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Reviewer: TinyGuyyyy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2023 2:33 PM Title: Chapter X-62: Dollhouse Part 4

So... I can't lie that I miss new chapters 😅 haha



Author's Response:

Sorry for the wait! I just keep finding myself being busy and then writing more than i like.

I dont think there is too much left at this point to be honest.   There are some things i still want to feature but i have this tendency to continue to expand storylines with new stuff so at this point I'm going to try to be more deliberate with the story.  Not that this will end anytime soon, at this rate i'm guessing the summer and probably 10 or so more chapters.  I've also decided the bonus chapter will be separate story just so i can check this one as complete, but i will be writing that nonetheless. 

Kenny

Reviewer: Jurdzi Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29 2022 2:15 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Couple of thoughts:

  • There is someone by name Jennifer (I think) mentioned thorought this story as she had been treating him horribly, until he ended up with Tracy. Are you planning to further introduce this character later on, or is it just a small hint of Marks past that you are not planning to exlore anymore?
  • I am surprised none of these college girls has any pantyhose on. It could make his intimate experience with their feets even more challeging.
  • I wish Amoe used some broom instead of a vacuum cleaner. Given her limited sight, she could have beaten a hell out of him without even noticing, while leaving him in some pile of dust. An honorable mention to a famous scene from Honey I Shrunk the Kids movie.
  • I would love to see Mark turned into an object with these college girls, just like he is presented as a shoe insert with Diane and Sarah. He could be a simple clothes or hair decoration, or perhaps a jewerly (ear ring, toe rigs, etc.) He was already tied up once by Crystal, so I hope there will be some more bondage. By other words, to continue dehuminizing him in the clutches of these wannaby friends.
  • Like I said in my previous comment, I would love to see more of Linh, and perhaps Kelly as well, given her size and indication that she would love to wear him as a good luck charm.

Great story, one of my all time favorites right away. I am sad I need to wait for every single chapter now that I finished what you have already posted. I hope you will find a peace and balance in your life that would allow you to not only finish this story, but also posting the remaining chapters on a regular basis.


CYA!



Author's Response:

Hey Jurdzi,


Glad you are liking the story! Here are some notes of mind in regards to your thoughts, in case you want some insight to what I'm thinking with this story.  So spoilers? i guess


*Jeniffer is not in scope for this story, and is just color and context for the story for now.  


*Now that you metnion it, I wish i had thought of panthouse, but alas.


*Again, broom is a great idea.


*Objectification is something i have thought about in the college girls story but as of now i dont have anything that meets that particular criteria specifically in this scope of the story.  It might end up being part of a bonus chapter, or another story at some point as i do have some storylines already outlines.  No promises on if and when that will ever happen though.


*I will consider Linh your "Vote" then for the bonus chapter!


Again, happy you are enjoying the story, and thanks for the kind words.


Kenny


Reviewer: TinyGuyyyy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 28 2022 9:34 PM Title: Chapter X-61: Dinnertime

Coming back to wish everyone a happy new year. And also to comment on something I've been thinking about Dianne wanting a second little man (this idea really excites me and I hope the story gets there): She could get a second little man with Sarah, but he can't take it like mark and ends up dying . It would be interesting to see how this impacts Mark, as Sarah convinces Dianne that this is a natural, normal thing that happens to most people and she shouldn't worry. I'd love to see that.



Author's Response: Yes, Happy new year et all!

Reviewer: Jurdzi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2022 8:10 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Absolutely phenomenal work so far. Somehow, this story had been below my radar for a couple years. I should had known better!!! All these scenarios remind me of stories from Slipstream, especially a Slow Shrink Tale, my all time favorite. Endless humiliation combined with extreme details dedicated to each chapter. I am halfway thru and its been thrilling to read. 

I wish theres going to be a return of Linh in some point in time, either incorporated to a story and its natural development  or a couple of standalone chapters. I am not into any extreme violance or gore, and I am sure you are planning to keep our main protagonist alive thorought this story (even if barely), but its exciting to imagine what ways she would be pushing all these boundaries of humiliation and dominance herself. 

