[Report This]Date: August 06 2008 7:02 AM Title: Another Day, Another Killer on the Loose
Lol! I think Kelly Monteith (a blonde, blue-eyed George Carlin from Canada, very popular on JOHNNY CARSON, during the Seventies) said it best, when he mimicked that coffee commercial.
"For night owls, 'the best part of waking up is just...waking...up!' "
Date: August 05 2008 10:09 AM Title: Prologue Part I
P.S.---sorry for the extra reviews on the first three chapters. I thought sure I had seen this only @ GTS City, when I read it before.
*Blushes redder than embarrassment icon.*
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the reviews! I don't really care how many you send, as long as I get your sincere thoughts.
Don't let anyone tell you Otherwise!
Sir Lime
[Report This]Date: August 05 2008 10:07 AM Title: Back to the Streets of SF
So, there won't be any green-skinned she-giants, then? Good! I'd hate to see Marvel Comics sue you for plagiarism! ;-D
[Report This]Date: August 05 2008 9:46 AM Title: The Assignment
Well, with the Internation Date Line, lunchtime in Hong Kong would probably be a literal midnight snack in Frisco. I just hope Mr. Slate's appetite isn't curbed by..."Jet" lag.
Ba-DUM-boom!
[Report This]Date: August 05 2008 9:41 AM Title: A Hero Rising
Well, it can seem like an eternity...if the intercom is playing an instrumental version of "Girl From Ipa Nema" on the way up. ;-)
[Report This]Date: August 05 2008 9:39 AM Title: Prologue Part II
If Don had any close friends among his co-workers, they are gonna nail Zhang's ass to the proverbial wall. I guarantee!
[Report This]Date: August 05 2008 9:36 AM Title: Prologue Part I
Wow! Nice to see this was continued at some website.
Author's Response:
Woah, wait a minute. SOME website? Uh, I only put it on this one. Someone's copiying my work, or someone's posting it up without my consent. Kinda creepy if that's true. But yeah, I finally got the time to finish a bit more on that story, and im glad i did. The views on it are racking up!
Let's keep rooting for its undeniable sucess!
Sir Lime
[Report This]Date: December 16 2007 12:42 PM Title: The Assignment
Well, if he and SONYA are headed for Hong Kong, maybe the lunch Jet ought to "do" is Chinese take-out (lol)!
Seriously, though: your build-up is nice and slow, which is a rarity on websites like this. Some authors like to get to the shrunken man, or gigantized woman, right away. And, half the time, without explanation!
You, though, are among the growing number of exceptions to that rule. And, I thank you for it.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind words. Yes, in this story I decided to defy the usual trend. I hated how most of the stories had no plot, no description, and overall no point. Oh, i almost forgot. Well......if they're going to China......why not eat Chinese once they're there? Best authentic Chinese food in the world, lol. Or, so I heard.....
Much joy and Chinese food,
Sir Lime
[Report This]Date: December 15 2007 1:11 PM Title: A Hero Rising
"Half-Mexican/half-English?" Would that make him Belizean, by any chance?
Translation: I'm suitably hooked. Bring on chapter 4, asap. ;-)
Author's Response:
I think it would make him.......half mex. and half engl. Lol. I'm glad I've got you hooked on this story. I had some pretty awesome ideas and needed to compose them. So I did (no suprise). Thanks for your comment!
Stay with it!
Sir Lime
[Report This]Date: December 14 2007 12:42 PM Title: Prologue Part II
Very intriguing start!
Author's Response: Thank you for the positive reinforcement! I hope to see this story rise to success.