Date: May 20 2008 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Stylesrj is right. The problem is that there is a male giant. If there was no males giant, and the Volcano was a giantess' vulva it would be a classic to me. Actually I am going to edit out the male part and re-read the story like that.
Author's Response:
Understood. I for one also don't like male giants, because that usually entails interactions with tiny men and that's kinda gay, but I thought in this case it would be okay because when I started writing this I only intended to have tiny women so even though there was a male giant the scenarios would still be heterosexual in nature. But with the third part I needed to do something different to keep it interesting, so that' why I came up with the SM character out of nowhere.
But no matter what you do or don't do, you're bound to end up offending someone somewhere so I realized that as far as this story is concerned it just doesn't matter anymore, because as perverted as it is I think it's crossed some sort of line at this point and there's just no turning back now. So it is going to be doomed to a 3 star (or less) rating so I might as well be creative with it then.
Date: May 20 2008 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
My opinion is neutral. It isn't too twisted or sick, as I can probably think of much worse than that and I have already seen much worse than that.
I think why not many enjoy it or think its twisted is because it involves male anatomy in a primarily GTS website and it's too much in the male anatomy department for those narrow-minded "enemies of freedom"
It has twisted ideals I like and twisted ideals I hate. However, I recommend you keep going and let the people sort it out. If someone questions morality or your sexual preferences when writing, who cares? Let them think what they like about you. As long as you get people reading, its fine.
You might break new ground.
Author's Response: Yeah, I definitely think I've broken new ground with this. Lol. But the question is, was this ground that should have been broken? Or are some things best left unexplored?
Date: May 20 2008 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hey Chozo, I partly enjoy the story, it is very twisted, and I would be afraid of meeting you in person. However, I am commenting because I support your creative freedom, so keep posting and let it be as sick as you want.
Author's Response:
Lol, I'm a good guy if you ever got to know me. This stuff is just fantasy, and I do know the difference between that and reality, and I also wouldn't want any of that to come true for real. But what's the harm in using our imagination? I'm glad you support my creative freedom, because I feel the same way. As Voltaire said: "I may not agree with what you say, but I will defend to the death your right to say it."
That said, there's a few things I don't like about it either, but I got a bit carried away and wanted to push the envelope, so to speak. Hopefully I'm a pironeer in new and unexplored territory, or something.
Anyways, thanks for the feedback. I'm glad you at least "partly" enjoyed it. :)
Date: February 18 2008 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Dear Chozo, I posted the revised versions (both chapters) and saw they had been accepted, but again, the following day, they had disappeared. There must be someone who dislikes what I've written, so I shall not bother again, and as you haven't had the courage to mail me...... well, that's it. Seems a pity. Of all the bizarre contents on this site, mine is considered too strong or disapproving. So it's goodbye Chozo.
Date: February 16 2008 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
Dear Chozo (an amusing pen name) I might try again, but, to make things simpler, here is my email address. Just acknowledge and I shall post my version back to you. Perhaps YOU might post it on site? Mr S. Williams has done this for me. It'll be so much easier.
as015b1810@blueyonder.co.uk
Date: February 13 2008 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thanks Chozo for your reply/advice. I went to Giantesscity but found it all rather gobbily-gook. There was nothing there to allow me to submit stories (your/my version that is). So I'm giving it up. I have exchanged email addresses with several chaps - Stanley Williams and girlfood to name but two. If you feel too afraid to contact direct then amen (so be it). Such a pity. I think you might like my version. Adieu!
Author's Response:
If ytou're registered there all you need to do is post it in the story forum and explain the details about it either in the subject line, or in a paragraph before the story begins. That's how it works there. I really hope you do that, because even though you can email it to me, there are probably others who would like to see it too and I'm pretty sure it won't be deleted there. I think the only rule there is no underrage characters in the stories, but if you didn't do that it shouldn't be a problem.
However, I really do find it strange you aren't allowed to post it here... are you sure there wasn't just some technical difficulties involved? YOu may want to ask Asukafan about that see if he knows anything.
Date: February 11 2008 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
For the 2nd time I submitted my version of your 2-part yarn. It appeared on the new story page, but like before, it disappeared the following day. I wonder why? I could post it to you direct, but like so many, you're probably too afraid to reveal your email address. I'm not.
Author's Response: Hmm... that's strange. Well, if you're a member of giantesscity you could post it there.
Date: February 10 2008 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Okay Chozo, I shall try again. If I succeed I shall look forward to your comments - and I will not take offence at whatever you say. Thanks for your advice.
Date: February 08 2008 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well, Chozo, I rewrote your Volcano Girls story and kept to your main theme but changed the sex of Gina's boyfriend. I gave you full credit and said that you were happy to see my version. I posted both chapters using all the criteria required on the 7th Feb; my submission was accepted but when I checked next day there was no sight of them. Such a pity....it was different but somebody obviously felt the sequence was unsuitable/too strong. Ho hum....
Author's Response: Well, Asukafan said in a post that outtages were expected because the server was being upgraded or something like that. I suspect that's probably what happened instead of it being deleted. After all, if he wouldn't delete mine as it is, then why would he delete an altered version? Try again later or in a day or two. I think this should all be cleared up by then.
Date: January 30 2008 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
I don't know who commented on the 29th Jan (no name given) but it was not I. To answer your response, Chozo, I would never dream of overriding your authorship. I am in the process of changing it as I said and find it quite exciting. I've changed the name of Tim to Tam (Tammy) and introducing some tiny males. You, and perhaps others, might find it equally as exciting. I do hope I get your approval. Would you care to see it on site when completed?
Author's Response: Yeah, go ahead and post it (with appropriate attribution, of course). I am a bit curious about whatever you had in mind.
[Report This]Date: January 29 2008 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Don't worry, I don't plan to do anything with your story, as I like it just the way it is. It's a very nice and fresh spin on an old idea. I know you said you don't plan to take it much further, but I think it still has a lot of potential and millage available to it.