Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2020 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 3

Compared to others, your story may be slow in developing; yet your story is much more realistic in being so.

Really like the sexual tension between Emilia and Becky.

Now that Emilia has Francois and Michael prisoners in a fish tank, how can she convince the rest of the tinies that she is safe to be with without the consent of those two {unless the rest of the group will believe Becky's testimony alone}?  That's assuming Emilia is determined to possess the rest of the group.

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2020 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 2

Hmmm, the fact that many, if not all of the tinies are convicts {apparently Becky, and perhaps others are actually innocent prison guards} leaves open the question: 'Better to be imprisoned by Emilia than try to survive as a tiny amongst animals and insects that want to eat you".

Even though this was breifly discussed, the reality of their deadly situation must be setting in amoungst most of the prisoners.

Who are the ones who shrunk them?  Is Angela going to become part of the situation, perhaps deciding to retain and punish a few prisoners for her personal amusement?

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: redeyes98 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30 2019 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is a great story i cant wait to see the rest.

Author's Response:

Thank you. At least 2 more chapters to come.