Reviewer: geeman Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26 2020 11:17 AM Title: Mary's Nightmare

Can't take back deaths. Only move forward. But Mary should be better than this, she has a point of reference with Humans. Naomi at least you could say well she was a Giant from fairly early on. Is it a case of misplaced power? Great chapter as always.

Author's Response:

Misplaced power indeed! Thanks for the kind words!

Reviewer: meereten01 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2020 2:36 PM Title: Mary’s Fun

Thank you for writing an actual giantess story on this site. The small details of Mary being a giantess like the cleaning squad and the  earthquakes make the story so unique and a stand out compared to the bulk of just shrinking stories out here on this site!

Seems like Mary is turning out to be quite the cruel giantess. Maybe if William was a bit more excited for his wife and embraced the idea a bit more, stuff would be better. I would be thrilled if my wife became a giantess I think.

It's also nice that Naomi has a friend finally. Maybe this will dampen her cruel tendencies a bit and make her remember her humanity.

Thanks for writing and until next time!

 

 

Author's Response:

Thanks for liking it! Yeah, William should have definately handled it better. But I think they're on good terms now, so things should be alot better for him.

Reviewer: geeman Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03 2020 3:48 AM Title: Mary's Bath

Absolute power corrupts absolutely. It didn't take long for her to go off the deep end huh? Even in front of her kid like that! We don't even know if Naomi would be be bad enough to do that, she has no kids after all. For all we know she'd be the type to be on her best behavior in front of her kids. It'd be funny if Mary got SO bad even Naomi looked good in comparison.

Author's Response:

No doubt Mary has been corrupted. Now it's just a matter of how far will she go? It didn't take long... but it also didn't take much for her to go off the deep end either. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Coal11 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2020 10:08 PM Title: Naomi's Surprise

I really loved this chapter and how Mary's story unfolds.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I hope you continue to like how Mary slowly devolves... Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: whackamole1 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2020 4:43 AM Title: Apologies and Realizations

I don't believe Naomi really had any remorse for her massacre. If she did she would have vomited out Michael who no doubt would still be alive in her stomach. Human acids aren't that fast acting or strong, so assuming he doesn't drown or suffocate, he's probably still alive inside Naomi during her bath which is a pretty scary thought. William might be morbidly looking up Michael's vitals from the transponder to see how long he can last inside her. It would be interesting to get a POV narrative from a swallowed character. Poor Michael, he had the most passive role in the mutiny so he gets singled out for the most drawn out fate. The others were killed relatively quickly by crushing when Naomi was acting out of anger, but she singled Michael out for the most for the most drawn out ordeal. Granted, she gave him a chance, but his indecisiveness fed her need for power tripping and dominance, and what could be a bigger power trip than swallowing some "useless piece of shit" and shitting them out later. Naomi seems to really detest indecisiveness and an inability to stand up to her. It seems to bother her more than anything else. I wonder if that was the lesson she was trying to teach Max? When she wouldn't let the workers in the bathtub go unless he made up his mind and stood up to her.

Despite her killing so many mutinous employees by crushing, and swallowing she states "I don't want people to think that I mistreat my employees" in the last chapter, and in this chapter she talks about having to sign "accidental death forms both strongly implying that there are limits to her behaviour and some accountability required. It would fascinating to get the perspective of those who have to clean up after Naomi and manage the fallout. With so many crushed employees how do they put an acceptable spin onthat in the official report? How do they organize and seperate the bodies for the families? How do they minimize and sugarcoat Naomi swallowing Michael alive? And are they obligated to get Michael's body back to his family after it exits Naomi's digestive tract? Afterall, someone is going to have to provide an acceptable account of the events of the last chapter and a facade of accountability and cooperation. Getting the details and perspective of those who handle Naomi's worst moments and how they handle them and clean up for her when she does bad things would be fascinating.

Naomi has a regular but huge bathroom. There must be some limitations on water usage otherwise she could use up too much of the local water supply. Limits on how many bath's she can take, how many times she can flush the toilet, can't just keep the sink running etc.

Is maintenance's job maintaing Naomi's body? The maintenance team is located in her bathroom, every giant bathroom fixture has staircases for regular people, even the toilet, and instead of simply wiping off her own feet during her bath, she has 40 people clean her feet for her. It seems like the maintenance team is there for her power tripping. Why else would she have all that human effort go towards something she could easily do herself with just a few wipes. This and every fixture having staircases for a huge team of her employees is telling.  Although her bathroom maintenance team probably genuinely comes in handy in the very rare occasions when she needs a hard to reach, or gross spot cleaned.

