[Report This]Date: May 15 2024 6:51 AM Title: Naomi's Destruction
Screw it, commenting one more time to make it 69.
[Report This]Date: May 15 2024 6:37 AM Title: Naomi's Destruction
This is one of my most favorite stories, Naomi is absolutely brutal. Have you thought about continuing this? I know it's been 4 years, but I know you got something cooking.
Date: March 25 2024 1:25 PM Title: Performance Review
What an incredible story! Thank you for sharing it. It's had a significant impact on motivating me to start writing
[Report This]Date: March 20 2023 11:19 AM Title: Pressing Engagement
Amazing! 👏👏
Date: April 29 2021 8:38 PM Title: Performance Review
Great story , I normaly do not like crush stories. This one has a great theme and strong character development
Date: March 09 2021 8:47 PM Title: Performance Review
You need to give us the story of the aftermath of the whole thing. I really enjoyed the story. This is my first time leaving a review I think.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I just might. Been thinking about this story lately.
Date: February 26 2021 12:08 PM Title: Naomi's Destruction
Quando tivermos mais ???
Date: August 17 2020 1:49 AM Title: Naomi's Destruction
Whew! This was a great story. The worldbuilding, the characters, the fetish fuel. The ending did seem a bit abrupt but it works. There are stories I read that I come to like for the worldbuilding more than the fetish fuel and this is certainly one of them. I feel like an eqiplogue would be good though, just to see how things turned out. I bet the tiny government and citizens are less than pleased about all the destruction and death and there is the matter of the other giants too.
The size changing technology has a lot of potential, especially now that Mary is in charge of the company and wants to help people. That in itself seems like quite the uphill battle and could be a story in and of itself. Nontheless, this was a great story and had me excited start to finish. Good job!
[Report This]Date: August 17 2020 1:38 AM Title: Naomi's Destruction
Wasn't expecting that...
[Report This]Date: August 16 2020 8:09 PM Title: Naomi's Destruction
I didn't see that ending coming. It seems like Naomi was getting really whiney in this one. She has so much self pity and yet absolutely no feelings for her victims. Thank God someone took her down a notch. But I will also say that I will miss Naomi and this story. It was so well written and one of the few giantess stories on this site.
It was a hell of a ride, thank you for writing. And hopefully maybe until next time!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and the stars! I had a couple ideas for the ending I wrestled with, and this was the one that I went with. I was hoping people wouldn't expect it, I didn't want a typical ending... thanks for all your comments along the way too!
[Report This]Date: August 16 2020 3:30 PM Title: Naomi's Destruction
Though I have not left any review of your story until today, I have followed it since the beginning. Seeing it coming to an end actually makes me miss it already, it is among the best ones in recent times... One definitely should not take good stories for granted...
The lack of an extended epilogue is, however, a detrimental factor. The plot is cut short abruptly, leaving many questions unanswered (for example: how Mary's and Naomi's aging process is affected by changes that affected them? Are there any further implications?).
Perhaps, having already created an interesting setting, you could consider another story in the same universe? There seems to be lots of things to explore and obviously an epilogue will not suffice to do so.
Personally, I care more about the story than 'true' fetish content, so you have at least one reader who is actually interested characters' future devlopments; do not make hasty assumptions!
Best Regards,
C
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading man! I agree that the ending is abrupt, I'm sorry about that! I had some things planned for the characters... but I thought I'd leave it up to the reader's imagination. I wrote a bunch of stuff, but I really prefer the swift ending it currently has. I do like the thought of returning to this world... same characters or different... like you said, there's a lot to explore. Maybe these characters will springboard to some new characters to move the story forward.
Thanks for leaving a review and leaving the stars, I appreciate it. Hearing that you enjoyed it and miss it already makes me feel like I accomplished something (even if it's just a size story on the internet).
[Report This]Date: July 27 2020 4:27 PM Title: Giant Little Sister
Nice with a different perspective... although, seemed a bit short.
Date: July 20 2020 7:30 AM Title: Performance Review
Being a teenager, I bet that Sasha would be easily brainwashed by Naomi's mindset, becoming more cruel than her "teacher".
Date: July 19 2020 11:56 PM Title: Lessons Learned
It looks like turning into a giant and the power it affords over the tiny world is just too arousing. I can't tell if Naomi genuinely wants a friend or if she's just manipulating everyone for fun. Mary is pretending to be allies with both sides and is clearly enjoying herself despite her second thoughts, and poor William just can't catch a break. Keep it up! This story is fun :)
Author's Response:
Thanks man! I think Naomi really wants a freind but she just doesn't know how to be one. She hasn't had one since growing. And she's only let her hatred of the tinies fester and grow. I'm glad the story is fun! I'm definitely not trying to win any writing awards, for sure! But if someone enjoys what I write, then that makes me happy!
Date: July 15 2020 1:56 AM Title: Lessons Learned
It's kind of weird how many bizzarre pieces of tech Naomi has. Like this chapter she has a portal that makes someone massive, but only for a period of time. That's a super specific piece of tech.
Author's Response:
Yes, it's the portal that was used for Mary's job in chapter 4, which was posted almost a year ago... so it's been a while since it was mentioned. That's a writing mistake on my part for not making that clear. And, in the next chapter, you will see why Sasha began shrinking.
And thank you for reading and leaving a comment!
[Report This]Date: July 12 2020 12:49 PM Title: Lessons Learned
Unintentional destruction is my fave. Nice work.
Author's Response:
One of mine too, haha. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: July 04 2020 5:38 AM Title: Fresh Start
The plot thickens
Author's Response:
Yes it does! Hope you like it!
Date: July 04 2020 2:20 AM Title: Fresh Start
Urgghh, William is honestly my least favorite character XD
Just have Mary and Naomi subjugate him under their feet, or just eat him already.
Author's Response:
Haha, yeah mine too. I never designed him to be like-able... so I guess I've succeeded? And as much as I'd like to write him out like you mentioned, I'm going to give the story a proper ending and wrap things up in the next 2 or 3 chapters.
[Report This]Date: July 03 2020 9:04 PM Title: Fresh Start
Looks like things are about to get real. I’m still a big Naomi fan, but Mary...not so much. Tbh I think William would be better off with Naomi. At least Naomi knows how she is and can be reasoned with to an extent. Mary is just arrogant at this point.
Author's Response:
I considered that idea, but I feel sorry for Mary...
Date: June 09 2020 1:45 PM Title: Performance Review
God I love this story so much!! The last two chapters are pure gold! Mary using her size to play with her little husband and feeling that power was conveyed so well! Kinda really hoping Sasha gets her turn being big even if it's not permanent!
Author's Response:
I'm really happy you like it! Thanks for reading and I hope you continue liking it!