[Report This]Date: January 22 2021 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hard to believe it's been over a year, given how fresh this story is still in my mind
[Report This]Date: December 03 2019 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 14
All in all a nice story only two points that dissapointed.
1. How in Jesus name did Kayleigh manage to become a star Lawyer with such extreme memory problems? I mean the result that she becomes unware of the tiny repeatly is nice really but i hardly can take her serious in any kind of job that is not fully muscle focused.
2. Its clear that you are a foot lover yourself and thats pretty fine.. but it kind of sucks when i browse for butt tagged stories and after ages.. when finaly some butt action starts its even shorter than the vore stuff. Seriously if the foot lover here only use the butt tag to lure people into their story to then include some half assed 1 percent of the story butt action it kind of pisses me off. Sorry.. simply dont add any butt action and remove the dag and be happy with your foot stuff.
Author's Response:
I'll try to address both points, since I think they do carry some weight to them.
1) For Kayleigh's forgetfulness, I mainly did that because I thought the interactions would be more fun if she forgot about the protagonist partway through the day. Though in the story I do stress that she regularly uses and shrinks dummies, so if she was busy with important work, she might likely forget that she swapped a fake dummy for a real person. And since she's doing prep work for a trial, she'll end up being more drained and likely for other things to slip her mind.
2) For the tags in general, I think you make a good point there too. I'll sort that out.
That being said, I don't think it's at all appropriate for you to tell an author what they should or should not add to their story. There's a difference between giving criticism and ordering an author around. If I want to add a bit of butt interaction, then I will. I didn't intend to 'lure' anyone based on the tags, I just didn't take everything into consideration when adding it.
Regardless of that, have a nice day.
[Report This]Date: November 17 2019 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loving this 💛
Date: October 27 2019 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
Aw look at that? She finally shared bee feelings towards him. I know that it had been building to this. I'm sure now that our MC likes both sides of Kayleigh, will that mean shell she experimental?
I've also been enjoying The Outer Worlds so far as well.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review! I'm glad you enjoyed how things developed between MC and Kayleigh.
I'm nearly finished with The Outer Worlds now, and it's been a treat.
Date: October 27 2019 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 12
Hey ! (Sorry for m'y english, i'm french)
It's a new good chapter !
I like your story thank you 😁
Particularly, the unaware/unknow parts.
I dream for him at a moment, a beautiful teen use the héro, like a little mannequin for massage her feets ans suck her toes.
I love when thé giantess thinks he is just an object for her pleasure. 😁
Thanks you again for your story !
Bye 😉
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review!
Your English is fine. I can understand it well enough. I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Take care!
Date: October 23 2019 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 12
Cruel boss... I like that... ok, what I like the most is that she can play some role if needed, but still that was a good choice. Too bad he won't be able to see most of the acting :D
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
And since Kayleigh isn't the type to actually be mean, I thought it'd be fun for her to at least play pretend as a mean boss. And even though he won't see the act, he'll definitely hear it :P
Take care!
Date: October 21 2019 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 11
Merci!
Je regarde chaque jour pour voir si un nouveau chapitre est en ligne
J'adore cette histoire 👍
J'espère que de nouvelles filles utiliseront notre ami inconsciemment rapidement
Bonne continuation !
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
I had to use a translator but I appreciate what you said. I'm glad that you look forward to new works of mine that much.
Take care!
Date: August 06 2019 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 9
This chapter was damn near perfect!
Kayleigh and Reshma certainly know the proper way to handle a tiny guy with a thing for feet. Great writing!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter that much.
Date: July 21 2019 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes. The unaware Reshma seems like an interesting character, and I wouldn't be surprised if Kayleigh forgot about her little friend again.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Glad you're looking forward to future chapters. The unaware stuff with Reshma should be enjoyable. I enjoyed writing it so far at least. And based on how forgetful Kayleigh has been so far, your suspicion isn't too unlikely...
Take care!