In addition to her power tripping Naomi seems to show an exhibitionist streak. She has 40 people in her bathroom crew work on her feet while she bathes. They have surely seen and done more for her. Naomi doesn't need them around, but she keeps them around, and there's no way they and Max didn't see her naked. But her nudity doesn't fluster her or her regular maintenance crew. Max on the other hand. Naomi didn't plan on Max joining her bathroom maintenance crew but she for sure is going to capitaize on it big time. She won't kill him, but she seems to get a kick out of pushing his buttons, grooming and pushing him into presumably becoming her little protege or boy toy. She must know that he has a fetish for her huge body, what it can do, and it's power, and having him as her bathroom attendant is going to make seducing and molding him so easy. She'll be there flashing him whenever she needs to bathe, relieve herself, or have a sensitive area cleaned, and he'll be there witnessing every intimate detail, and getting a thrill out of it even if he might try to keep it a secret. It's his job now, and I'm sure she'll enjoy using her body to dominate and seduce him both physically and mentally. She seems to know she can do  anything in front of him or to him and he'll be turned on. He was even aroused when she nearly drowned those workers in front of him. She seems to be trying to seduce and mold the whole family, but Max, being young, male, and having a giantess fetish already, is going to be her special prize.

Author's Response:

Michael's fate was very ironic, indeed. But because of her God complex and others inability to read her, his chances of survival were slim. Like you say, she really detests indecisiveness and not standing up to her. But if you're tiny, you just want to make the decision that will please her, and how can you possibly know what that is? And wouldn't you be terrified to oppose or stand up to someone that much bigger than you? Haha. And I agree with you also that she truly doesn't feel remorse. I think she lies to herself and tells herself that she does... but obviously not true. One of the many issues wrong with her.

A perspective from a tiny that is swallowed would be cool. I haven't written something like that before and it's something I'd like to try. And yes, a tiny person's perspective of the carnage and results of her actions is something I've wanted to do. I did that for a much earlier chapter, but deleted that scene because I felt it slowed the story down. Maybe I'll rewrite it into a future chatper. Both good ideas!

As far as how this world works, I've put very little effort into expalining it. It all makes sense in my head, but I feel incredibly bored writing about it. I imiagine the water for the bath as having a limite, and it must be filtered after each use so she can re-use it and not deplete the cities water source. A shower function would be very limited for that reason. I imagine chefs preparing meals at their regular size, and then she just enlarges it with a sizer. But I honestly haven't thought about the toilet or bathroom issues as far as logistics are concerned...

The maintenance crew is for her body, and cleaning up after her... not really anything engineering wise. So you are absolutely correct. And yes, again, the only reason she has it is because she can. It's a power move. They can be more detailed. But it would be so much easier and faster to do things yourself. But no tingle of excitment for her in doing things that way.

I always enjoy your reviews, thanks for commenting. It makes me think about the story and character developements alot. I admit, there are a few chapters where I got a little sloppy with that. But your reviews inspire me to address certain things from time to time. And I think the biggest take away for me this time is to do some perspective writing. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: titantonic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2020 11:44 AM Title: Naomi's Massacre

Nice chapter. A return to form for Naomi. Reminds me of an earlier chapter when she squished the widow lol

Author's Response:

Yes it was, thank you!

Reviewer: titantonic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03 2020 4:31 PM Title: Apologies and Realizations

Nice chapter! Especially like the teasing!

Author's Response:

Thank you alot!

Reviewer: combine45 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28 2020 9:15 PM Title: Naomi's Massacre

Liked getting anoter dose of spicy action from full mean Naomi. A bit of interesting character development in this one as well. I think William is developing a bit of rapport and subtle attraction towards Naomi. You did a great job earlier setting up the emotions of him to feel guilty for betraying her and accept his punishment. Now he seems to be judging others for tryign to betray her. This triangle is a very tense situation for all 3 of them. 

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, man. I want Will to feel very confilicted between hating her and feeling sorry for her. And in the midst of all that, like you said, some attraction maybe? It will be interesting to see him deal with his feelings toward Naomi and how that affects his relationship with Mary. So we'll see what developes. Hope you continue to enjoy.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22 2020 10:49 PM Title: Mary's Loyalty

What are you people doing to sweet Naomi?

Author's Response:

Haha! It's not going to end well for them I don't think.

Reviewer: titantonic Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20 2019 11:19 AM Title: High-Heel Workday

Wow, I loved this chapter, it was written extremely well! Definitely your best one yet. Can't wait to read more.

And yeah, I don't know what that guys problem is. He's just a troll.

Author's Response: Thanks!