[Report This]Date: November 24 2022 6:44 PM Title: Trust falls with predators
Another good story. In my opinion, the first chapter is the best - I always loved tricked prey.
Not a huge fan of too much sexual content (though I like a little), so the rest of the story didn't hold as much appeal, but that's just me. I'm sure others would appreciate it more.
Author's Response:
These were the first stories I ever wrote, primarily motivated by an annoyance at how little sexual content there was in some of the other vore stories I'd read, so yeah I went a bit overboard with the sexual content on these lol.
Date: May 29 2019 3:03 AM Title: Trust falls with predators
Not the height. I’m talking about the involvement of the male giant when the story is tagged as F/f, F/m, and (counting the title) F/fm, and also isn’t tagged with the Giant or Couples categories, giving no warning of that at all.
Author's Response:
Oh there's a couple category? I'm pretty new to the site so I hadn't seen that tag. I'll add that thanks along with a MF/F tag.
Chapters 4 & 5 are (almost) pure F/F if you enjoy the writing but want to skip any couples type content.
Date: May 27 2019 4:30 PM Title: Trust falls with predators
The writing is good, but please use the proper size role tags. That first scene went from a turn-on to a hard turn-off really quickly.
Author's Response:
How do you mean? It's tagged as "Shrink doll 6-12", which is exactly what Amy's height is. Elly is the pred, not the prey.
[Report This]Date: May 17 2019 3:02 AM Title: Trust falls with predators
I really liked this story so far! I can’t wait to see where you go with this! Just one question, will there be an alternative version where it’s kinda like a prank on Amy or something..?
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm happy to hear you're enjoying it~
Currently I don't have any plans for alternative versions. I'm keeping the non-fatal stuff for my livestream story series. For this one, Elly is far too focused on dominating Amy to ever let her out of Elly's belly.
Date: May 16 2019 1:33 AM Title: Thoughtful preds ensure prey have company [F/MF vore]
Love the idea of having several tinies in her stomach ^/^
Author's Response:
Oh you might want to check out my ISwallowThings livestream story then, as in chapter 3 (currently half-written, will post it this weekend), Chloe is currently walking around campus, collecting up any tiny who volunteers to come with her. 5 women and 1 lucky little man, all to see just how much she can actually fit~
Date: May 12 2019 3:20 PM Title: Trust falls with predators
Really love the concept, a new world order of coexistence between normal people and tinies and resort to vore whether for fun or accidental. I like your writing, though it's not criticism but just my preference, the M/f and the more sex vs vore is kind of a turn off for me. Still looking forward to more though, hope to see more F/m or F/f stuff in this universe without giant dicks lol...
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback! I'm really glad you liked it <3
I really love this setting too, where vore is still taboo, but sometimes things happen, whether by accident or "accident." I really love the idea of Elly going about her life in the next few days normally while Amy's still inside. Studying, shopping, sleeping, all while Amy is digesting.
As for the sex vs vore haha yeah I ended up with far more sexual content than I intended, especially in chapter 2. It'd been intended to be more prey humiliation, but Amy didn't really get mentioned as much as I planned. Chapter 3 has some F/M as Elly tricks a tiny man into meeting up with Amy "up close." Let me know if you have any thoughts on where I might go with it in chapter 4. I'm not sure what to do with Amy's tiny friends Elly traps, or whether to focus more on Amy's digestion.