Reviewer: whackamole1 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27 2020 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 5

Sorry to hear that you have been having a hard time. I did like the last 2 chapters. Just some things that I noticed.

In chapter 4 it's mentioned that he hears the thunder of 6 gigantic sized kids rushing towards their mothers, but Celia only has 3 daughters by herself. Is there another gigantic mother with daughters in the area? Celia has a dildo sub that he can climb in, with a replica of her pussy that he can copulate with. But considering that she has advanced suits to protect him, even one that the beginning of chapter 5 hints is strong enough to pass through her digestive tract, him copulating with a replica of her genitals seems a little underwhelming considering she surely has protection suits that could allow him to explore the real thing without being crushed or smothered. He's the size of an ant to her so there's no hole or orifice in her midsection that's off limits to him should he go "cave exploring" and like an ant she can still feel him. He could explore her vagina and end up in her womb, explore her urethra and end up in her bladder, make love to her clit, and even explore her anus, without being crushed or suffocated.  

The openings of the chapters foreshadowing him being swallowed alive by his 1700 foot plus girlfriend are really good. I really like the intro to the fourth chapter where he contemplates the primal fear of being eaten alive, how since the rise of the gigantics mankind is forced to confront the fear of no longer being at the top of the food chain, and his pondering of whether it is worse to be eaten by something with a mind that's aware of you. I really love the introspection here, good writing. And to be fair that's what Celia is doing, she is eating him, but without the expectation of digesting him as he travels through her digestive tract.  

In the beginning of chapter 5, it mentions protective armor and Celia speaking to him as he prepares to fall into her stomach. I guess this means he does need a suit to travel through her digestive tract, and that she is aware and can communicate with him. He will also need a means to have her insides illuminated so he can see. I really hope that his trip through her digestive tract is full tour, that he passes in and out through the entire lenght of her digestive tract. Considering how little is known about the eating and internal digesting of gigantics he could even turn his trip through her as a documentary if Celia is okay with it. It would sure get a lot of views. Since she's apparently in contact with him she and presumably her daughters will be very interested and curious in checking in on him as he travels through her digestive system. It's been established that she drinks polluted water and can process plastics and heavy metals contaminating water, but does she eat solid organic garbage as well as metals and plastics? If so it would explain the armor he's wearing, and it must be quite scary and intimidating to see things like whole cars and buses being digested right in front of him in a stomach the size of a small arena. It will be interesting to see how her intestines convert it into waste from the inside.  Celia can make some interesting suits for people the size of ants to her. Since their too small to make by hand, I can assume she has a machine like a 3D printer that makes them for her.

The name of the A.I. Shannon, that's a reference to your MAJOR/Minor New Lives story isn't it. I do like Celia's playful exhibitionism streak, with her admiting that as a Gigantic she has little use for clothes and playfully flashing Erwan her butt in chapter 4. Celia isn't shy and has no problem being intimate with Erwan. One thing I would like Erwan to witness and describe is Celia peeing in front of him due to the sheer scale and spectacle of all that liquid coming out of her huge pussy. In chapter 2 she did afterall drink enough to cause the water level of a lake to drop and the lake to very visibly retract so the spectacle of her passing all that water and then some out of her pussy would be quite something for Erwan to witness and describe. If it replenishes the ground as she says, it's no wonder her territory is so green.

I do like the time and attention to detail put in the story and like how the chapters are long and richly detailed. Seeing this story being updated is one of the highlights of this site.

Author's Response:

I may have made a mistake around the Gigantic kids and meant six feet (three pairs of feet, in fact) :p. I'll re ad chapter 4 again just to be sure of it, at a later date XD !

I assure you that vaginal exploration (hell, body exploration) will be a theme, but we'll be taking things relatively slow. he can't go and get lost in her pussy on their very first date after all! 

I'm glad that you like the intro of each chapter. Ideally, it should be basically its own little story in the future, but used to delve into some more introspective elements, i guess. 

We may or may not see her urinate sooner or later, but I'm not yet set about it. And Shannon's name is indeed a nod to M/m ^^ !

As always, thanks for the kidn review, I'll try to keep up the good work for you to enjoy the future of this series :) !

