[Report This]Date: August 24 2023 12:16 PM Title: Making Plans
Though explicit incest isn't really my thing, I will say you created a very interesting daddy-daughter relationship. The moral dilemma was fun to read as well
[Report This]Date: June 18 2020 2:11 AM Title: Making Plans
Great read. Thanks for posting
[Report This]Date: March 28 2020 7:18 AM Title: Making Plans
This story was full of pleasant surprises. I've always loved the idea of little ones being stowed away within someone. But what really brought this story to life was the loving, and largely innocent relationship between the two characters at the start. The fact that neither wanted to take advantage or mistreat the other. Only served to make what was to come all the more incredible. As both began to lose themselves to their desires. Was really impressed with the way that you described things from the father's perspective. And needless to say, would love to see a sequel to this story. Though I'd understand if it wasn't in the cards. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the great review! I'm glad you liked the way the characters interacted, I wanted their relationship to seem as normal as possible from the start. I'm glad you liked the descriptions too! It was fun trying to tell both sides of the story from only the tiny's perspective. This might be my best reviewed story, so I'm not above some kind of continuation, we shall see. Thank you again for reading!
[Report This]Date: January 03 2020 9:07 PM Title: Making Plans
Wow! It’s been so long since your last work. I’m glad I visited again. I love the plot and the situations (having the chance to see the host fully clothed in realtime while being actually inside). Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm also glad you visited again! I know I don't write often but I try not to write unless I think I've got a good idea. Thank you again for reading!
[Report This]Date: May 27 2019 9:41 PM Title: Disembarking
SO FUCKING HOT! 🤤
[Report This]Date: May 24 2019 12:00 AM Title: Moving About The Cabin
holy fuck O_O
[Report This]Date: May 23 2019 1:57 PM Title: At The Airport
This just keeps getting hotter and hotter! ;)
[Report This]Date: May 23 2019 1:35 PM Title: Making Plans
Interesting introduction! Can’t wait to see where this goes... ;)
Date: May 17 2019 5:38 AM Title: Making Plans
It's over? well love the story. hope you do more.
[Report This]Date: May 13 2019 10:07 AM Title: Disembarking
Nicce conclusion! Take your time coming back to this, gives you plenty of time to think of what you can do next :D
Date: May 12 2019 12:10 PM Title: Making Plans
After my last comment I couldn't help wonder. As Ashley didnt originally expect her dad to join her, What kind of wardrobe did she pack. Is she a conservative dresser or was she planning to let loose. Short skirts? Did she pack pjs. Is she a full bathing suit girl or bikini thong. Does she drink much. So many questions I cant wait to see answered.
Author's Response: Great suggestions! I'm taking a little break to recharge and work on some other stories I had in mind, but I'll be keeping this in mind for future chapters. Until then I can tell you that Ashley didn't plan on taking her dad along until her bags were already packed, she's a single girl on vacation at the beach and packed accordingly, and I'm pretty sure she likes to sleep in the nude :p Thanks so much for all your comments and your great ideas!
Date: May 12 2019 5:08 AM Title: Making Plans
Im enjoying the pace but really looking forward to seeing more from Ashleys perspective and how she is struggling with the dilemma of how it feels having a little person in her but also its her dad. Im wondering where he will sleep when they get to hotel room didn't seem like the thought about that, underwear or bikini bottoms seen like the only blanket sized items I can think of lol. Would be nice to see how she interacts in hotel and beach etc now. Will she still try to cover up and be appropriate or is she going to think, ah well he's been in my pussy why cover up. Can't wait to see
Date: May 11 2019 6:25 PM Title: Moving About The Cabin
great new chapter mate! Yes being tiny on a plane would be awesome. Hiding and walking under row after row of seats filled with giant ladies stretching their toes and tall, busy stewardesses stomping down the isles. >.<
Date: May 10 2019 4:16 PM Title: Making Plans
uh oh! She better not drink too much ginger ale! :D wouldnt want to be misplaced or lost in the plane toilet cubicle. Great writing!
Author's Response: True enough! The idea of being tiny on a plane always seemed so neat to me. All these bored women with nowhere to go, surely one of them wouldn't mind a tiny guy to keep her distracted? Thank you for your review!
Date: May 10 2019 3:47 PM Title: Making Plans
Not a fan of the incest genre, but the way you write is too good not to read. I really enjoyed the way you captured just how in control she is by being the only person on the planet who knows where he is. And how people likely stared at her curves but would have no idea what’s buried deep inside. that’s a concept I tried adding in my story too. Anyway, looking forward to seeing what comes next!
Author's Response: That's a heck of a compliment, thank you! I've always loved that idea, sometimes when I'm in public I'll see an attractive woman and think "What if?". I'm really glad you're enjoying it so far, things are about to get interesting so stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: May 10 2019 12:53 PM Title: Making Plans
A phone conversation between the two of them! Terrific! I'm very curious if she will reveil her developing arousal. Or would she ask him to perform certain moves? Great story so far with great interaction! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Communication is important :) I like the idea of Ashley making requests, I might have to get that into a future chapter. Thank you for your review!
[Report This]Date: May 10 2019 7:47 AM Title: Making Plans
Great dynamic between the Ashley and her Dad, can't wait to see where you go from here!
Personally hoping Ashley talks her Dad into letting her take him home with her after her vacation, whether that means keeping him in her or not I'm fine either way lol
Author's Response: Thank you for saying so, I'm glad you're enjoying it! I like to keep my stories on the shorter side, and for now I'm focusing on their trip out and maybe what happens during their vacation. Though if it continues past that I'd think that both of them were wanting to spend more time together, maybe Ashley will take over as her dad's caretaker? And now that they've broken down this barrier it could even become a regular part of their lives.
Date: May 09 2019 9:25 PM Title: Making Plans
Great story, not enough father daughter stories in this genre. I like the dynamic that it is at the moment not overtly sexual. Looking forward ti what is to come.
Author's Response: I completely agree with you, it's a fun subject to explore. I'm glad you're enjoying the pacing too, a new chapter should be dropping soon!
Date: May 09 2019 2:54 PM Title: Making Plans
please, more
I like the detailed description of the story
I'm sorry, my english is bad
Author's Response: There is more to come, thank you for your review!