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Reviewer: Drex Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07 2020 5:05 AM Title: Chapter X-39: The Hike

Picked up this one recently, and I love your writing style! I admit you have me getting anxious as the chapters advance. I'd love to see Mark manage to retain his mind, and gain his freedom, but that's looking slimmer and slimmer as the chapters go on. Still super intrigued by how you intend to end this either way. 

 

You've done a great job building up this story and adding tension, and your detail and characters are great!



Author's Response:

Hey Drex!

Thanks! It's all kind of off the cuff so you'll have to forgive me if i take some creative liberties.

Glad you like it!

kenny

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: November 03 2020 4:52 PM Title: Chapter X-39: The Hike

Just a bunch of quick notes, and a couple of typos that confused me:

  • "No standing in my shoe" - she's really a natural!
  • "Mark tiny body to pulsed"?? and btw, is he supposed to pulse? is that what his duties feel like to Diane?
  • "my burnt cut lips my distinctly"??
  • I was almost expecting Sarah to remind her she's forgotten to let him drink both now & before leaving (or that he doesn't need to because she's providing plenty of liquids); I'll forgive her because it's her first tiny, and he loves her!

 

PS

In case I didn't make it clear already, I absolutely love this story!



Author's Response:

Hey rooto,

Thanks for the notes, it's seriously appreciated.  Went back and updated those mistakes.  I try to edit, but sometimes i do better than others.

And glad to hear you like the story!

kenny

Reviewer: Foxinbox Signed [Report This]
Date: November 03 2020 12:06 AM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Fuck I'm really rooting for mark to get a happy ending and not one with his mind broken and him seemingly happy, but one where he's actually happy and free but alas I'm don't think it's in the cards for mark but anyway this is prob one the hottest story's IMO and very sad story's. Fuck I'm anxious about how this will end.


keep up the good work 


P.S I vote for amoe 



Author's Response:

Hey fox,

Thanks!  hopefully you like the "ending" :p

noted!

-kenny

Reviewer: Wutt117 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02 2020 9:38 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

My vote is for Amoe, I kinda want to see her crush someone and then learn what she did to Mark at the same time, maybe have it all fall on her and make her feel awful. 

Regardless, I like her chapters the most.

Reviewer: Robbie Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2020 8:19 PM Title: Chapter X-38: Amoe's gift

I have to vote for Amoe because it kind of makes sense that she should end up seeing mark again or possibly keeping him forever. My reason is that she seems the most genuine towards helping shrinkies but is unaware she is tormenting mark. i want to see more of her cruel kindness 



Author's Response:

Hey Robbie,

Cruel kindness indeed

kenny

Reviewer: Barachiel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2020 5:42 AM Title: Chapter X-38: Amoe's gift

Hmm...I might have to change my vote to Linh. Amoe is one of my favorites, but I confess that I'm ready for a shift from all these people that are oblivious to the point of stupidity when it comes to not realizing what Mark wants. At least Linh won't care. And I'm not criticizing your writing at all! I just think Linh was the one that stood out compared to the others.



Author's Response:

In terms of the characters, alcohol has been involved, and tinies are still new to them - but yes, they are acting quite stupid.  I confess i do enjoy unaware a lot :p

In any case, noted!

 

 

Reviewer: Betaux Signed [Report This]
Date: October 19 2020 2:48 AM Title: Chapter X-37: Downtime - Part 4

Got dammm please just hook this story up to my veins. So frigging good and so happy you’re back at it, Ken! I knew you wouldn’t abandon us (even though some of us - such as myself - suck at remembering to review).

Anyhoo... my vote is for the character you most wanna write, whomever that might be.



Author's Response:

Hey Betaux!

Ha, no worries.  I'm writing this as much for myself as for the community, but the review is appreciated.  

And yes, while i do have ideas about who i might prefer, i have basically a story for every character that i would enjoy writing, so it really doesn't matter to me.  But i'll keep it in mind!

Kenny

Reviewer: Barachiel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2020 3:49 PM Title: Chapter X-37: Downtime - Part 4

I vote for Amoe!



Author's Response:

noted!

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2020 12:30 PM Title: Chapter X-37: Downtime - Part 4

Dianne as a good goddess is just the best!

Not sure about anyone else; personally it vaguely reminds me of the chapter in the original story with the marriage counselor, there should be a story about reprogramming a tiny husband/boyfriend to love his much bigger significant other imho :)


PS

Just out of curiosity: why was this story FM/f one update ago?

 

PPS

I can't vote, I'm following too many stories and I have some of the characters mixed together in my head; just pretend that you have one more vote, ok?



Author's Response:

Hey El Rooto!