[Report This]Date: July 20 2019 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 6
Really love this story! The multiple size changes is just an amazing concept. I also love the new character Reshma as she wears skater sneakers. Any chance she’ll wear them without socks as it’s such a cold day out? Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
I'm glad you enjoy the multiple sizes concept. I don't play with that often enough in my writing usually, so this is a nice change of pace. And for Reshma, I'm glad you love her already. There won't be any in-shoe stuff without socks for her in the latest chapter (7), but that could still happen in the future...
Take care!
Date: July 18 2019 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 3
The bigger he is, and the more details can be noticed, the more difficult it is to believe they are both unaware - unless it later turns out Taylor knew that he's not a dummy :)
That's the only criticism I can think in an otherwise GREAT story - not sure how I managed not to leave reviews before...
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
And that's a fair criticism. I was trying something new with them interacting with him at slightly larger sizes. Let's just assume that they both somehow never realized that he wasn't a dummy :P
I'll keep that in mind though, unless I think it'd be really cool to do something like that again.
Glad you're liking the story!
[Report This]Date: July 16 2019 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 4
Glad he stayed with Kayleigh, but the thought of Taylor using him without knowing he's real is very enticing (looking forward to that chapter one day!). Enjoyed the crotch play - definitely don't shy away from that.
Keep up the great work, loving the unaware stuff and looking forward to see how this all progresses.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
And I'm looking forward to eventually writing that bonus for Taylor. Regardless of how aware/unaware I focus it, it should be a fun addition. Hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Take care!
[Report This]Date: July 16 2019 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Much like the other person I actually made an account just to review this story. Loving it so far, its really hard to find giantess stories with unaware content. The forgetful nature of the boss is awesome. I hope there is more unaware content in the future :p
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
And that's pretty awesome that you made an account just to leave a review on my story. And even though by chapter 4 he was discovered again, that doesn't mean Keyleigh won't forget about him again later...
Take care!
Date: July 15 2019 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
Taylor did sound enticing, but I’m glad he’s still with Kayleigh. I like that she’s almost treating him like a partner, and I’d like to see where that goes.
On the other hand, if you do write about the alternative, I’d really only like it if Taylor knows he’s a person. I’d like to see how she treats him. Anyways, keep up the good writing!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
I'm also interested in exploring the dynamic between the main character and Kayleigh, as this odd arrangement starts to continue into the future. Maybe one day they'll be more than boss and assistant.
As for the eventual bonus with Taylor, I'm still not sure how I want to go about it. Right now, I'm leaning toward keeping her unaware, but that's still up in the air.
Take care!
Date: July 12 2019 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Amazing story, especially the forgetful nature of Kayleigh. Would be interesting to see him unknowingly taken out of the office or if another person ends up using him.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Glad you like Kayleigh. I wanted her to be forgetful for sure, so things could remain interesting and erratic for the main character. And with the latest chapter, we'll see a new character use him (along with Kayleigh at the same time). So I hope you enjoy that!
[Report This]Date: July 11 2019 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this first chapter so much, to the point where, after literally a decade of lurking I made an account to add a review. Would love to see more chapters around the 2-3ft size, maybe Kayleigh unknowingly trampling on his crotch area.
(p.s. love your textadventure, one of my favourites ever and how I originally found you - keep up the great work!)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
And I'm happy that you made an account just to review one of my stories! And with chapter 3 (now out) you will see some more interaction at 2 ft going forward. And I'll definitely take your suggestion into consideration.
And I'm glad you liked the text adventure! That one is/was/will always be tons of work, so I appreciate the kind words.
[Report This]Date: July 10 2019 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 2
Excellent chapter Kayleigh is great. A tall giantess lawyer with sexy attitude, what's not to love
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
I'm glad that you like Kayleigh. And she's definitely meant to give off that vibe. I also wanted to push a big difference between how she treats the main character normally (super kind) with how she treats him once she thinks that he's just her dummy (super aggressive and cruel).
Date: July 10 2019 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
This story is amazing so far! Love the foot/toe play! But, then again, you’re always good at that!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Glad you're enjoying everying and I hope you continue to enjoy the story. I like feet/toe interaction the best, so that tends to be what I excel with when writing.
[Report This]Date: July 09 2019 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome story, great characters and setting I hope you continue with it
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Glad you're liking everything so far. I'll definitely continue with this one. I've already been having a lot of fun writing it.