Date: October 06 2019 2:31 AM Title: The shoe shop
i always liked the aspect of the item siiting there waiting to be used think you can draw that out a bit little more please?
Author's Response:
Definitely, the last chapter will have some sections of off foot waiting
[Report This]Date: October 01 2019 3:39 PM Title: The shoe shop
I like all Your stories, but this one is just brilliant.I hope Ayla and her friend discover how comfortable these shoes are, especially sockless and will be use them until fall apart.
Author's Response:
You may enjoy the latest chapter in which ayla goes sockless to a party
Date: September 28 2019 3:20 PM Title: The shoe shop
Favourite story of them all so far. Love the details about smells and tastes, and how Ayla is going about life completely oblivious to what she's putting you through. I'd love to see her go about a normal day: waking up way too late to shower, getting ready in a rush, burning up at at work, going for an afternoon run, and finally going out to a party (maybe forgetting to take her shoes off at the end of the night). The longer and more detailed the better, can't wait to see where you take this.
Author's Response:
I rekon this story will end with 3 chapters, a chapter about aylas day, then one about her night