[Report This]Date: October 08 2020 4:12 AM Title: Day 3: Big Feet, Long Legs
Version 2 has been really interesting so far, the changes already help give it a fresh take and I'm looking forward to more. Did you say you were going to do a third version after this one? And while hes smaller now then he was in the first story will he be staying this size or shrinking as the story goes?
Author's Response:
thank you! i definitely feel like its a bit faster but still taking its time. and hes gonna stay the same size but yes there will be another version where he's half his current height
[Report This]Date: October 07 2020 2:40 PM Title: Day 3: Big Feet, Long Legs
Would love to see version 2 feature a much more mischievous Olivia
Author's Response:
i think she will be!
Date: October 07 2020 12:43 PM Title: Day 1
Im excited to see the newest "version" of the story and how his smaller size will change the interactions he has with the world. Thanks for pumping out chapters so quickly.
Author's Response:
thanks!
Date: October 05 2020 7:49 PM Title: ---==[[ ( SIDE STORY ) ]]==---
Loved the story. Got any spoilers for the future chapters?
Author's Response:
she starts trying to fit him into her clothes, they go to the gym with a new friend, he interacts with his mom more, she forces him to smell her farts, he sleeps in her laundry basket. and lots more!
Date: October 05 2020 6:08 PM Title: ---==[[ ( SIDE STORY ) ]]==---
Loved the story, and especially the intermission. You do a great job of developing the characters and making it interesting to read. Can't wait to see what you write next.
Author's Response:
thanks!
[Report This]Date: October 05 2020 12:20 AM Title: ---==[[ ( SIDE STORY ) ]]==---
I fully expected her to use a sock but that works too.
Author's Response:
yeaaahhhh i figured thatd be the easy solution, wanted to do something a lil more unorthodox. plus also i gotta lotta foot content and not enough boob stuff
[Report This]Date: October 04 2020 4:35 AM Title: Day 23, Part 3
Jordan is a wonderful brat.
Also with that ending it kind of makes me think there's more to those words than just that night.
Author's Response:
i guess the ending is open to interpretation!
[Report This]Date: October 03 2020 8:35 PM Title: Day 1
Fantastic story, thanks for posting. :)
It's been a while since I've waited for updates so eagerly, and after reading all 3 parts of Day 23 I'm glad I kept following along.
As much as I was hoping for an ending where Reese failed and was stuck with being a servant to his sister, her friends, and their mom, this ending was perfectly in tone with the rest of the story and I'm not sure if it could have been done better.
Excited to see future stories from you. I'll have to check out the daughter/dad one soon. Will future spiritual sequels feature a similar amount, if not more, foot content? It would be wonderful to see Reese under Olivia's feet whilst they're stinky hehe, in the rewrite you've mentioned in other replies.
Author's Response:
thank you! last few chapters were definitely a nice treat for anyone who loyally followed along, and yes, while a stuck servant idea mightve been nice i dont think it wouldve worked. and its the last chapter so whats the difference anyways :P
the rewrite of brother has more foot content but since her boobs and butt are big too i'm trying to make it a bit more evened out. but dad/daughter will have more foot content tho imo, idk if any of my stories will ever just be one thing.
btw i loved your beneath the bullies story :)
[Report This]Date: October 03 2020 11:51 AM Title: Day 23, Part 3
This was a really good story. Loved the characters and their interactions with each other. Towards the end I though Jordan was going to sit on Reese but she was just teasing him about his sister. I cant wait for the version where he shrinks really small and see how different it goes for him. I hope he ends up small enough to get lost on his sister's thong ;)
Author's Response:
oh dont worry, he'll be sat on next version, and there'll be a MUCH more interesting thong interaction even though he won't be super tiny yet :) thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: October 02 2020 3:20 AM Title: Day 23, Part 3
So we need a sequel now.
Reece ends up still failing, which leads to him having to retake his senior year and another year of servitude for Olivia.
Would also like a spinoff series featuring more torture from jordan
Author's Response:
hahaha ill take that to mean you liked it. ngl i DID think about making a sequel series but i'd rather just rewrite it with him being even smaller but add a bunch of totally new scenes, and since he shrunk "naturally" isntead of something sci-fi-ish like a size ray, i wouldnt be able to make him shrink again anyways without a rewrite cuz im too much of a stickler for a nice consistent story canon to suddenly change everything up.
but dont worry, the point is, more reese/olivia action is coming plus more jordan and some new characters :)
[Report This]Date: September 30 2020 4:34 AM Title: Day 23, Part 2
Jordan is just wonderful...in her own way.
I am very curious to see where this all ends up.
Author's Response:
glad i decided to flesh jordan out for sure!
[Report This]Date: September 07 2020 1:33 PM Title: Day 23, Part 1
I hope Jordan goes full on deviant. Can't wait for the last chapter!
Author's Response:
me too!
[Report This]Date: September 07 2020 7:35 AM Title: Day 23, Part 1
The plot thickens
Author's Response:
it does indeed 🤔
[Report This]Date: August 28 2020 12:49 PM Title: Day 21
Reese isa good egg.
Author's Response:
hes not so bad 😏
[Report This]Date: August 26 2020 8:53 AM Title: Day 20
Heartwarming
Author's Response:
yeah :) until next chapter when things will get super weird and uncomfortable for him!
[Report This]Date: August 23 2020 4:54 AM Title: Day 19
After this chapter, we need more Jordan interaction. Lol
Author's Response:
she'll be in the finale! just a few more chapters.
[Report This]Date: August 23 2020 4:17 AM Title: Day 19
Jordan seems like a pot stirrer...lovely.
Author's Response:
she do be like dat doe
Date: August 22 2020 7:43 PM Title: Day 19
Olivia has been a bit of a brat lately, but that first half was downright tyrannical, poor Reese. Well, his sister isn't getting any smaller though.
Author's Response:
and he definitely wont be getting any bigger 😉
Date: August 22 2020 4:24 PM Title: Day 19
Oh I thought we were finally get some big breasts for our little guy.....was hoping sister would start to get aroused by her power.... thought we might have curiousity abt how small he might be in other areas lol... still loving it though
thanks for writing !
Author's Response:
i can only think of so many natural scenarios where he sticks his face in his sister's tits 😣
[Report This]Date: August 17 2020 1:43 AM Title: Day 18
Interested to see where this goes once he possibly graduates.
Author's Response:
hopefully i can finish it by the end of the month!