Reviewer: tinykev Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05 2019 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 4

She's the hottest giantess ever! I hope the next chapter is coming soon, this is incredible!

Author's Response:

Thanks ! I don't know if I'd call her the hottest, but I do try to make her sexy !

Reviewer: whackamole1 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 08 2019 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 3

Good chapter. I liked the foreshadowing at the beginning of Celia swallowing Erwan, and Erwan realising he's about to go where few others have gone. At about 1700 feet tall the sense of scale will be amazing, a stomach the size of an arena, and over a mile of intestines. He'll be spending quite a long time on his fantastic voyage through the digestive tract of a gigantic. There's a lot of suspense and questions with that foreshadowing opener. Does she swallow him intentionally or unknowingly, is he in danger or not, does she provide him with a device like the necklace to help and/or protect him on his journey through her, and of course the sense of wonder of passing through a female gigantic. I will have to wait and see and I look forward to the updates.

There seems to be a lot of greenery in and around Celia's house. Is this because of her ability to eat and drink garbage and polluted water and expell nutrient rich waste. Like Celia drinking from polluted lakes and peeing out clean nutrient rich urine to replenish the ground. She's too big to have her own sewer line, and she can replenish the environment just by peeing. This is one of the interesting abilities mentioned in the last chapter, and one worth exploring and Erwan witnessing. So I was wondering if all the greenspace is a hobby of hers because of her ability, like planting baby trees, except with small parks in pots.


Having Erwan play with her nipple is an interesting and creative way for them to have foreplay considering the size difference. When they get to the pussy and she spreads it, I can see Erwan trying not to faint from all that pink. Considering that he's about the size of an ant to her, the easiest way for him to get a reaction from her is to get into her through her urethra/peehole since it's the smallest hole there, but big enough for him to get into and still be kind of tight enough for her to feel and get a reaction from a man the size of an ant. Her vagina is probably too big. Like the nipple sex it's a creative way to get a feeling despite the size difference and she's so huge no orifice is off limits. He could also get on her clit too, which would be bigger than him, but the pubic hair would get in the way. I don't see how she sees it as a safety net since at his size it would be like obstructive tree branches, and in the last chapter she was careful about loose hairs potentially hurting someone.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. You're the one who gave me the idea of Erwan exploring the inside of Celia. There will be at elast one chapter dedicated to it, the incipit of each chapter is really just a tease to that moment :) ! I therefore can't answer any of the questions you're asking here, it'd be far too much of a spoiler! 

Considering the greenery around Celia's house, it'll be explained and her natural calls will be explored a little. After all, even if they don't eat and drink as much as Normals, proportionally speaking, they do need a lot of water and food. Their kind of food, mostly. But her truly enormous trees (really, they are not baby trees XD) are indeed a hobby of hers, when they are in the pots she had crafted for those. Think of all the ones she has outside her house as a vast interconnected park, while the ones inside are more jardins and even tropical greenhouses. 

I haven't yet thought about how Erwan will interact with her pussy, but I can definitively say that she didn't thought about the problems with her hair down there, because I hadn't! Somehow, I felt that they "acted" differently than her hair elsewhere ^^ ! But you'll notice that her hair does fall near Erwan at some point in this chapter, and it's because when she's aroused, and she can be easily, she tend to be a little less careful. But I'll definitively try to think about all of this.

Reviewer: prophetofgreed Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2019 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 2

Another great chapter, better implementation of the world building and really like the gentle aspects of this story. 

Also really liking Celia's personality so far. 

Keep up the great work and excited to see where this goes. 

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot !

I'm also really happy with Celia's personality and I'll try to develop her while staying true to it.

Reviewer: whackamole1 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 08 2019 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 2

I'm guessing Gigantics are very rare in the world, judging by what a big deal one appearing by the restaurant is, and the description in the first chapter of hundreds of bodies if they dropped dead, not thousands, or millions. At their size they should be easy to spot from miles away, yet the main character and other normals are ignorant or only half right about basic things about Gigantics like what they eat and drink. Although Celia seems embarrassed to admit that she eats garbage and drinks dirty water, so maybe what they consume is something Gigantics don't like to advertise.

