Date: February 18 2020 9:15 AM Title: The Big Day
Really hoping for another chapter. I love this series and concept so much. This and Hidden Worlds are the two best stories on here. Please please keep going with this! What’s in the box???
Date: August 25 2019 9:46 AM Title: Sloppy
I'm really hoping this hiatus you're on means another juicy chapter is coming, bigger and better then ever!
I also hope you're okay and nothing shitty has happened in your life.
You're an amazing writer and I hope to see more from you!
Date: August 05 2019 5:05 AM Title: The Big Day
Sorry! Totally thought I hit send on my review days ago, looks like it never showed up! Loved this chapter! It really made me want to see what's in the box! Thinking back to where we know Zayna was last, I can only imagine where she ended up!! Must have been an hours long ordiel for her this last chapter! Hopefully we get some real slow motion descriptions of these scenes, I'd love to see all this from her point of view and what's running in her head! You are a fantastic writer and I don't mean to rush you. If every one of your chapters comes out as good as they have been I'd want you to take your time for quality over quantity. Don't feel rushed because of us, I know Ill be patiently waiting till the end of time for more of these chapters :)
Date: July 31 2019 2:49 AM Title: Sloppy
I can´t wait to see Zayna´s PoV now.
Excited for the package as well.
Date: July 29 2019 6:40 PM Title: The Big Day
We still love your story and would love to hear more from it! Get that writting bug back and share your talet with us! You're so good at this keep it up! :)
Author's Response:
Hope you enjoy the next chapter, though it is a little shorter I feel. Thanks for the kind words!
Date: July 17 2019 7:57 AM Title: The unknown
Another fantastic chapter! Well worth the wait, your details are astounding. Waiting on baited breath for the next wonderful instalment
Date: July 16 2019 2:49 AM Title: The Big Day
Man, this a really good story! Keep it up :)
Author's Response:
I appreciate it. The hard part is just finding time to write, I am also enjoying the story.
Date: July 16 2019 2:03 AM Title: The unknown
This was an amazing chapter, can´t wait to see what is going to happen next.
Date: July 15 2019 5:26 AM Title: A new world
I am thinking she got stomped on here.
That or she got smothered with the shirt.
I am wishing she was picked up with the panties though :P
Date: July 10 2019 8:24 PM Title: A new world
YESSSS! So glad you didn't abandon this story.
Can't wait to see what else is in store, you promiced a taste and a delicious taste you gave! I'll be counting the minutes till part 2!
Date: July 01 2019 2:04 PM Title: The Big Day
You havn't forgotten us have you? I've been checking daily for an update and I'm scared you've gone the way of Oops' story and stopped updating. Say it isn't so! You're so talented at this
Author's Response:
Still alive and well, and plan on continuing. Just had a life event and working to get back into some sort of rhythm. Once I do ill get some additional chapters out. Just may be slow rolling, sorry bout that.
Date: June 26 2019 11:04 AM Title: The Big Day
Off the top of my head I can think of a few things. Maybe Z ordered a microscopic city or something to better understand subhuman culture. Like an ant farm but a mini city instead. Just thinking about Rachel's power trip over that drives me wild. Or maybe it's a tiny communicater or microscope type thing that lets her see subhumans clearly. Imagine her looking at the subhumans on her body, seeing her distorted body huge against their backs.
Date: June 23 2019 9:22 AM Title: Play Time
Another good one! I can't wait to see what's in the package and ESPECIALLY what Zayna is going though. 45 min is a LONG time for her, can't wait to see where she is and what shes up to. Thanks for the chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks! 45 mins is going to be like 3 hours so i have to do my best to keep that in mind. Next chapter will be tricky to write.
Also, i am also curious to see what's in the packae because i have no idea what im going to put in it. Suggestions are welcome and will be considered as valuable input :)
[Report This]Date: June 21 2019 12:58 PM Title: The Big Day
Love it so much! It would be a shame if she wasn’t even recognized when her friend began trying to bring her back after everything :3
Author's Response:
Glad you like it! I have some intersting plans, and will continue to try and throw curballs in the story. Planning on keeping it unaware for sure.
Date: June 21 2019 7:02 AM Title: A show for the wrong audience
Another amazing chapter! Again, I love LOVE the detail in this. I love how Rachael seems to be intoxicated a bit with fucking with her roomate. I love how Zayna miiiight have made a mistake in choosing her and is now feeling 'goddess' type feelings for her. I can't wait for Zayna to experience Rachaels cluelessness first hand.
Side note: Don't worry about uploading daily. Yes, it's a wish come true seeing a new chapter every day and I'm always chomping at the bit for a new chapter after I read it, but I also would hate for you to get burned out as I see alot of writers do on here. Take your time uploading! Your quality shows.
Date: June 20 2019 12:38 PM Title: You're in for it
Oh hells yes. I can tell already this is going to be one of my top 5 stories on here. I love that you're kind of retreading OOPS's story but also at the same time making it all your own. I love the details in here and I LOVE that you're adding different perspectives. I'm a little confused as to how Rachel thinks her friend already got to the cube on her desk but I assume that's because Rachael doen't care enough to understand that Zayna just shrank right in front of her. I can not WAIT for the next chapter. Seriously, this is incredible, don't drop off the face of the earth and quit writing like all good writers do on here, keep it coming!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! So to your confusion, I didnt do a great job of addressing the time lapse but what I was going for was time was flying by for Rachel since she was consumed by her phone. I was also going for a passive shrink where there wasnt any noise associated with it. So the plan was for Zayna to start walking to the desk and shrink while Rachel wouldn't have know anything otherwise since she wasnt paying attention.
Hope that helps lol. Gonna do my best to keep going. Chapter 3 is basically done but I have to make a few tweeks. Should be tonight or tomorrow my time (EST).
[Report This]Date: June 20 2019 2:42 AM Title: You're in for it
Lovely new addition.
Feel free to change the perspective, you are doing great.
Rachel seems to enjoy how large, she is to the subhumans.
Looking forward to the other side of the coin now.
Author's Response:
Im glad you're enjoying the perspectives. I love the unaware aspect from both sides when i read stories. Rachel is just realizing that she enjoys the difference in size. However, my goal is to shy away from that feeling and keep her feelings relatively nuetral towards subhumans. I dont want her becoming any more intentional in her actions than just having a good time. In otherwords, i want her actions to be the same as if there were no tinies, for the most part. There will still be flare.
Date: June 19 2019 6:54 AM Title: The Big Day
So, i responded to a review, made a bunch of spelling errors, tried to delete the reply and ended up delting the review lol. Not sure I know how to work this site sometimes. To the person who's review I deleted Im sorry. I was going to say thanks so much for the feedback! I'm glad I could match the energy of the other story. Here's to planning on finishing this one.
Date: June 18 2019 11:17 PM Title: The Big Day
Starting out nicely.
And i can only imagine that testing suit could turn into a problem in the future :P
Author's Response:
Its definitely possible. Not sure to wuat extent, but we'll see. Thanks for the review :)