I wasn't expecting him to be Brooke's forever, but I really like the idea.

I really love the concept that Brooke can bring him back from any form of death, and reincarnate him anyplace she so desires.  That's pretty hot.

I do have to ask, if Brooke can bring him back "anyplace" she wants, can Brooke also bring him back as any 'object' she desires?  Imagine if Brooke turns him into a cracker another girl is eating, or a slug another girl is about to step upon, or even a pair of panties or a buttplug another girl is going to wear.

What ever she does, it sounds like one fun party they are going to have together.

There were a few grammatical errors; but as you explained you were in a hurry to get this out.

I enjoyed the music, though don't know exactly where it is to be played in relationship to your story.

I really enjoyed the first three chapters and I look forward to more.

As far as suggestions go, I really love booty content and slow anal Vore.

One idea I had for the party scenario is the girls play strip twister with tiny Riku on the mat and he has to try and escape or do some task all the while the girls are falling on him and getting undressed until it all leads up to this big pile of naked sweaty girls with Riku in the middle.

Also it could be a good idea to include some of what content is in the chapter in the chapter beginning summary thing so if you do stuff like farts or other tags people may not like then they know which parts to avoid!

I think the shorter chapters are fine especially since I struggle with the same thing in my stories, as long as chapters are updated fairly frequently!

Cheers.

Author's Response:

I do like the idea of including content tags in the beginning of chapters, I'll begin doing that. And not to give too much away, but anal vote is also my favorite. Feet is a little bit harder for me to write, so I am challenging myself with this next chapter, BUT, I have a LOT of plans for some butt content so stay tuned 😉

Cool and please add more tinies and more footwear and slave tasks

Really nice chapter.

I have to say I like Odysseus's ideas.  I also have to say a lot depends on Rikus' new size.  To be Alexis' buttplug, 3" makes a lot of sense, especially considering Riku felt so "bothered" at not being noticed stuffed in Alexis' cleavage so much so that Brooke did not even notice him in there.

As far as where Alexis hides Riku on Brooke, even at 1" or less, the ability of Alexis to slip Riku inside Brookes' "tight sports bra" or "tight yoga shorts" seems remote.  Though dropping him inside Brookes' awaiting jogging sneakers would make a lot of sense for a tiny of 1" or less.

At 1", Brooke could easily not notice Riku till she was running and mistake him for a pebble; but her sneakers are probably already full of 1" tiny men sewn into the insoles so he'd almost be negliable.

At 3", Brooke might think her sweat sock is bunched up under her toes.  She ignores it at first, then notices it wiggling annoyingly as she is running.  Going along Odysseus' idea, she could take off her sneaker, discover Riku, and stuff him down the back of her thong.

Staying with this scenario, Riku could discover a group of other tiny men stuffed in the back of Brookes' thong, and the addition of him at his size along with both the pressure of Brookes' thong and her jogging cause several tinies to be forced inside her asshole {which Brooke feels and enjoys}.

I also like Odysseus' idea of a tiny as a toe ring {one of my pseudonyms' is "HERToeRing"}, only with the stipulation that the tinys' head is wedged firmly in the space between her pinky and ring toe so that all he senses is the space between those two toes and their sweat and toe jam {YUMMY!}.

One idea, before Alexis drops Riku in one of Brookes' stank sneakers, she whispers to Riku "If you decide to come back to me, you do so with the acceptance you are to live in my ass as my buttplug.  I will not shove you up there again.  It's up to you to crawl inside of my asshole on your own, however you need to do it, you are to do it head first".

After suffering Brookes' sadism {what ever hijinks she bring upon him, perhaps peeing on him after she gets home after her long jog, or stuffing him in the front of her sweaty thong as she rubs out a few orgasms, without bothering to shower, then fooleshly falling asleep thinking Riku will still be stuck in her panties when she wakes up}, Riku sneaks away and works his way to Alexis' room, where she is in bed falling asleep.  Riku climbs up her bed and under her covers, gazing in amazement at her long, sexy legs till he reaches her buttcheeks.  He works his way up one of her buttcheeks, then squirms between her cheeks and head first inside her asshole as he not only accepts but embraces his life as Alexis' buttplug.

As Alexis is dozing off, she feels Riku squirm his way between her tight buttcheeks then up her asshole.  She smiles, not bothering to acknowledge him nor his existance, and she falls asleep knowing her buttplug has come home.

These are some ideas; but I would like to convey the advice another writter here at this site gave me early on {yes, I a have a few stories under the penname D W (Dark Writer from WritingDotCom) you may want to read if you have time to waste}.  The advice she gave me was write for yourself.  You will never please all of your readers, so simply write for your own pleasure and those who appreciate your style and subject matter will do so with the profound knowledge you are writing what and as you yourself believe in.

Reading the other reviews I just noticed you asked for some suggestions.  Here are a few if you do not mind.

What ever happens to Riku, no matter what another girl does with him, he always is handed back to Alexis to live out his life in her asshole.  Just a pleasant thought.

Since the shrinking men are resiliant, perhaps swallowing them, they travel the girls' stomach and intestines, only to be pooped out alive and healthy ready for further use / abuse.

Alexis wears not one, but a dozen men at any given time.  In her bra, under her breasts, in her panty crotch, as another reviewer suggested as body jewelry {as a living belly botton piercing}, in her shoes {perhaps in hollows cut out beneath her insoles, with sizes ranging from a centimeter (1/2") to six inches, the amount in either shoe can vary, or perhaps the amount / size varying between different pairs of shoes, especially if the shrunken men are kept inside permantly only to be changed out when Alexis gets new shoes}.

Perhaps the "bigger" shrunken men she can put in a stiff harness {or on a rod inserted through their butts and out their mouths like a pig on a scqoor, remember they're resiliant} she can wear as part of a strap-on, making the 6" guy(s) her human dildos to have sex / anal sex at her party scene with her many female friends.

Just some thoughts, well, rather fantasies to think about.

BTW, Riku's in her butt, so fart stuff may offend some it's still fun.

Loved the first chapter! Butt content is exclent, glad there was no toilet / farting stuff. 

As for the future, I'd love to see any of the following:

- Shrunken man sewn into clothing (preferably back of a thong)

- A couple who is dating and the guy shrinks while they're in the bedroom, prompting the girl to decide he will be her new dildo/butt plug instead. 

- A tiny attached to a piercing, like a tongue ring

I'm loving this already I can't wait to see where you take this story👍👍