Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: October 28 2019 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

WOW!  Exceptionally great story.

Your writing style is easy to read as it flows very smooth with nice grammar.

Your "quick to the point" approach keeps the story line moving along at an interesting pace.

The premise is not only intriguing, it's fantastic.

Please keep up the story.

 

Author's Response: Thank you for all the kind words! I wrote this almost a year ago for a contest, so it’s been quite a while since I’ve thought about it. I’ll definitely consider continuing this because it’s definitely a fun world to explore.