[Report This]Date: January 19 2023 5:57 AM Title: Pre-game
Hard to believe all the 5-star reviews. I think the story has some potential and some variety of good ideas are employed. Just speaking for my opinion - and I'm a lover of vore stories - but to me, the story lacks any emotional punch. And suspense buildup is minimal. Having different characters eat or squash tiny persons who are completely unknown to me doesn't really do anything for me. We should know something about the tiny's being eaten and it should be more than their looks, their name and their gender. Also, how were they invited to the party? We need to see what treachery was involved to coerce these guys to go to the party. Were any of them aware of any rumors by this particular sorority? There is so much that can be added, but it could be made into a great story. Anyway, I mean everything here as constructive criticism, not as mockery or to discourage you in any way.
Date: March 02 2020 1:40 PM Title: Hunting
I like the idea of giantess party, It's great story for me
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! I figure giantesses should throw all the parties they can - who can stop them?
[Report This]Date: November 04 2019 9:18 PM Title: Jackie
Okay, I'm curious. What was the correct answer to the final question? I think it may be a traumatic experience, but I may be wrong.
Author's Response:
The last question is a Planescape: Torment reference, and the answer is the same here as it was there - whatever the answerer thinks is the true answer, instead of trying to guess what the asker wants to hear. He failed on that, just as Jackie knew he would.
[Report This]Date: November 01 2019 4:20 PM Title: Pre-game
I must admit that I was not entirely awake for that last sentence. But now that I think about it, maybe that would be good. Let's see if you would still call Fulda perfectly balanced :P
Also thx for writing a response to all of my reviews
Author's Response:
I think I'd like that, really get a chance to evaluate how well-made my creation is! Maybe she'd have mercy on her creator :P
Not a problem! It's a joy talking with my fans.
[Report This]Date: November 01 2019 3:04 PM Title: Pre-game
Great job my dude. The story definitely got me in the Halloween spirit.
And good idea with having Lana be the unaware focused character, since she doesn't seem as keen to go into the crueler side of things like everyone else.
Good luck on your next story project.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yeah, Lana's just their sexy librarian friend who hangs out now and then, she's not really into the whole "shrink and torment people for the fun of it" thing.
Good luck on yours too!
Date: November 01 2019 9:35 AM Title: Pre-game
All these little men, and so little time for the giant ladies.
This is a good first chapter, dialogue is mostly natural and the paragraphs flow rather smoothly so you get a good introduction to the whole story.
Author's Response:
One of these days they'll get a chance to just sit down, relax, and talk with their shrunken men. They'll probably still destroy them afterward, but it'll be a fun time.
Thanks, i'm glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: October 31 2019 2:03 PM Title: Hunting
Here we go again, sorry I had to Go to work.
Hmm. This chapter is called hunting, which implies that it should be some kind of challenging for these girls to catch the tinies, but that doesn't seem to be the case as usual. Poor tiniest, they thought they would be going to a nice party and then this.
Well, at least it's better for us. Thumbs up on the writing and thank you for brightening up this Halloween.
See you in the next story, hopefully.
Author's Response:
It could've been a challenge if the tinies were smarter, but they were too inexperienced to make it fun for them. So the ladies had to make their own fun.
No problem! Glad I could make your Halloween better.
See me "in" the next story? What did I do to earn such a cordial deathwish?
[Report This]Date: October 31 2019 1:21 AM Title: Lana
A nice way to introduce some unaware. Or lure the new girl into it. But I must also say that she looks to be practically blind, not seeing those times. But I gotta say I hope she has a future at this sorority. They can always use some more klutzes, way to many of these sorority girls are too perfect.
Author's Response:
Perfect, except for their penchant for abuse and murder :P She may or may not be back, since she had a good time but didn't really get their party game.
[Report This]Date: October 31 2019 1:18 AM Title: Olga
Ahh, so this is the Mastermind behind it all. Such a shame her guy was unable to hold her. It would have been such a good match.
Author's Response:
You give Olga too much credit, all the magic was Jackie's doing. He did get to hold her, just a little more of her than he expected.
[Report This]Date: October 31 2019 1:15 AM Title: Li
Finally an interesting one. Li and her new friend will at least be together for more than a few minutes. I think she was also right with her wardrobe this time . Seems like living in all those books paid off.
Author's Response:
Wish I could've focused more on Li's outfit, but it just wasn't in the cards. They've got more than a few minutes, that muscle will take a while I'm sure.
[Report This]Date: October 31 2019 1:13 AM Title: Helen
Meddling with a genie on Halloween. What could possibly go wrong? Well, at least our genie didn't get all her wishes fulfilled, rightfully so, Ms impatient. It's as if she has never learned to relax a bit when she doesn't get what she wants.
Author's Response:
Helen is known for having stress freak-outs, so I don't think chilling out is on her to-do ist. She did get her last wish though - crush one tiny and capture another!
[Report This]Date: October 31 2019 1:10 AM Title: Fulda
Seems like this knight was terribly outmatched. No way was he ever going to take this monster down. Fulda is simply OP
Author's Response:
She's not OP, she's perfectly balanced. He just needed to git gud.
[Report This]Date: October 31 2019 1:08 AM Title: Jackie
Aww, he was doing so well. Now I'm also wondering what a valid answer is according to Jackie. It almost looks like she is simply looking for an excuse to crush him anyway. Such a pity she doesn't see anything in simply having a fun hangout with tiny people that lasts more than a few minutes. I think these ladies are to focussed on killing and should chill out a bit. This doesn't seem like a relaxing party .
Author's Response:
Where he messed up with that riddle is giving an answer he thought she wanted to hear, rather than what he thought the answer is. The party is very relaxing for the women, and that's all they care about! Maybe the'll have a chill hang later on ;)
[Report This]Date: October 31 2019 1:04 AM Title: Pre-game
Ooh, 8 chapters posted at once. Now I have a lot of reviewing to do. It seems this sorority still exists and people still come to their parties despite veryone just dissapearing there including investigative police officers. You would think the national guard would be at their doorstep by now. Or are they afraid of what they might find ;)
Author's Response:
They just keep disappearing because they know their lives have peked afterward and went off the grid, of course. I don't think there'll be any more interlopers for a bit, regardless of agency.