[Report This]Date: May 13 2022 12:03 PM Title: Chapter X-53: Crystal's Rescue - Part 1
I just once again wanted to express my love for the Amoe storyline. Unaware is my favorite, especially when authors lean into the horror aspect of it, and this just checked all the boxes while also adding innovative new aspects I hadn't seen in the genre yet. The force-feeding crud, the terror of the slipper itself, all genius stuff and super inspiring. I could've read 100 chapters of it, but I know the story has to move on, lol.
Author's Response:
Hey Badguy,
I also really enjoy unaware, so I'm happy another enthusiast likes it. And yea, the whole force feeding thing seemed new to me, I was curious if it ever came up anywhere else either, haha. Anyway, glad your are enjoying the story!
Thanks,
Kenny
[Report This]Date: April 08 2022 2:59 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport
Por favor Kenny224, imagino que sua rotina deve ser agitada mas preciso mais dessa história hahah quero saber tudo sobre Mark e Dianne. Pleaaaaaaase
Author's Response:
While i dont speak Portuguese, according to google translate, thank you for your kind review! :)
Yes, my schedule is hectic, but the story isn't over. Sorry for the slow turn around, but unless i die (which hopefully does not happen) the show will go on! I'm just not going to force anything, as that seems like a waste.
Thanks!
-kenny
[Report This]Date: March 28 2022 3:47 PM Title: Chapter X-41: The Hike - Part 2
Many thanks for your previous comments.
I’ve added a hiking chapter to my story. While “Hiking” is a comparable theme to part of your story, however, the storyline is based on an actual episode of my daily life. Please have a read and I sincerely appreciate your feedback.
https://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=10324&chapter=24&textsize=3
Author's Response:
Hey Theresa,
Responding to this and your previous comment.
Thanks, I'm glad you are enjoying the story. It's interesting to hear people who aren't into feet who like it, which makes me happy to hear. I know the foot subset of the fetish isn't for everyone, but I am trying to depict a story in a way I feel would really share the experience of what it would like to be tiny, so hopefully that's something that's universally appealing to macrophiles.
As to your story/friend. All i can say is, damn, I'm jealous, wish i had a friend like that! Haha! :)
I'll check out your chapter again when I can and leave a review after!
Thanks again!
-kenny
[Report This]Date: March 27 2022 8:03 AM Title: Chapter X-4: In flight service
To begin with, I appreciate the in-depth descriptions of your chapters. Actually, although I don’t have a feet obsession, I am captivated by the emotional feelings in your creative writing.
In my works of fiction, I’ve integrated the various events of my daily life to make the narratives to be more true-to-life. My friends often contribute to my writing by giving me their viewpoints. And so, I’m able to persist with my imaginary tale. In my story, I’ve been successfully shrunken to merely 7 cm (2.8 inches) tall. Plus, I’ve the benefit of the Nano Intelligent Cells, while it won’t reduce the physical damage & pressure, it will stop the major blood loss. This enhancement will significantly boost my survivability.
Humorously, my friend is a keen hiker, she asked me to write a chapter to describe a narrative of me being utilized as an extra arch support for her foot.
Date: March 20 2022 12:15 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport
Another amazing chapter, as is your standard haha. I can't tell you enough how much I love the interaction with Amoe, I'm very excited to see how it ends.
Do you have like a fan discord or similar group?
Author's Response:
Hey Wutt!
Thanks for the kind words.
I do not have a fan group or anything.
In general, if you want, you can just leave a comment here. But if you'd like to privately message, feel free to email me at kennyken22@protonmail.com, however, i rarely check it, so you may want to remind me here first as i visit this site far more often than that one, haha.
-kenny
[Report This]Date: March 17 2022 10:07 PM Title: Chapter X-52: The Truth
Since you wrote that the story is "already planned out" (as I remember, the plan was to finish a few chapters ago...), here's a bit of overall criticism :)
It's too wordy! That's *great* when a new chapter appears because there's a lot to appreciate, but it's bad for re-readability, and whenever I felt like going back because I couldn't remember some detail, well, I often gave up... in fact I kinda lost myself re the party (Amoe etc), I will have to reread the whole thing someday.
Sometimes the way the "good" giantesses in both substories fail to realize their tinies are in whatever kind of discomfort is... not sure how to define it, but one would expect them to be more intuitive, especially when they are not drunk.
No normal sized man... As a giant-male hater it's a bit weird that there's none of them whatsoever (something small, like "omg an unshrunken male", or take a picture to show friends when they come back etc); even assuming they travel there often because of their job.
