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Reviewer: MacroGod Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02 2019 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 10

SO. FUCKING. HOT! @,@



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That's the aim.

Reviewer: carnage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2019 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 10

Just caught up on the last few chapters. This is so well written. I loved the spit flooding scene so much. And this chapter, where she gets Brandon to give in, was pure gold.



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Glad to hear it delivered.

Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2019 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 9

HOLY FUCKING SHIT! This is officially one of the hottest fucking stories I’ve ever read on here! I can’t wait for the next chapter now! I wonder if Nicole is ever even going to acknowledge the presence of her two new worshipers either, especially since one of them just happens to be the “big” brother that she just loves to torment… ;) Anyways, great work!



Author's Response:

We may just see soon enough. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2019 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 8

HOLY FUCK! This just keeps getting hotter and hotter!! omfg!

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Date: September 19 2019 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 7

HOLY FUCKING SHIT! This story is so fucking hot it's unreal! 

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Date: September 19 2019 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 6

HOT!!

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Date: September 19 2019 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 5

What a goddess! O_O

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Date: September 19 2019 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 4

HOLY FUCK! I can't wait to see what she plans to do with them now... ;) 

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Date: September 18 2019 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 3

This just keeps getting more and more interesting 👀 

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Date: September 18 2019 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 2

Great story so far! omg!

Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2019 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love where this is going already... ;)

Reviewer: officerkc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2019 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 9

This is such a fun story. I also love micro city stories. 



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Glad to hear

Reviewer: Hongo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2019 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please

More

This is one of the best stories I've ever read. I love micro city stories and with this one you just nailed it. Really hoping you continue.

Would love to see some footplay in future chapters :)



Author's Response:

There's more to come, though only a couple chapters. The commissioner didn't request footplay for this one, but the ending should still be fun.

Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23 2019 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 8

I'm really hoping Nicole becomes aware of the two of them being tiny, I'd love to see how that would shake things up

Author's Response:

Who's to say she's not already aware?

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2019 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 8

Nicole should make it to your regular rotation one day.



Author's Response:

She definitely has similar interests to my cast.

Reviewer: kkbbkk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2019 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

By far my favorite story out there right now!! Keep up the good work. Hope to see more soon. Really wish stories of this quality and dynamic would show up more often!

Author's Response:

Glad to hear. More will be up soon.

Reviewer: kkbbkk Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07 2019 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

By far my favorite story out there right now!! Keep up the good work. Hope to see more soon. Really wish stories of this quality and dynamic would show up more often!

Author's Response:

Thanks; more is on the way.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2019 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 7

I love Nicole.



Author's Response:

She's doing her job.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2019 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 6

I'd love to hear more about her finding her abilities but this feels more like a Jacksmith sister!



Author's Response:

She definitely has some qualities in common with my non-commission sisters.

Reviewer: Gigatennisstar Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2019 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 5

Here we are once again.

So far this story has been a slowburn, setting up the environment and building up Nicole. It's very enjoyable in that regard. I very much like the care and attention to detail you put into this story. The detail you have in this chapter really brings out the size difference and it's definitely caught my attention. I can't wait to read more from this title.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. A big part of this one is definitely about the sheer awe of their size difference and the power she holds over the model town, though things will get more direct by the end.

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