On the contrary to below I rather like that that dianne is supposedly helping him or at least has good intentions but doesnt realize how much pain he is in or that she is torturing him. As for what I hope for? I'd like a crushing scene, a slow crushing scene over a few steps with any character, we still have two other men at the party who can accidentally fall into someone's shoe or even the pov of someone dianne accidentally killed in the past.

I swear you could have made a story just about this Meeting arc and it still would have been a good enough story on its own. But the fact that this is just a flashback to your main story is even crazier.

In case I wasn't clear, I still think you're doing a phenomenal job with this arc. The main characters of this chapter (Kelly, Naru, and Ani) are all great and the way they all playfully yet forcefully interacted with Mark while frequently underestimating their own strength was awesome to read. In a less unforgiving setting, this could be the start of a fun life for him.

Keep up the good work!

Given that she believes he's enjoying himself, and how he's basically given up, I wouldn't surprised if she proposed him to work with her long term.

I'm curious to see if anyone is going to mention the kisses btw :D

Damn this is getting steamy! a+ on your inshoe and foot descriptions. excited for more!

This chapter was pretty incredible. I've often mused what it would really be like to be shrunken to a fraction of one's former size. And sealed away some place like this. Completely beyond the notice of all around. Never knowing if the next footfall of your captor would mark the end of your very existence. The fact that even with the best of intentions, Dianne is subjecting Mark to this kind of mental anguish, is pretty powerful. 

I find myself wondering what it was like for the previous people that she smuggled this way. If they had faired any better than Mark. Or if perhaps they had already met an untimely end before Dianne even got situated on the plane. Either which way, the part with her giving him water while he remained trapped is one of my favorites so far. :)

Excellent chapter.

Even though you said there wouldn't be a lot of action in this one, I think that the way you described everything accurately depicted how tinies would react to a group of women meeting up. And your decision to have them stay in a doll house on the floor allowed you to really focus on the size difference and scale between them.

With this group of characters you just introduced, the potential for additional stories with them is really high. I don't know what you plan for the rest of the flashback, but I think it'd be interesting for Mark to interact one-on-one with each of the girls. You could easily add them at the end as bonus chapters if you've got something else planned.

You also did a great job with the unaware portions, where each of their absentminded actions could potentially end the tiniest, and the women wouldn't even notice right away.

Good luck with the rest of this arc!

Wow, this is starting to get good. Heck, you even have some famous authors reviewing. Good job! (Thanks for the reply, it meant a lot. I have actually, with the last chapter.)

Author's Response:

Glad you're liking it!  

Chapter X-5 reads like a conservative fever dream of what they think feminism is. You should watch the video from this YouTube channel - Knowing Better called “Taking the Red Pill”. Clears up a lot of misconceptions people have about feminism and its relation to men. Just a few things I’ll say here though. Toxic Masculinity is not men acting masculine, it’s men being told that they have to act a certain way or else they aren’t real men. It’s men being told that they need to “stop crying like a little bitch”. It’s men being told they can’t be emotionally vulnerable. And the Patriarchy is not just something that men use to oppress women, it’s something that works within society to force all people into specific roles. Not only does it say that women belong in the kitchen, it also says that men have to be the breadwinners of the house. The patriarchy is when a guy is looked down upon for staying home to watch the kids while his wife goes to work. Just keep an open mind about this stuff man.

Author's Response:

Hey sir! Thanks for the feedback.

Rebeca is my kinda owner. No thought about what a little one thinks. She gets two for the price of one. At least for a while.

It's always good to show respect. Maybe address Ms. Trent as Ms. Trent or Mrs. Trent and answer her with Yes Ma'am to show respect. No confusion so far with the ladies.