With that out of the way... just in case I didn't make it abundantly clear in my previous comments, I absolutely -L-O-V-E- this story, and it's nice that we have come to the point when he's finally making a certain important decision.
Aaaaaaand with this comment we are breaking the int7_t barrier! 128th!!!
Author's Response:
Hey el_rooto,
Thanks for the constructive criticism.
I actually think you bring up a fairly good point in terms of the story being too long and now being written over a few years. I think the "wordiness" as you put it, is what I (and i presume others) enjoy about the story, so I dont think that removing that will be something i would ever do, but i think adding a summary of what's happened that's relevant to the current chapter is good idea so people don't have to reread it. It might not be all the details, but i think it's a good start for people. So hopefully this helps.
As to the "good" giantesses critique. I see your point. To be honest, I dont think this story is very realistic - the goal is for it to be believable though, but i think this being a, you know, macrophilia story, i tend to write about what i enjoy - so yea, sometimes it is a bit, unintuitive, which i understand. Just for your own insight, my goal at this point is that, in the college chapters, the girls have varying personalities and the alcohol has made them, well, drunk, and brought out some of their inner desires, a lack of self control and emotional control, which explains what is happening there.
For Dianne, however, my goal is show how she goes from being a "good" giantess, to now being unsure of what she wants, torn between her instincts and a new found pleasure she is experiencing due to the unique circumstances that happened with Mark and sharing with Sarah. Not sure if i did a great job with it, though, which is fair enough.
And yea, as to the giant males - that's just not my thing. I don't really see a reason to add them to the story, to be honest. I understand that it is possible for to add story elements to force normal sized men into the story, but that seems like unnecessary fluff to me, and is not my interest. There are men in the story (besides Mark) but the nature of this story really means that men (besides mark) won't be relevant in general.
Anyway, I'm glad you're enjoying it, and like I said, I appreciate the advice. It really hadn't occurred to me till you posted how difficult it could be to keep track what's happening, so hopefully the summaries help.
Thanks!
-kenny
[Report This]Date: March 16 2022 2:03 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport
I loved. I'm glad you continued the story. It is simply the best story on this site. I liked that Mark accepted being Dianne's pet just because he was afraid to deny it. I hope that in the next chapters Dianne continues to be "cruel" with him thinking that Mark is enjoying it.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
-kenny
[Report This]Date: March 02 2022 7:55 AM Title: Chapter X-51: Slipping Her Mind - Part 4
Allow me to make a suggestion, as I suppose that it would be comical if the stewardesses decided to take Marky back to his native country, where it is legal for women to use miniscule men as insoles.
Author's Response:
Hey Theresa,
Thanks for the suggestion! I do like the idea, but the story is already pretty much planned out at this point - so i can't promise you anything, but I hope you like the way it turns out anyway!
-kenny
[Report This]Date: February 21 2022 8:24 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport Sorry for my English. But I have to say that I love this story, simply the best on the site. I would love to see Dianne reveal to Mark that of the 57 tiny ones she helped, some died in the process because she didn't have the practice. Looking forward to the sequel.
>>Author's Response:
Hey TinyGuy,
Once again, thanks for reading! Glad to hear you like it too. Can't promise anything as the story is pretty much planned out at this point, but I think you'll find the ending somewhat interesting if you like that kind of detail storytelling stuff, I think -or not, who knows, lol.
-kenny
Date: January 21 2022 7:46 PM Title: Chapter X-51: Slipping Her Mind - Part 4
I loved it! I can't wait to go back to the stewardesses
[Report This]Date: January 18 2022 1:46 AM Title: Chapter X: To the airport
Wow. This arc with Amoe's slipper has gotta be the best unaware I've ever read. Bravo. Super inspiring! I really hope we get to see her reaction when she realizes what she's done.
Author's Response:
Hey Badguy,
Thanks! Glad you like it. It's definitely a story arc that emerged kind of naturally as I was writing, but the ideas were bouncing around before. But I agree - it's a worst nightmare/ best dream scenario, depending on what you are into.
-kenny
[Report This]Date: December 29 2021 4:58 AM Title: Chapter X: To the airport
Many thanks for your helpful feedback.
I added various qualities to a new chapter, enjoy a read. I would appreciate your comment.
https://www.giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=10324&chapter=22&textsize=3
Author's Response:
Hey Theresa,
No problem - I'll check it out and leave some feedback when i can!
-kenny
Date: December 14 2021 3:39 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport
Another great chapter of what is probably the best size story ever written.
I'm enjoying the unaware action with amoe a lot, though I hope she doesn't end up liking it or eventually recognizes the truth about how he feels about being shrunk, I think her genuinely being nice and wholesome would be a nice break from everyone else being fairly murderous.
