next version she'll be super tall too!

thanks!

i actually made a poll about this yesterday and we decided on making him 8 inches for v3 (previous plan was 15). definitely a lot smaller than now but not quite micro. i dont think i'd be able to make a long-term plot out of someone only half an inch, would only work for short stories i think

yes, it'll be x rated. the end of this version will get a bit x rated too, actually

You haven't been quietly watching, I recognize your name! haha

Totally fair opinion to have. And there were a few other people who said the same thing, so idk, maybe it was a lesson I guess. I don't even think the final day in the story gets as crazy as this and the prior chapters were.

But yeah that's OK. I know lots of people like the story because of the more sympathetic relationship compared to most (especially for an R-rated story), so having removed that element I can see why people would be disappointed. I said this in a previous review, but I took version 1 as far as I could think to take it without ruining Olivia's character, and the same for this version. And I'm a big proponent of trying to always build on previous chapters which is why I take things slow. If I started stories off with insertion or full blown foot worship or whatever it might be from the get-go, I'd have nowhere to go but down, you know? I mean I guess that's writing 101 tho, building momentum and stuff.

Anyways yeah, I completely understand, and I appreciate the review nonetheless!

thanks! yeah i know i got a lotta foot stans so that bit will last like two and a half chapters

That's totally fair! I'm glad you liked version 1 of this story because that was definitely the one that was meant to be "realistic" haha. But people wanted more, not just more chapters but for stuff to go even further, so that's why that stuff happens. I still try and make things as realistic as I can, aka people having emotions and a splash of common sense, men and women not being constantly horny, etc. But there still has to be a bit of suspension of disbelief.

That being said if there's one thing you can count on with these stories it's that I won't get sadistic with them, although maybe some call this chapter that. but like, nothing evil, no real physical harm; i know some people out there have fucked their siblings' friends before and im sure they didnt get like long lasting PTSD from it, it just hurt them for a few weeks or ruined the friendship (if she had sex with his boyfriend or girlfriend or something then THAT i'd consider pretty cruel. but a gaming friend aint the same lmao)

but yeah, version 1 is the one thats mostly realistic, version 2 is a bit more unrealistic but major "realism aspects" are still kept in check aka she doesnt directly do anything to him sexually and he messed up big time before getting punishments (i never like when someone's given an impossible task in stories and then penalized for not completing it). version 3 will be totally wild tho. like if you think about it, there's no way that a story could go as far as i did (or further, which it definitely will) and still be considered realistic. like i cant get that deep into a fetish while retaining full believability, you know? so yeah, i go as far as i can with the tone of each version and then start anew with the bar being lowered.

actually thats the end of the mall interaction lmao. but theres definitely some interesting stuff coming in the next few weeks

im trying to avoid going down that route since i feel like its all too common with other stories. but if other people wanna imagine that theyre free to, cant stop them haha

thanks!