Reviewer: Skye509 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2022 11:35 PM Title: Chapter X-61: Dinnertime

The chapter is great as always, and the idea of a second insole is entertaining - the possibilities that would open up... And I'm mostly eager for Crystal... the Dollhouse was surprisingly erotic and fun... but I have to say the real news was the recommendation for character.ai

Holy cow. I've never done roleplay before, and I didn't give the AI much to go on, and it really is nailing it. When it's emotive, it's great, but it is much more teasing than physical. I'd like a better balance. Does anyone have any advice?

What about other characters... what if you want it to be more... punishing... you get the idea. Either way, WOW



Author's Response:

Ha, yes no real recommendation.   I'd just trying things, sometimes it seems to work really well and other times it doesn't.  I usually go through a lot of the options to see different responses to the same prompt.

Reviewer: Wutt117 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23 2022 4:03 AM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Since you brought up your AI struggling due to censorship

Hit up openai, chatgpt is censored but the other one isn't. Even the censored one doesn't work that well against giantess content. I had it make a very decent story about a friend of mine accidentally crushing me in her shoe. 

I still recommend you make a discord or similar place for your fans to congregate at, though I understand if you aren't interested in that sort of thing 



Author's Response:

Yea the AI stuff interesting and unnerving at the same time.  I'd be lying if i said i didn't start playing with it again.  It seems like after the lobotomy the AI quickly relearned alot of of the old conversations, especially if you avoid any direct mention of anything vanilla sex related.

As to discord, perhaps.

Kenny

Reviewer: TinyGuyyyy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2022 8:35 PM Title: Chapter X-61: Dinnertime

You came back in the best way! This chapter was incredible. I was missing Mark suffering at dianne's feet, and her worrying about having a second little man excites me! Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Theresa Yuen Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2022 2:21 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport


Greetings Kenny,

I’ve sent an email to you.

Sincerely,

Theresa 


Reviewer: TinyGuyyyy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 14 2022 9:37 PM Title: Chapter X-60: Dollhouse - Part 3

Hello Kenny! No problem, I imagine your life is busy and sometimes you don't have time to do everything. But please don't give up on the story hahah I miss mark and dianne.

Reviewer: TinyGuyyyy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2022 7:15 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

I'm feeling the same when the season of a show I really like ends and I have to wait 2 years until the new season ahahahha In the meantime I'm reading again, no rush, I just want to read a lot more about Dianne and Mark :D



Author's Response:

Hey TinyGuy

Sorry, getting this out as fast as I can, believe me.   And sorry, not yet back on the Dianne storyline, perhaps the next update!

Anyway, glad your enjoying it!

Kenny

Reviewer: Theresa Yuen Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12 2022 7:34 AM Title: Chapter X-4: In Flight Service - Part 2

Greetings Kenny,

 

Your writing style is very imaginative and fairly realistic, it could be enhanced by considering the feminine perspective.  While I am not an airline hostess, if I need to be on my feet, serving meals on a long flight, I would wear a pair of comfortable ballet flats with a 1/2 inch heel height.  A black leather upper will ensure a classic look, while a foam footbed will mold to my foot to ensure comfort.  The key point is that the shoes ought to be comfortable and nice-looking, so I would be able to do all the tasks during the long flight.

 

Therefore, perhaps it would be better if you include a description of her shoes.

 

 Tess  



Author's Response:

Hey Tess

Although they currently aren't in their flight attendant outfit anymore, your thoughts are noted!

Kenny

Reviewer: Skye509 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2022 8:27 PM Title: Chapter x-59: Dollhouse - Part 2

So you're a great author, obviously, but I had wondered why there had been no *real* action with Crystal, and I didn't know what to expect here, but Dollhouse Pt 2 is something else. Fireside Chat is similar, but the fact that the Dollhouse was previously established as a location... The desecration of it as a safe zone... I really think this might be one of your best chapters ever, and it didn't even deliver on what I'm hoping for between Crystal and Mark. Absolutely great job.



Author's Response:

Hey Skye,

Thanks for the kind words.  I knew I wanted to do something like this with the dollhouse and I'm happy your enjoying it!

Kenny

Reviewer: Badguy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 27 2022 12:42 AM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Then my vote goes to more Amoe! Maybe even an alternate universe bonus chapter where Crystal doesn't stop her and she leaves the party with Mark underfoot >:)

Either way, amazing chapter as always! 