I like that even though she is close with him and friendly, at this size she could easily accidentally kill him
Author's Response:
Hey Wutt,
Thanks for the review. And yes - Amoe is a foil who will require quite a lot to turn on Mark - she is a good natured sole, albeit a bit gullible and clumsy.
-kenny
Date: December 14 2021 4:29 AM Title: Chapter X-50: Slipping Her Mind - Part 3
Honestly feel like hes been trapped in this shoe forever, hopefully he'll get out soon and amoe and crystal can tease him. Also significantly enjoy that college story arc over the other one with Sarah is it? So hope you focus more on that one:)
Author's Response:
Hey Jason,
Yep - he has been in the slipper for quite a while, although that part of the story is basically at it's end now. But yes, the college arc isn't quite over yet :)
Thanks for the review!
-kenny
[Report This]Date: November 30 2021 3:57 AM Title: Chapter X-39: The Hike
Most high-quality hiking socks are made of moisture-wicking threads, which is designed to transfer the perspiration to the surface for swift evaporation to keep the feet dry. That would mean Dianne’s sweat will be transferred to Mark’s oral cavity rapidly, so Mark should have gotten plenty to drink.
Author's Response:
Hey Theresa!
Thanks for the info - can't say the story is 100% realistic then - but, oh well!
kenny
[Report This]Date: November 26 2021 5:32 AM Title: Chapter X-27: Daydreaming
Had to come back and read back over this chapter. And am every bit as amazed at how incredibly well written it is. The way that the mother revealed the fate of the fellows family members. And spoke to him throughout the chapter was award level devious. Especially considering that these were some of the earliest men to have been shrunk in the program. So they likely had never even heard so much as rumors of the things that darker things that women were putting the shrunken ones through.
You truly are a master of your craft my friend. This story takes one of my favorite sizeplay scenarios to the absolute max, and I love it!
Author's Response:
Yea that was a "fun" chapter to write, haha.
-kenny
[Report This]Date: November 11 2021 5:26 AM Title: Chapter X-49: Slipping Her Mind - Part 2
I'll tell you, I certainly don't mind seeing you focusing so much on the flashback chapters. Especially considering that Amoe is getting much screen time. :) To see Mark suffer so much at the hands and feet of easily the sweetest of his friends, is irony at it's finest. And the fact that through most if it she's been completely unaware makes it that much more devastating.
These past few chapters have definitely showcased how this previously strong and independent person was completely broken down. And why he was willing to leave behind his friends, family and home country to make the perilous journey across the world. Just for the hope of regaining some of what was lost to him. Is there any chance that Tracy will feature in some chapters? Would love to learn more about how Mark ended up in her hands. And the events that lead up to her building him back up enough to attempt the smuggling. :)
In the meantime, I can't wait to see how things develop with Amoe. Your descriptions of everything that is happening both inside and outside the slipper have been pretty fantastic. Particularly when it comes to subtle shift in Mark's perspective. As he's started to find it harder and harder to see those around him as people. So much as godly beings. Who's toes can hardly even be bothered to acknowledge his existence. :)
Author's Response:
Hey Theodous,
Thanks again for the review.
Tracy will not be featured in this story, unfortunately. Perhaps in the future I may write a sibling series where she would be featured, but that's more of an idea than anything.
-kenny
Date: October 31 2021 2:45 AM Title: Chapter X-49: Slipping Her Mind - Part 2 This story is amazing, I can't wait to find out what will happen between Mark and Dianne
>>Author's Response:
Yep, sorry for the delay on that, kind of focusing on finishing this Amoe slipper subsection which i wrote wayyy too much on, haha.
-kenny
[Report This]Date: October 10 2021 8:18 AM Title: Chapter X-20: The Meeting: Goodbyes
kelly is awesome!
Author's Response:
Yes, yes she is.
-kenny
[Report This]Date: October 04 2021 12:50 PM Title: Chapter X-48: Slipping Her Mind - Part 1
Excellent chapter yet again! I'm definitely a bigger fan of the flashback half of this series. And I think it was a wise decision to split this current arc up into multiple chapters. It'll make it more easily digestible.
I think you did a great job paralleling the perspectives of Amoe and Mark. It made the unaware action feel more dynamic.
Personally, I think you've struck gold with your college arc cast of characters, and I hope you consider doing more with them after this whole story is finished up.
Looking forward to the next chapters in this arc!
Author's Response:
Hey Sheograth,
Thanks again for the review! These next few chapters are definitely going to be flashback, and honestly, the flashback chapters may end up being longer than current timeline.
Although i do like both stories myself :)
-kenny