The reason why it was listed FM/f is b/c i'm a moron.  I either didn't know what that was or accidentally picked it, so it was entirely a mistake. (actually, that does mean Giant female giant male, small female, correct? lol still not sure exactly)  there are basically no males in this story besides Mark, and there will certainly not be any fetish related content with larger male characters.  

and noted on your vote, lol!

kenny

Reviewer: Wwsl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2020 4:16 PM Title: Chapter X-37: Downtime - Part 4

First of all, I chose Linh,secondly, I prefer mature characters,like mom and aunt.Thank you for your story.



Author's Response:

You're welcome!

Reviewer: Croujita Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15 2020 2:25 AM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Voting for Linh, she really needs to get a tiny American into her clutches



Author's Response:

Noted!

Reviewer: rileyguy777 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 13 2020 4:55 AM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

So happy to see you back for a new chapter. This quickly became my favorite story on the site, and I was beginning to worry it was going to be abandoned!

Your imagination is completely devious and cruel...exactly what I look for in a giantess story! You're a master at capturing the hopelessness of being shrunken underneath an uncaring goddess. I didn't think anyone else on the site would match FTFeet's stories, but you've proven me wrong. 

Keep up the great work! Can't wait to see what kinds of scenarios you dream up in the future lol



Author's Response:

Hey Riley,

Nope, not abandoned.  As i mentioned in this last update, plan on "finishing" the story by my year anniversary of the start, so hopefully there is some conclusion.

Anyway, glad to hear you're enjoying it.

 

-kenny

Reviewer: Theodous Signed [Report This]
Date: September 10 2020 4:30 AM Title: Chapter X-34: The Shower

Was going to request that Amoe be the one who gets their own chapter. Though it seems that this part of the story might be leading into Mark getting more alone time with her. I have to say that the whole trick Crystal did with using her hair to tie up mark was pretty ingenious. :) 

Though I'm more than a little surprised that she put him in the soap. Considering how possesive she is becoming of him. I would think she wouldn't want the other women using Mark. Or for that matter, risking him being accidently killed or washed down the drain. That woman is something else. 



Author's Response:

Hey Theo,

 

That women is something else! Ha!

 

Glad your enjoying it!

Reviewer: Scoopity2013 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 09 2020 10:13 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Hey man hope you're doing good. Can't wait to continue reading this story, waiting in between chapters is a killer!!! 



Author's Response:

Hey Scoopity.  

Sorry, just busy and lazy lol.  I plan on "finishing" this story though, so be on the look out.  Happy your enjoying it!

Reviewer: Barachiel Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 26 2020 8:52 AM Title: Chapter X-35: Down TIme - Part 3

I’m really enjoying this story, though it is disappointing that Dianne is so dismissive of the tiny’s pleas for her to help him like she originally agreed to do. Also casting my vote for Amoe or Linh for other chapters!

Reviewer: Scoopity2013 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2020 3:34 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Happy to see you back and feeling better man as always looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks Scoopity!

Reviewer: Wwsl Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18 2020 8:03 AM Title: Chapter X-34: The Shower

I'm sorry to hear that,your talent is great,hope everything will be fine.And because I like cruel thingsa292;so I like Lin and Sarah'mother very much,they have an frightening sense of bullying:)However,wish you good luck.



Author's Response:

Hey Wwsl,

I"m good now.  Hope you're ok.

Linh is definitely a character i'd like to write about, and i promise you, if she's chosen, Mark will not be having fun. :p

Kenny

Reviewer: Sheograth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2020 9:00 PM Title: Chapter X-34: The Shower

Great chapter all around! It's very enjoyable to see characters like Amoe say playfully teasing things (in their eyes) that are actually terrifying for the tiny character. And unaware showers are always enjoyable concepts, and you're doing well with it so far.

As for characters, I'm partial to Ani, so anything with her would be good in my book. Though Amoe is a close second.

Hope you're feeling better!



Author's Response:

Hey Sheogorath,

Thanks!  The shower chapter is actually suprisingly difficult for me to write for some reason, which added to the slow down.  Trying to give the story some variety and not be 100% foot focused (although that's obvioulsy the theme).

Kenny

Reviewer: hunterfury22 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16 2020 1:45 PM Title: Chapter X-34: The Shower

I am still glad that you are okay. And for a extra chapeter. Maybe a chapter with Kelly's foot where he marries it and ends up in a honey moon with her? Or perhaps a spin off with that? Glad that you are okay. One of my favorite stories.



Author's Response:

Hey Hunter,

I actually have thought a lot about the Kelly storyline.  Regardless of what's the popular decision, i'm sure that she will be further written, either as part of a seperate story or here, i'm not entirely sure.  

Kenny

Reviewer: Scoopity2013 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13 2020 4:46 PM Title: Chapter X: To the airport

Hey man hope you’re staying well during all of this, can’t wait for the next chapter

Author's Response:

I ended being busy and getting sick (hooray!) but i'm fine now.  This chapter isn't one of my favorites but the story must go on!

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