[Report This]Date: December 01 2019 10:57 AM Title: Brown-nosing 101
I loved this so much and before I moved on to ginatess stories I was a facesitting man I only moved on because I was running out of good content made me so happy keep it up.
If you move it somewhere else which i hope you dont please tell me where
[Report This]Date: December 01 2019 1:34 AM Title: Brown-nosing 101
If this were a facesitting one shot, I'd say you did an amazing job and would highly recommend you post it on other erotica sites.
Probably should just post it on other sites like literotica anyway.
[Report This]Date: November 28 2019 1:41 PM Title: Brown-nosing 101
I like it so far but regarding regarding the size difference I was thinking that the teacher or the females just be amazonian in nature, like seven or eight feet tall. You might have the story already planned out in your head and I think having the MC transform or shrink would be a bit drastic and I have not seen you describe the characters hight so I was thinking the teacher or the femals could just be amazons. Or the MC could just be significantly shorter than anyone else. I'm just basing these ideas on other stories I've seen on here ultimatly its your story take it wherever you want>
Author's Response:
Very nice idea, thanks for your input! I think I have an idea of where I want to take the story now though. Thanks for the review!
Date: November 28 2019 4:57 AM Title: Brown-nosing 101
very nice idea, would had loved the plot more if something goes horrible wrong and some unaware tf
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! We'll have to see where the story goes.
Date: November 27 2019 9:47 PM Title: Brown-nosing 101
Fun story, love it.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed!
Date: November 27 2019 7:42 PM Title: Brown-nosing 101
I read the other reviews, and agree with them with one exception. This is also a transformation site.
Ms. / Professor Holloway can keep Jonas at his normal size, she could even shrink him; but she could also transform him. A replacement seat cushion, her T-back thong, her tight fitting nylons such as "those spandex bodysuits he saw people wearing at the homecoming game last Friday", or even those clickaty-clackity shoes she wears.
It seems Jonas is aroused by Ms. Holloways' asshole {where was she when I was in school?} and the title does imply Jonas' nose up Ms. Holloways' butthole, perhaps she could alter Jonas so he has a snout {perhaps more in private if it fits your story line better} that fits snuggly and deep up her asshole.
Hopefully Jonas is subject to more of Ms. Holloways' farts and asshole.
Regardless, please do continue no matter which way you take this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review! You've got some great ideas there :)
Date: November 27 2019 5:54 PM Title: Brown-nosing 101
I'm not saying this wasn't a great story, because it really was an enjoyable read, but the entire time I was waiting for either Jonas to shrink or Ms. Holloway to grow super large. This is a size fetish site afterall. It's be like posting this story on a furry centric site despite its lack of furries.
So, I encourage you to keep writing, you have good technique and excellent grammar, but if there isn't going to be any shrinking or growing then you probably should reconsider either its inclusion or posting on this particular site.
God, no matter how long I try to think of a nicer way to say that I feel like I'm coming across as a dick...
Author's Response:
Totally understand where you're coming from, no need to feel like you're being rude. To be honest I wasn't sure what the protocal was for non-size content here. I posted it anyway because there will most likely be something more related to the fetishes on this site in future chapters. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: November 27 2019 5:18 PM Title: Brown-nosing 101
You better continue this and keep it long and detailed just like the first GOLDEN ART WORK of a first chapter you made! And I hope she shrinks him. And keep adding humiliating farts! lol any ways PLEASE CONTINUE 😍🍑
Author's Response:
Lol! There are plans to continue this one don't worry! I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! We'll see about shrinking, I had intended to keep it same size, but who knows what will happen!