The portable indestructible small apartment pendant is a neat idea. With a small bathroom, food, drinks, and air he could probably stay in there for a long while before having to leave his safe place. Although Celia implies her friend has a fetish and different way of doing things. Look forward to seeing what she means by that.

So Gigantics drink dirty water, eat garbage, and give back to nature with their nutrient rich waste when they relieve themslves on the ground. Interesting. In chapter 1 it's mentioned that their bodies break down into nutrients for nature relatively quickly when they die. I'm guessing their solid waste, and possibly liquid waste too, work the same way too. If this is the case shouldn't Gigantics be encouraged to drink and eat as much as they can? Is this like a role or hobby for them, since they could help revitalize the most polluted and/or barren parts of the world this way, like for example the Aral sea. For a normal like Erwan having to stick close to a Gigantic like Celia, the sight of her doing something as simple as peeing to give to the ground must be an awesome sight, a literal river coming out of lady parts the size of a building. Also about lady parts, I'm curious as to the how the relationship will be consumated although I'm sure they'll find a way.

Are the digestive tracts of Gigantics mostly upsized versions of human ones, or do they behave differently, to accomadate their diets? Do they process organic matter well or just certain inorganic matter, or both? It would be interesting to see how their innards work.

Personally, I'd love to see a scenario where Erwan is swallowed by Celia. Maybe unintenionally as a dramatic scenario, or intentionally. At her size it would be ideal for an endo type scenario. Erwan seems to be very afraid of getting eaten by her, wondering if she has dozens of skeletons in her digestive tract, how many people she's drunk in the past, and listening to rumors of the cannibalism of Gigantics, so a scenario where he's swallowed by his love could force him to face his worst fears about his partner. It would also be neat to see how her digestive tract works first hand, due to her different diet, and the description of her as a living recycling plant.

I am really liking the world building so far and am interested in how this world is shaping up, and I like how you add in details in your descriptions and narrative. Good work.

 

Author's Response:

Gigantics are, indeed, relatively few, really, a handful compared to the masses of Normals, or even Smalls. They also live largely secluded lifes, inhabiting remote placed in Gigantopia, even if they sometimes deign to walk into the town proper. And because of their size, while they aren't necessarily aloof or disdainful of smaller humans, they tend to favor remaining amng them - and they are far smarter than Normals, even Titans can't compare, so sometimes, conversations with others aren't as rewarding as staying with them. Strangely enough, they are indeed embarassed by their diet, probably because the first of them were just Normals who grew up so gigantic !

The portable apartment is but an example of strange, almost esoteric technology created by the Gigantics, more will come into play - especially when it'll be time to consume their relationship. As for the friend, she'll make an appearance down the line and we'll know what her fetish is. 

Concerning the diet and the insides and everything, I can't say much, because it'll pop up in the next chapter or the fourth at the latest. The scenario you'll have in mind and the fears of Erwan will also be used sooner or later! I'm not trying to avoid the answers, but I swear it'll come in the story itself :) !

Thanks for the praise about the worldbuilding. I'm mostly a worldbuilder before a writer, I think, so it's really great to hear !

Reviewer: whackamole1 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2019 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love this idea of an extreme size disparity in a relationship with a gentle giantess. It allows for nearly unlimited body exploration, and it's original to see a gentle giantess that's the size of the tallest buildings from our perspective not on a rampage, and instead trying to form a caring relationship with someone the size of an ant from her perspective even when it's not very practical. It goes to show how committed she is to acknowledging regular sized people as individuals. Or maybe she has a fetish for them or both. The future setting and very advanced technology and engineering allows more storyline scenarios, and it helps to explain how the very large have managed to have their basic needs met and maintain comforts too.

Just to nitpick a few things. The main character mentions that the largest gigantics are 10000 times smarter than a normal high genius. This doesn't seem plausible since they would be in an entirely different state of consciousness altogether. Although the character admits that this is a saying and that he's not a science guy.

