Reviewer: dailyduke Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2021 6:49 AM Title: Introduction & Table of Contents

Finally got caught up and man this story is turning out so damn great. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

thanks! good luck to yours as well!

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2020 5:37 AM Title: Introduction & Table of Contents

For V2 Day 7 Pt 3

 

So humiliating and I love it. Ahhh! Reese is so lucky to be stuck on his sister's sweaty body. I hope she smells too, it was after gym after all. I sometimes think Olivia is really into her brother, she just doesnt want o admit it.

 

Thank you for another hot and awesome chapter

 

Author's Response:

yeah she was supposed to be sweating bc of the gym of course but i guess i didnt mention it that much... but thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04 2020 5:55 AM Title: Day 7: Musculature

Awww! No Olivia's feet this time? Jk but i really love that car scene tho. The domination adn humiliation is so perfect. I have to take breaks between paragraphs just to control my excitement. I'm surprised nothing awakened below Reese while his sister was grooving.

 

Another awesome chapter, Jess! Can't wait for more again.Thank you so much

Author's Response:

"I'm surprised nothing awakened below Reese while his sister was grooving."

yeah a few people have mentioned this but writing about that kinda stuff (from either perspective, big or little person) isnt my favorite way to write. i dont hate it or anything plenty of writers do that and i think its fine i just usually prefer it not to be like that. but one day i might make a story with that perspective. thanks for review :)

Reviewer: johnbart37 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 09 2020 2:18 PM Title: Day 5

God, how did I not find this story earlier??? This has been the slow burn I've been looking for.

The way the sister manipulates her brother is so freakin hot. I like how she barely even needs to lift a finger. She just appeals to his new craving to be "nice" and he does whatever she asks. Such a brilliant dynamic! And I'm sure it'll soon go beyond him just making coffee and pulling the ottoman over for her.

Author's Response:

lol yeah version 1 was pretty slow cuz i was like really adamant about it being 23 days long for some reason but definitely better by the second half and v2 picks up even faster. thanks for the review and ive read and like your jackie story!

Reviewer: randysavage Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06 2020 4:09 AM Title: Day 7: Just Kinda Damp

Do Olivia and Jordan need help knowing how low to go on their squats? Maybe they also relax in a sauna afterwards? Would love to read more about Olivia wearing Reece in her clothes  

This is my vote for story of the year! Can't wait to read what happens next. 

Author's Response:

thanks for the review! no squatting in next chapter but there'll be some butt-related stuff so dont worry 

Reviewer: randysavage Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29 2020 4:46 PM Title: Day 6: Romper

Loved the part where she puts her feet on his chest and they start to become stuck on him. Maybe she gets drunk one night, puts her feet on his chest again, and then the next morning she wakes up still hungover, but Reece is still stuck to one of her feet? She then walks upstairs (and in Reece) and heads to bed completely forgetting about him. 

Reviewer: Untitled Tiny Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2020 9:25 PM Title: Introduction & Table of Contents

Typically I prefer fast-paced stories mostly because these fantasies revolve heavily around being quick and straight to the action. Then some people try to do slow-paced stories and to me they just don't seem to work out that well. You on the other hand do a fantastic job of spacing events out perfectly to allow room for character development while keeping it spicy enough to keep readers intrigued. I very much enjoy how real you try to keep it too as that somehow adds more spice to it (in my opinion). I love that you're doing two more versions and I would be lying if I said I wasn't excited, but I still want to appreciate the first version as there aren't many stories like it.

I also want to mention that I love this story so much, I decided to actually make an account to submit a review. I've been on this site for years and never felt so inclined to share how great I believe a story is. This is one of my top three favorite stories if not number one. Thank you for your work!

Lastly I just want to throw in an idea and see if you might consider it. Somehow Reese gets given a wedgie whether given it intentionally or unintentionally. I got the idea from your latest chapter about his sister putting him into her romper. Because of their size difference, as he got shoved into the article of clothing he might get a wedgie as his legs get spread apart into the leg holes of the romper. Hopefully that makes sense, and if you choose to use it or not is fine with me because I already know that either way, I'll be pleased to see your future writing!

Author's Response:

im pretty sure this is one of the best reviews i've ever received 😭

im so glad you like the pacing of the story and the character development, i understand the appeal of people wanting stuff fast and quick but to me, my favorite stories are always the slower ones, the ones where you can see the characters changing slowly, day by day. like stories where something super sexual happens on day one, its like, where do you go from there? how do they top that, you know? but longer, slower stuff its like, here's this good piece of food and then something that tastes better, and something even better, and then something even BETTER shkshks stupid analogy i know but yeah u seem to get it idk why i keep rambling

im super honored that u made an account just to review my story, idk if people go back and read the responses to review but im super super appreciative and i hope you know that reviews like this mean a lot to me and really encourage me to keep writing :)

ill try and think of a way of adding some kind of wedgy thing somewhere along the way just for how great this review was!

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2020 11:58 AM Title: Day 6: Romper

That was so freaking hot especially the part where Olivia stepped on her brother and made him smell her feet. I hope Reese realize that he's one lucky brother to have such an amazing dominant sister. I ship them so bad.

 

I was kinda hoping the part where she hid her brother was long tho. Still it was reall good and humiliating

 

Thank you again for this chapter. Hope to see more soon. I hope one day I could make a 3d render for this story

Author's Response:

it was gonna be longer at first but i got too lazy to write out dialogue between olivia and her mom and i wanted to just go to bed lol

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15 2020 4:57 PM Title: Day 4: Sweats

That was another awesome chapter, Jess. I love how Olivia humiliates her brother by wearing him. Eventhough there's nothing really sexual going on, you make your stories sound so hot 

 

Btw I didnt expect that artwork. I love it. Man, I would love to do a 3d render for you someday but maybe when theres a version where Reese is smaller than his sister's foot or her toe perhaps. 

 

Hope to read more. Thank you so much

Author's Response:

making them "hot" without anything sexual is usually my goal :)

Reviewer: gpber Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2020 9:08 AM Title: Day 1

I really enjoyed the 1st part, but I'm REALLY enjoying the 2nd part! Very excited that there will even be a 3rd part where he's even smaller. One and a half feet tall?

Will there be a 4th part where he's even smaller than that? Considering the content of your story, it would be really interesting if Reese was only as tall as his sister's feet. Or even just a little smaller so he has to look up to her toes! :)

Author's Response:

nah i think imma stop at 3 versions. i need to be able to keep adding on to the story and after 3 it would get too much for me to handle. but there will be under 1 foot tall in my other one