Date: November 16 2019 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 7: "Peckish"
Your Stories are amazing. Decent plot and worldbuilding to set a simple background and tons of sexy descriptions. I really hope you continue this story and more. This one, Poison Ivy, and Raven are my favorites so far.
As for lore, how many races of giant monster girls exist in this world and how have humans avoided being devoured to the last? Do the giants have their own homelands and countries and other food they eat and humans are a delicacy?
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I'm glad you've enjoyed them. I do plan to continue this series, at the very least. I'd love to do the same from the DC ones, I just need to think of a good way to do so.
How many races of giant monster girls? Lots. There are at least 3-4 more, for sure, that I want to add into future chapters. Humans avoid being wiped out for several reasons. One, they're resourceful and ingenuitive. Two, humans are not the only thing many monster girls can eat - though they are the favorite of nearly all monster girls. Some of the bigger giants will even eat smaller monster girls! Three, not every race within the world can wield magic, but humans are one of them, which helps. There are other reasons, I'm sure, that I've yet to think up.
Do the monsters have their own homelands? Not sure. It's an aspect I haven't considered, yet. Human availiability does vary from place to place, though, so to some they would be a delicacy.
[Report This]Date: September 13 2019 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 3: "Ice Giant. Queen. Dragonslayer."
Emily's fate, though not deserved, comes across as cruelly poetic. And now the meeting between two very lusty, sexy giant ladies leaves the question of how this conflict will be resolved.
Author's Response:
There's only one way, as far as I'm concerned. :D
[Report This]Date: September 13 2019 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 2: "The Dragon Cometh"
If this dragon girl is an exampe what awaits outside the walls, the Ice Queen starts to make a lot of sense. That she's able to avoid depopulating her city in an indulgent orgy and actively keeps away those who would shows the humans realyl don't have a choice but to give up a few of their own to her appetites now and then.
Author's Response:
Indeed. While it does look like she is taking advantage of the humans, and to some degree she may be, life under her rule is actually safer than outside of it. All the humans in her city don't have any frame of reference outside of living under her rule, of course, but it remains the truth.
[Report This]Date: August 30 2019 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 1: "The Festival of New Day"
I thought it was a good first chapter. Having the world buildIng in play form was a clever way to keep it from being a straight info dump. I have followed your work here and on Ekas and have to say you’re a very talented writer regardless of original or fanfiction. I’m also eager to see what else is added given the description you wrote.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading, rating, and reviewing! Yea, I didn't want to just have an exposition dump via me, the writer. I felt that if I had to have one, it'd be better if it came from an in-world character. I'm glad that went over well. I have what I think should be roughly 10 chapters in the concept phase, with about half in the outline phase. Most of the monster girls that will show up will be ones everyone is familiar with. The most unique, though, are the Amazonian pirate wolf girls. They're fun.