The restaurant has a terrace at 300m 1000 feet, yet he mentions that gigantics, which is what Celia turns out to be, are about 282.5 times his normal height of about 6 feet, so about 1700 feet. About the height of New York's tallest building. Meaning that Celia is far taller than the restaurant building. Unless she's sitting outside the building, sorry I just had to reread that and it seems to be the case, it just wasn't very clear in the description. The sense of scale of gigantics architecture and facilities must be mind boggling from a normals point of view.

Considering the extreme size difference, Celia and the main character will probably need to communicate with some sort of device. Like a very advanced smartphone that almost never runs out of energy.

And lastly, technically speaking the main character is wrong. None of the scientists in the Jurassic Park movie who created the dinosaurs are killed by dinosaurs. They all leave the island before the tropical storm hits, leaving only a skeleton crew of engineers and the game warden to oversee things. Sorry, but I just can't help but correct the main character there as I've literally seen the movie over a 100 times. Although, in the book, the lead geneticist is killed by a raptor.

I love the premise, and look forward to more. One scenario suggestion that I would love to see is Celia swallowing the main character either unintenionally or intentionally and the advanced technology keeps him from coming to harm while inside her. Heck, deep inside her guts might be the safest possible place for him to be, since at the size of an ant to her, he has a very good chance of falling to his death,getting squished, or getting lost if she tries to move him otherwise. And since it's mentioned that gigantics consume relatively little her insides would be mostly clean but still have more than enough food and water to sustain him. He would still be able to communicate with her, and it would be like being in a very large warm skyscraper if the skyscraper was a beautiful woman who cared about her guest. Maybe, that's why she invited him to a restaurant with a terrace at face level when she's sitting. A gentle giantess saying "Do you trust me?" "Please get in my mouth." There really isn't much endo content in this site, so I'm really hoping for some in this story since it's got a very good setup for it.

Author's Response:

Well, I wanted to get out of my comfort zone, which is basically mini-gts, just to see how I could make a gentle story with a giga-giantess working. Without spoiling, I can actually tell you that the doesn't have a fetish when it comes to Normals.

Concerning the intelligence, it'll be adressed and be a (small) plot point, because it won't be a too plot heavy story (I've done this with New Lives, far too much ;p).

As for the restaurant, yeah, Celia is outside, and towering over it. We'll see her eat next chapter and how she is different from Normals in ways far more deep than just her size, and yet remains extremely human. As for the device, it's also a major part of the second chapter, I've been thinking about it since even before writing the first word of this one !

And yep, he is indeed wrong about Jurassic Park. It's a shame, because it's the best film ever (fight me!), but it's really old to him, so I'll give him a pass. 

I'll admit I hadn't thought about the endo element. I won't make promises but it could appears, indeed. Perhaps not in the second chapter however, but I'll keep it in mind. 

Reviewer: prophetofgreed Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2019 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'd say the biggest issue is the multiple times of describing the size differences when it should've been all contained in one place to explain the size mechanics of this world. 

I'm still a bit confused on the size classifications for this world because that context is mentioned in and out of the story. There's nothing wrong with exposition, it's the execution of it. 

Maybe the best example of this is the Titan man when Erwin is on the train (the silent S business is also very strange since it's a strong consonant, not a vowel). You describe his size in the distance and his classification only just recently describing the 'smalls' size class. The purpose of that segment was Erwin to describe his first time seeing a gigantic being but is bogged down in details. 

Author's Response:

Oh, here are the classifications :

Normals (they are, well, normal peoples!); Smalls (around 20 meters, give or take a few; the tallest would be around 28 max, however) ; Giants (around 50 meters, max 55); Titans (around 200 meters, the smaller are 190, the taller 210); Gigantics (basically, they are all exactly 500 meters tall)

I'm glad you give me this info on the first Gigantic, because I actually believed it was clever, so it's good to know it isn't XD ! Concerning Erwan's name, its from Brittany in France with a very peculiar pronunciation, and I don't know the universal pronunciation sings (or whatever they are called). Perhaps a better description would have been to say that his name is pronounced like the "wan" in swan, without the s, basically. I tried to be clever again, and it was too clever by half, serves me right ! 

Reviewer: Carweirdo3 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2019 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

Moor.

Author's Response:

It's planned, but it may take some time. But don't worry, I do plan to continue this story :)