Reviewer: Stehlampe Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2020 10:57 PM Title: Epilogue

Fantastic ending.

When the explosion happened, I thought you had chosen a classic "the military fucks up, nukes her, turns her into a mile tall god" ending, and was thilled to open the epilogue to read in your words just how powerful of a god she would become.

Needless to say, what I found suprised me.  It was a good ending and my shattered hopes here are in no way meant to criticise your work. The ending you chose was brilliant, as was the rest of the story!

I hope to read many more of your stories in the future. By now I can tell you that I have spent more time with your stories than I have spent with books like Harry Potter or Lord of the rings. One of the reasons, among many others, is your fantastic description of the women realizing their power. And in my opinion, your writing is matched by very few other gts/superwomen-writers.

With that said, I'm thilled to see more of you! 

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed the story, and thank you very much for the kind words and the praise. It's certainly encouraging!

I did not want to choose the ending of "nuke her, make her a mile-tall woman", but rather have the military succeed this time (even if they were close to fuck up after the first attempt at killing her). The scientist (Riley) did actually manage to make her plan work, even if she did not anticipate that Lucia's reduction would release a massive amount of energy, which would be similar to a nuclear explosion. 

And, as I usually do, I left an opening for a possible sequel. Building a world is complex enough, so I like to have the option to get back to it if I want ;)

There is more from me coming, but my current works are only halfway done, so you will need to wait a bit, I'm afraid...

Thanks!

Reviewer: Stehlampe Signed [Report This]
Date: December 15 2019 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 19

Excellent chapter and story. 

I've read all of your stories so far, and it's always a thrill to see an update.

Your writing is fantastic and creates a vivid image of the situations you are describing.

The only critique I have so far is your short "summary" that appears on the front page. Because I feel this story could get much more deserved attention. The story has such much to offer, and while your credit to Amanda at large seems nice, I think you could attract many more reader if you wrote an actual short summary, especially with your beautiful words. 

Ah, enough of the rant. Hope to see many more stories of you in the future, especially hoping for Tower Syndrom season 2, sry just love girls with godlike power, no matter the size ;). And, if you allow me to ask, are there going to be many more chapters of the phoenix Initiative? I haven't read that one yet beacuse I like to wait until you've finished a story to binge read them in one go. 

Anyway, keep awesome!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much for your kind words! And I take your suggestion on the short summary. Maybe it's time to update it.

Not sure if Towers 2 will ever be made. I had an outline for a potential continuation, but I never started it. It's a possibility, but not a certainty. Regarding Phoenix, there are three chapters left. I'm posting a chapter a month, so you should see the story finished by February. It's my longest story yet (even at chapter 13, it's already longer in words than anything else I've written). So, make sure that you have enough time once you start reading ;)

If you are interested in seeing other works from me (including a recent audiobook I've started), please check papayoya.deviantart.com.

Reviewer: Kosmita Signed [Report This]
Date: October 26 2019 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 15

I'm really enjoying how this story is developing. Lucia is hot. I kinda wish there was something more with Michelle. But her abrupt ending was just as satisfying.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Michelle was only meant to be a supporting character. I've written some stories with more than one character, but The Breaking Point is all about Lucia. ANd yes, I agree she is hot, even if she has become a murderous psychopath ;)

Reviewer: officerkc Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2019 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 8

Haha I couldn't wait for the rest and I purchased the full story on gumroad. I definitely appreciate all your stuff my man. 😀

 

I haven't read through the full story yet, but I'm trying to see how closely this follows the plan (which I also loved)

Author's Response:

Well, it's a different story from The Plan, more "classic rampage in the city" (even if The Plan also had quite a lot of rampage, ofc). Thanks a lot for your support with the full story. I hope you will enjoy it! Please, let me know what you think as it pogresses!

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2019 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 7

Yes! That chapter was amazing! The belittling of Jennifer before being devoured by Lucia was genius! Jennifer's reactions to seeing the giantess felt very real, too.

 

This is a really good story, it doesn't rush to the giantess action right away, we see what goes on in Lucia's mind, how she got from scared to confident, her hesitation to some things and her willingness to simple just enjoy her newfound stature. I also read your "I, Giantess" story, very good stuff. If someone wanted to read a story were a giantess's thoughts were transitioned perfectly, I'd recommend you, my friend. 

 

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm happy to see that you enjoyed it!

Even if this is a rampage story, I always try to develop the characters and their reactions and psychololgy. The situation is, of course, impossible, but I like to try and imagine how would people in different rols behave in this impossible situation. 

Thanks for the kind words about the story overall and about my writing. This type of feedback is what encourages to keep me going!

Reviewer: MegaFan4217 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27 2019 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is fantastic. Very realistic, and plausible.  Excellent work! 

Author's Response:

Thank you! I hope you will keep enjoying it as the story continues :)

Please, keep letting me know what you think!