[Report This]Date: December 08 2019 4:25 AM Title: Shrunk & Used
What a sexy story! For a second, I thought it was over, but I’m glad that you plan on continuing it.
A lot of stuff happened this chapter which worries me a little since I’m not sure if you have enough to write about for future chapters. You covered many of the body parts in this opening chapter so I’m going to guess that Alex will explore them again in the future.
I like the size you chose for Alex, perfect to play with and handle for Jade. At that size, he could be kept hidden even in public if you ever decide to write about Jade hiding Alex while they go out.
Overall, I love the playful sexy behavior of Jade and I love how Alex is afraid, but also aroused.
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the wonderful feedback! This is the first time I've written and posted a story like this. I'm glad you enjoyed it!I I will definitely keep your suggestions in mind. More to come from Alex and Jade real soon..
CJ 👅