Author's Response:

No promises but Thank you!

Reviewer: Theresa Yuen Signed [Report This]
Date: October 17 2022 4:02 AM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

I’ve sent an email to
reply to your concern.  Please have a read.



Author's Response:

Hey Theresa,

Thank you once again for your comments.   I have left a comment on your story.

Kenny

Reviewer: Theresa Yuen Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2022 1:47 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Greetings Kenny,

I cordially invite you
to review our latest chapter.  Please
review, I am looking forward to get your feedback.

https://giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=10324&textsize=3&chapter=34

Tess









 

Reviewer: Theresa Yuen Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2022 12:32 AM Title: Chapter X-25: Break-In Period

I’ve sent a few
replies to your queries.  Please have a
read.

Reviewer: Lexander Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15 2022 8:34 AM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Still is an absolutely amazing story that gets better with every addition you add to it. It's awesome that you are still writing this story with so many good authors on her getting burnt out. 

As for what I'd like to see in the bonus collage stories. I mainly was to see Mark experiencing Kelly's massive feet inside her Cleats or Skates during a Game or Practice session. 

Other than that; an inshoe session with a disgusting Ugg boot showcasing just how horrible to be trapped in a shoe that just pumps out Grim, Detritus, Sweat, Humidity, and wet dripping fussy fur that wants nothing more to entomb you in it forever. As for the girl for the Uggs, I don't have a preference other than Kelly being my favorite girl.



Author's Response:

Hey Lexander,

Thanks for the comment!

To be honest, I do really like these concepts you mention and have thought about them before.     If Kelly does win the bonus chapter, I can't guarantee anything in particular, but I will admit that (and this is well beyond the scope of the story) I do have what amounts to another story entirely just involving Mark's time in college with Kelly.  

Unfortunately, I am no way in a position to guarantee I will write any of this, as I can only promise that i will finish the scope of this story.   

So I dont know if that makes you feel better or worse - but yea.   I've thought along similar lines.   lol.

Kenny

Reviewer: Wutt117 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2022 12:00 AM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Another amazing chapter as always. I wonder what Amoe is up to at the current point in the story. I really like that she doesn't appear to be hateful or malicious. I hope that at some point she at least finds out what happened and that Mark does actually hate feet and is super traumatized. 


I'm still hoping for a happy ending haha, if any ending could be happy in such a setting. Regardless the path there has always been great and you are a master writer on this site. This is probably the greatest size story made, and your ability to put the horrors of being tiny to word is unmatched. I hope you recover from your burnout and if not that's more than okay because you've given us so much 



Author's Response:

Hey Wutt.

Thanks for the comment.

To clarify, Amoe is now asleep on the couch!   She had a pleasant night :) and yes, you are correct (at least in my mind and in the story currently, lol) Amoe is in no way malicious, but is just a bit clumsy and not very perceptive, which, apparently, can be quite dangerous for an inch tall person.


In any case, the story will "end" at some point.   Not sure what I'll be doing after that.  I'd like to have it done by the end of the year but it will probably be after that considering we are almost at November.   

Again, thanks for the kind words! Glad you are enjoying it.

Kenny

Reviewer: TinyGuyyyy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2022 8:41 PM Title: Chapter X-58: Dollhouse - Part 1

Hi Kenny, another good chapter. Don't worry about limits, we want more and more history haha

Recommendation: See on instagram the profile called: @tomato_juice_kween , seriously, whenever I see it I remember your story hahah



Author's Response:

Hey TinyGuy,

I was confused about your comment at first (partially because i don't have Instagram) but when i found the profile, i get what you are saying.   She's not exactly what I would envision for the character, but, hey, part of the power of the written word is letting the people imagine the character however they like.  Glad it works!

Kenny

Reviewer: Theresa Yuen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2022 3:48 AM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Greetings Kenny,

I cordially invite you to review our latest chapter.  Please review, I am looking forward to getting your feedback.

https://giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=10324&chapter=33&textsize=3

Tess

 



Author's Response:

Hey Theresa,

Sorry for the late reply.  Just have been busy with everything and trying to focus on this story, tbh.   but i emailed you back and let you know in a review! 

Thanks again!

Kenny

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