, the scenes of them that took place in the shrinking show were definitely top notch.

I’m glad you are back though! It’s a little saddening to see you say this is your last story. I can tell things have changed since you haven’t posted for a while now until today.

Now about this story. Whoa, your writing has improved significantly! I remember you used to write a story around sexy scenes and all I looked forward to was the crazy sexual interactions between people.

Now, after reading the first 4 chapters of this, I’m actually caring about the story. I was expecting to meet the characters in the first chapter and Paul shrinks at the end of it, and then the 2nd chapter and on will be about his shrunken adventures.

However, you surprised me with some in-depth background info of all the characters. It seems you have also planned this story out very well since you are uploading each chapter rapidly.

I like the theme of the story, a giant becoming tiny and he gets a new side to life as he can compare his tiny version to his preexisting giant life in the past. Also, his interactions with all the females would change.

Sarah seems to be my favorite girl here. She seems mature and knows how to handle situations. Brie seems annoying, but I think that’s how you wanted her to be. Hannah seems nice, but relatively boring at the moment. She seems like an average girl that is nice to him. Jen seems horny, but Paul’s dislike to her seems to spread to me, because now even I dislike Jen too.

I’m very interested in the mom’s reaction since she actually didn’t want the tinies to have rights. Now that should be fun to see. Does she respect the bill she proposes or her son more? We will have to wait. There will be times where she has to make a decision and I can’t wait to see that.

Overall, I’m impressed with the quality of this story and how you make us care about the characters before inviting us to Paul’s giantess journey. I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I remember you from your comments on the Shrinking Show back in the day. It makes sense that this story is very different; I wrote the Shrinking Show when I was in my early 20s, I'm in my mid 30s now. This is far more "plot with porn" than "porn with plot", though the story is rated X for a reason as you will soon see. I'm happy that you find the characters interesting and are getting invested in them! Also, the story is done; I am uploading each chapter as I proofread them.

Very nice story. I can't wait to see what will happen when he shrinks.