[Report This]Date: November 13 2023 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 54
Loving the update, but at the same time it still hurts reading Audrey like this, unaware of what Desmond is going through :(
This was a great lengthy chapter, and again you write great interaction and scenes with these characters.
But I'm still hoping for Desmond and Audrey to reunite and for Jackie to get what's coming to her.
It's a strange dichotomy these chapters have, well written scenes and moments, but at the same time sitting here wishing they were different (with Desmond and Audrey XD)
As the more time Audrey spends with Dilly and the more fun they have, I just see it being a harder reunion between her and Desmond.
Anyway, as I said you crafted another really well written chapter here and thank you for updating.
[Report This]Date: June 11 2023 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 53
Don't lose hope Desmond!!
Jackie calling him 'Part of the family' is sooo twisted after what she did.
I still am holding on to hope he'll be returned to his real family and get a happy ending.
And Jackie just needs just deserts XD she doesn't deserve her height/status.
Another great read, despite my views on Jackie, the writing is again super fun to read and engaging.
Excited for what comes next.
[Report This]Date: February 28 2023 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 52
Excellent chapter!
[Report This]Date: February 28 2023 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 52
Excellent chapter!
[Report This]Date: February 28 2023 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 52
Well this chapter was exactly what it said on the tin.
It was long, and it had a looot of insertion.
I have to say in terms of the sexual content with Audrey you did amazing work here, the dynamic of the younger tiny and the older experienced Audrey just taking control was written so well and her using him in that aspect.
However on the other emotional aspect.....Ow....Just ....Ow.
The way Audrey and Desmond's family have reacted, and how Audrey has just given up on him/believed Jackie.....
I have to hold on to hope that Audrey and Desmond will reunite and the truth will come out.
Jackie needs to be brought to justice for everything she's done.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Vegetaboy! I like to deliver on what I promised, so I'm glad you enjoyed it.
You'll get a clearer look at what Desmond is up to next chapter. My plan is to alternate perspectives from Audrey to Desmond for a few more chapters, then close out the novel. The end is near, my friend.
Date: February 16 2023 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic chapter. We’re angling towards what I was hoping for which was an opportunity for Audrey to grow. I was hoping it would be at Jackie’s expense but I’ll take what I can get. Hopefully she’s smart enough that she doesn’t fail for Jackie’s bullshit. Looking forward to her rationalizing using the height for herself. And I really hope she takes it all. The kids don’t need any. lol.
This is definitely the most invested I’ve ever been with this story Johnbart. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Date: February 16 2023 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Dam, Jackie just gets more and more hateable with every action she does.
[Report This]Date: February 16 2023 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 51
Damn Jackie is not messing around :(
Audrey and Desmond don't deserve to be toyed with by her.
I hope Audrey gets her man back (and knocks Jackie into next week XD)
But despite the heartbreaking stakes here, again it's a well written update and some great interaction and content.
Keep up the great work :D
[Report This]Date: December 14 2022 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
Not sure what some of the recent hate is about. The characters are gripping, especially for a fetish story. I like how you take sexy, and in Audrey’s case, dominant non-con scenarios, and try to make them as relatable as possible. Is it normal? Of course not. But neither is this fetish. This story is interesting because you take the abnormal and inject it into a slice-of-life setting. It makes the fetish fodder less cringe (not an easy feat), and easier to escape into.
Date: December 14 2022 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 49
Moral of the story? It's better to be a flaming asexual.
[Report This]Date: October 05 2022 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 46
Sorry to say this. But, it's starting to sound like just another soap opera.
:-(
[Report This]Date: October 02 2022 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 47
Pure gold
[Report This]Date: October 01 2022 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 47
Damn it....seriously Desmond and to a lesser extent, Audrey need justice.
But the deck seems stacked against them, Jackie seems untouchable.
But damn! despite her allure and sexyness Jackie really needs to get some comeuppance XD
20 years...and she's only ever thrived...
Hopefully this is setting her up for an epic fall (and desmond gets his height back...and hopefully Jackie loses everything, height included XD)
Loved the Audrey and Desmond interaction in this chapter (aside from her insecurity moments/jealousy) but loved when she was demanding to see Jackie.
Can't wait to read more :)
Date: August 17 2022 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
I’ll admit to not having read every chapter. Shrinking by itself is something I’ve got to be in the mood for. Ever since that permanent height shift that made Jackie a giantess I’ve been glued to this one, though. Can’t wait for the last few chapters! Personally I’m hoping that Audrey somehow ends up with all the extraneous height thats floating around.
[Report This]Date: August 17 2022 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 45
I still think Jackie is hot, and only has gotten better with age.
And part of me still wants to see her and Desmond playing.
But I also do wish Jackie got comeuppance now. Like I wish/hope in the end Desmond gets his height back (maybe with interest, Jackie loses her big height sand it's split between Desmond and Audrey) and Jackie is left destitute/publicly ostracised.
Another great chapter you've written, and I can't wait to read more.
Date: July 01 2022 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 42
Simply amazing, I think you created a milestone in this genre, thanks for all the efforts.
[Report This]Date: June 11 2022 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 41
Oh, how I hope that female Goliath meets her David. Crashing and burning, real bad, as a result!
[Report This]Date: June 10 2022 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 41
Things are turbulent for Desmond right now....wow...
I mean part of me still is hoping for him and Jackie to get back together.
But things seem bleaker with each chapter. (I mean if she could see sense and listen to Desmond about what happened...)
10 foot 4!! Oh wow....
Another great chapter, you're going great work on this story.
[Report This]Date: April 14 2022 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 39
Ouch.....like ouch!
I was actually rooting for Jackie and Desmond. (any chance of them getting back together in the long run?)
The ending of this chapter is such a cliff-hanger.
Well written, and a real rollercoaster of emotion and content.
Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Hey, there's always a chance.
And don't worry the next two chapters are already written, I plan to release them soon. Really glad you liked this chapter. It's a pretty pivotal plot point so I'm glad it's been received well.