[Report This]Date: January 29 2020 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 20
This story is pretty hot. But it also leaves me wondering what will happen. Will he just shrink into nothingness? I don't hope so, because then there wouldn't be a story anymore.
Thank you for writing and until next time, this is Three dog AWWW and you're listening to Galaxy News Radio. Bringing you the Truth, no matter how bad it hurts!
Sorry, I had to end with that one, this Fallout 3 quote has been stuck in my head since ... 2008
Author's Response:
I don't exactly understand the relevance of Fallout 3 in this instance, but thank you for the praise! Desmond isn't dumb. He's just paralyzed by his overwhelming sexual desires. The question is whether or not his thinking mind will prevail, or will his cock continue to guide his actions?
If you've ever heard of "Man vs. Man" or "Man vs. Nature", this story is "Man vs. Cock". :)
Date: January 22 2020 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 20
This is story is so great! And this chapter was no exception!
"I was literally a toy to these women now.... I got passed around the room to be poked, fondled and played with." I've always loved the "sleepover" type scenario like this one. So I must say, this would be a dream come true! ;)
Part of me is hoping that there is some kind of target height, or that at least Jackie will eventually have some control over it(because I'm positive that she's the cause of it). I just don't personally like anything smaller than Minkin because interaction seems so difficult smaller than that, but I guess we'll see what you do! Also, Desmond's mom's reaction to this size would be really interesting to see!
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
I always love your comments. Very insightful and interesting. You'll just have to wait and see. (I admit, this story has taken a lot longer than I originally thought.)
[Report This]Date: January 08 2020 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 18
What a great addition. Man oh man, he is fastly approaching dildo size...
[Report This]Date: January 07 2020 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 18
Suddenly Audrey makes so much more sense now. Seems the little guy simply can't avoid attention. And it's also nice to see how smitten Jackie was by him.
But deep down, I'm still worrying if he will survive this ordeal. At least I hope the story will continue for a bit because I like it.
Thank you for the update!
[Report This]Date: January 05 2020 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 17
Seems like Jackie didn't exactly create an environment that encourages openness in their relationship and seems quite controlling. It would actually surprise me if they can actually get away with Adudrey's plan. Jackie will find out for sure. And I'm not even sure if that plan will work out like Audrey thinks it will. This just screams trap all over.
Thank you for writing and I'm nervously holding my breath for what will happen in the next one.
[Report This]Date: October 30 2019 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 14
SO. FUCKING. HOT. O_O
Author's Response: Haha yeah, not to toot my own horn, but that chapter was probably the sexiest stuff I’ve written to date. I’m so humble, aren’t I?
[Report This]Date: October 28 2019 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 13
And just when I was starting to think that Jackie might actually not be that bad, she just HAD to prove me wrong by going crazy about Des’ exes… Also, how did she know that orgasming makes Des shrink, because I’m pretty sure he still hasn’t told her that detail yet, so that’s very suspicious… But even with all that being said, I’m sure this next chapter is about to be the hottest one yet… 👀 lol Fantasic story!
Author's Response: I believe I meant to put in a scene with Desmond telling Jackie that when he orgasms he shrinks. I think I accidentally cut that scene out. It’s a plot hole. My bad... But thanks for all the reviews, MacroGod!
[Report This]Date: October 27 2019 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 12
Okay I've gotta admit, Jackie definitely deserves some points for helping keep Des in college because she really didn’t have too… 👀 lol
[Report This]Date: October 26 2019 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 11
Damn... Des really screwed the pooch with this one... 😅lol
[Report This]Date: October 24 2019 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
Just when I think Jackie couldn’t be any MORE suspicious, she proves me wrong yet again… lol I wonder what the conversation between her and Des’ mom was REALLY like… Anyways, I’ve still gotta admit, “Goddess Jackie” sure does have a nice ring to it… 😅 haha
[Report This]Date: October 23 2019 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 9
Holy fucking shit! The rational me is 85% sure now that Jackie was indeed the one who infected Des with this disease, and she’s definitely dangerous… BUT the horny me really wants to see Des as nothing but a bug at Jackie’s royal feet… >:3 hehe
[Report This]Date: October 22 2019 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 8
Holy shit… Des’ mom is totally going to kill him when she finds out he left… O_O lol
[Report This]Date: October 21 2019 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 7
Omg I freakin love Audrey! And I’m glad that Des is finally realizing that there’s something very fishy about Jackie… 👀 (Ugh, this is such a great story!)
[Report This]Date: October 21 2019 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
Yep, Jackie’s officially Suspect #1 now in my book… There’s something very fishy about this chick… 👀 lol
[Report This]Date: October 20 2019 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 5
I was beginning to think that Des might actually be over-exaggerating about his sister, but that’s definitely not the case… Amanda really is pure evil… Lets just hope Jackie isn’t the same… 👀 lol
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Yeah, Amanda definitely lived up to Desmond's hype. She is cold-hearted and mean-spirited. I like writing the mean giantess character and the gentle giantess character. I think Amanda fits in quite nicely with the former, Audrey fits in with the latter, and Jackie straddles the middle. As the story progresses, there will be a conflict between these countervailing forces, and Desmond will be at the center of it all. How exactly it will unfold will remain a mystery.
[Report This]Date: October 20 2019 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 4
Damn, I definitely didn’t see that coming… I mean, I couldn’t really get a read on Jackie at first. She’s kind of been an enigma tbh, but now I’m thinking she might really be crazy… She may even be connected to the reason why he’s shrinking… Idk, but something is definitely very fishy here… Anyways, great chapter, and great story overall!
[Report This]Date: October 20 2019 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 3
And the plot thickens… ;) I’m really loving this story so far, and I’m really starting to like Pauline as a character also! I just wonder how small Des is going to get… 👀
[Report This]Date: October 19 2019 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
Holy shit! I'm loving where this is going... ;)
[Report This]Date: October 19 2019 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great first chapter! I'm already hooked 👀lol
Date: October 17 2019 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Continue to impress! One-on-one time with Vicky soon to return the ‘favor’? Hehe. Also, is she the second tallest girl on the team?